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请你以“My dream school”为题，根据思维导图，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下你的梦想校园。
注意事项：1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数70左右，短文首句的部分和句尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My dream school
My dream school is
My dream school is really great.
请你以“My dream school”为题，根据思维导图，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下你的梦想校园。
注意事项：1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数70左右，短文首句的部分和句尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My dream school
My dream school is
not big, but it's very modern and clean.
There're three classroom buildings in our school. There are only twenty students in each class. We have three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.
At noon, we have one hour to have lunch. We can also listen to music at lunchtime.
There are all kinds of clubs to join after school.
We can also play games together.
My dream school is really great.
答案
One possible version:
My dream school
My dream school is not big, but it's very modern and clean.
There're three classroom buildings in our school. There are only twenty students in each class. We have three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. At noon, we have one hour to have lunch. We can also listen to music at lunchtime. There are all kinds of clubs to join after school. We can also play games together.
My dream school is really great.
(70 words)
My dream school
My dream school is not big, but it's very modern and clean.
There're three classroom buildings in our school. There are only twenty students in each class. We have three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. At noon, we have one hour to have lunch. We can also listen to music at lunchtime. There are all kinds of clubs to join after school. We can also play games together.
My dream school is really great.
(70 words)
解析
【分析】本题是英语书面表达题，要求以“My dream school”为题，根据思维导图的buildings、lunch、classes、others四个要点，结合给出的首尾句完成短文，需覆盖所有要点，语句通顺，词数约70。解题思路：先确定开头的基础描述，再分别围绕教学楼、班级情况、午餐安排、课后活动展开内容，最后衔接给定尾句，确保要点齐全、逻辑连贯。
【解析】首先使用给定开头“My dream school is not big, but it's very modern and clean.”；接着依次描述教学楼：There're three classroom buildings in our school；班级情况：There are only twenty students in each class. We have three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon；午餐安排：At noon, we have one hour to have lunch. We can also listen to music at lunchtime；其他活动：There are all kinds of clubs to join after school. We can also play games together；最后衔接给定尾句“My dream school is really great.”，保证内容完整、语句通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
My dream school
My dream school is not big, but it's very modern and clean.
There're three classroom buildings in our school. There are only twenty students in each class. We have three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. At noon, we have one hour to have lunch. We can also listen to music at lunchtime. There are all kinds of clubs to join after school. We can also play games together.
My dream school is really great.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文、校园话题写作
【点评】本题考查学生围绕指定话题及要点进行英语写作的能力，要求覆盖思维导图的全部内容，语句通顺连贯，难度适中，能有效锻炼学生的英语表达能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先使用给定开头“My dream school is not big, but it's very modern and clean.”；接着依次描述教学楼：There're three classroom buildings in our school；班级情况：There are only twenty students in each class. We have three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon；午餐安排：At noon, we have one hour to have lunch. We can also listen to music at lunchtime；其他活动：There are all kinds of clubs to join after school. We can also play games together；最后衔接给定尾句“My dream school is really great.”，保证内容完整、语句通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
My dream school
My dream school is not big, but it's very modern and clean.
There're three classroom buildings in our school. There are only twenty students in each class. We have three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. At noon, we have one hour to have lunch. We can also listen to music at lunchtime. There are all kinds of clubs to join after school. We can also play games together.
My dream school is really great.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文、校园话题写作
【点评】本题考查学生围绕指定话题及要点进行英语写作的能力，要求覆盖思维导图的全部内容，语句通顺连贯，难度适中，能有效锻炼学生的英语表达能力。
【难度系数】0.6
