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(2025·江苏苏州高新区期末)“立身以立学为先,立学以读书为本。”书籍犹如时代的波涛中航行的思想之船,它小心翼翼地把智慧的宝藏运送给一代又一代。为激发同学们的阅读兴趣,你班英文图书角新增了以下四本新书,请你选择其中一本,写一份英文借阅申请。
【要点】1. 依据书名和封面图片预测这本书的内容。
2. 说明你选择这本书的原因。
3. 介绍阅读能给你带来的益处。
【注意】1. 词数80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 内容涵盖所给要点,可适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。
【参考词汇】cover n. (书籍的)封面
Dear teacher,
I would like to borrow the book named
I hope I can read this book soon.
【要点】1. 依据书名和封面图片预测这本书的内容。
2. 说明你选择这本书的原因。
3. 介绍阅读能给你带来的益处。
【注意】1. 词数80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 内容涵盖所给要点,可适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。
【参考词汇】cover n. (书籍的)封面
Dear teacher,
I would like to borrow the book named
Outdoor Fun
. From the cover of the book, I can see three people flying a kite happily outdoors. This book may talk about different outdoor activities, like camping, cycling and jogging.
I choose this book among the four because I am a nature lover. I want to learn more knowledge about the topic. It may teach me more skills when camping in woods or hiking on a mountain.
I hope I can read this book soon.
答案
One possible version:
Dear teacher,
I would like to borrow the book named Outdoor Fun. From the cover of the book, I can see three people flying a kite happily outdoors. This book may talk about different outdoor activities, like camping, cycling and jogging. I choose this book among the four because I am a nature lover. I want to learn more knowledge about the topic. It may teach me more skills when camping in woods or hiking on a mountain.
I like reading very much and I think it's necessary for teenagers to form a good reading habit. Reading can open our eyes and help us know more about the world. I will take good care of this book if I can borrow it.
I hope I can read this book soon.
Dear teacher,
I would like to borrow the book named Outdoor Fun. From the cover of the book, I can see three people flying a kite happily outdoors. This book may talk about different outdoor activities, like camping, cycling and jogging. I choose this book among the four because I am a nature lover. I want to learn more knowledge about the topic. It may teach me more skills when camping in woods or hiking on a mountain.
I like reading very much and I think it's necessary for teenagers to form a good reading habit. Reading can open our eyes and help us know more about the world. I will take good care of this book if I can borrow it.
I hope I can read this book soon.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英文借阅申请类写作题，解题时可以按照给定的三个要点逐步推进：第一步，先从四本新书中选定想要借阅的书籍，参考示例选择《Outdoor Fun》；第二步，结合封面的放风筝场景，合理预测书籍内容，推测它会介绍各类不同的趣味户外活动；第三步，结合自身兴趣爱好说明选书的原因，比如自己热爱自然，想要学习更多户外相关的实用技巧；第四步，最后阐述阅读能带来的益处，比如开阔眼界、帮助养成良好阅读习惯，同时补充承诺会爱护书籍，符合借阅申请的礼貌语境，全程控制总词数在要求范围内，不出现真实个人信息，保证语句通顺连贯即可。
【解析】
1. 首先补全开篇空缺的书名，选定借阅的书籍为Outdoor Fun，符合写作开篇要求。
2. 完成要点1：结合封面呈现的三人户外开心放风筝的画面，合理推测书籍内容会介绍露营、骑行、慢跑等多种不同的户外活动，完成内容预测的要求。
3. 完成要点2：说明自己是自然爱好者，想要了解更多户外相关的知识，学习露营、徒步的相关实用技能，清晰交代选书的原因。
4. 完成要点3：点明青少年养成良好阅读习惯的重要性，说明阅读可以开阔眼界、帮助我们更多地了解世界，同时承诺会妥善保管书籍，符合借阅申请的场景，所有要点全部覆盖，词数符合要求，表达自然流畅。
【答案】
Dear teacher,
I would like to borrow the book named Outdoor Fun. From the cover of the book, I can see three people flying a kite happily outdoors. This book may talk about different outdoor activities, like camping, cycling and jogging. I choose this book among the four because I am a nature lover. I want to learn more knowledge about the topic. It may teach me more skills when camping in woods or hiking on a mountain.
I like reading very much and I think it's necessary for teenagers to form a good reading habit. Reading can open our eyes and help us know more about the world. I will take good care of this book if I can borrow it.
I hope I can read this book soon.
【知识点】
英文应用文写作，要点式英语写作，校园话题表达
【点评】
本题结合班级图书角的真实校园场景命题，贴近学生日常学习生活，难度适中，既考察学生的看图信息提取能力，也锻炼学生结合指定要点组织英文表达的能力，学生写作时注意不要遗漏三个核心要点，控制词数，语气礼貌符合申请语境即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇英文借阅申请类写作题，解题时可以按照给定的三个要点逐步推进：第一步，先从四本新书中选定想要借阅的书籍，参考示例选择《Outdoor Fun》；第二步，结合封面的放风筝场景，合理预测书籍内容，推测它会介绍各类不同的趣味户外活动；第三步，结合自身兴趣爱好说明选书的原因，比如自己热爱自然，想要学习更多户外相关的实用技巧；第四步，最后阐述阅读能带来的益处，比如开阔眼界、帮助养成良好阅读习惯，同时补充承诺会爱护书籍，符合借阅申请的礼貌语境，全程控制总词数在要求范围内，不出现真实个人信息，保证语句通顺连贯即可。
【解析】
1. 首先补全开篇空缺的书名，选定借阅的书籍为Outdoor Fun，符合写作开篇要求。
2. 完成要点1：结合封面呈现的三人户外开心放风筝的画面，合理推测书籍内容会介绍露营、骑行、慢跑等多种不同的户外活动，完成内容预测的要求。
3. 完成要点2：说明自己是自然爱好者，想要了解更多户外相关的知识，学习露营、徒步的相关实用技能，清晰交代选书的原因。
4. 完成要点3：点明青少年养成良好阅读习惯的重要性，说明阅读可以开阔眼界、帮助我们更多地了解世界，同时承诺会妥善保管书籍，符合借阅申请的场景，所有要点全部覆盖，词数符合要求，表达自然流畅。
【答案】
Dear teacher,
I would like to borrow the book named Outdoor Fun. From the cover of the book, I can see three people flying a kite happily outdoors. This book may talk about different outdoor activities, like camping, cycling and jogging. I choose this book among the four because I am a nature lover. I want to learn more knowledge about the topic. It may teach me more skills when camping in woods or hiking on a mountain.
I like reading very much and I think it's necessary for teenagers to form a good reading habit. Reading can open our eyes and help us know more about the world. I will take good care of this book if I can borrow it.
I hope I can read this book soon.
【知识点】
英文应用文写作，要点式英语写作，校园话题表达
【点评】
本题结合班级图书角的真实校园场景命题，贴近学生日常学习生活，难度适中，既考察学生的看图信息提取能力，也锻炼学生结合指定要点组织英文表达的能力，学生写作时注意不要遗漏三个核心要点，控制词数，语气礼貌符合申请语境即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
