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E(2026·盐城滨海期末)
假如来自美国的 Kitty 是你的好朋友,请根据所给要点提示,写一篇英语短文,谈谈 Kitty 喜爱的中国节日和她目前的生活方式。
注意:1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;2. 文章须包含全部要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。3. 词数 80 左右。
My best friend is Kitty.
假如来自美国的 Kitty 是你的好朋友,请根据所给要点提示,写一篇英语短文,谈谈 Kitty 喜爱的中国节日和她目前的生活方式。
注意:1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;2. 文章须包含全部要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。3. 词数 80 左右。
My best friend is Kitty.
答案
One possible version:
She is 14 years old and does well in her studies, but she needs to improve her health.
Her favourite Chinese festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival because she enjoys eating mooncakes and admiring the full moon with family. However, her lifestyle is not healthy. She often eats cakes, drinks little water, and dislikes vegetables and fruit. She seldom exercises.
To become a dancer in the future, she plans to eat fewer snacks and exercise more every day. I hope she can succeed.
She is 14 years old and does well in her studies, but she needs to improve her health.
Her favourite Chinese festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival because she enjoys eating mooncakes and admiring the full moon with family. However, her lifestyle is not healthy. She often eats cakes, drinks little water, and dislikes vegetables and fruit. She seldom exercises.
To become a dancer in the future, she plans to eat fewer snacks and exercise more every day. I hope she can succeed.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先明确写作任务：围绕好友Kitty的相关信息完成英语短文，第一步先梳理所有必须覆盖的要点：1. Kitty的基本情况：14岁、成绩优异、需要增强体质；2. 她喜爱的中国节日及对应原因，选择大众熟知的中秋节补充合理原因即可；3. 她当前的生活习惯：常吃蛋糕、喝水少、不爱蔬果、很少锻炼；4. 她的未来目标和改善计划：想成为舞蹈家、少吃零食多运动。接下来搭建行文逻辑：先承接题干给出的开头句介绍基础信息，再讲她喜欢的节日，接着描述她目前不健康的生活方式，最后讲她的改变计划，适当补充短句让文章连贯，控制词数在80左右，全程使用第三人称，主时态用一般现在时，计划部分用plan to结构即可，注意不要出现真实个人信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接开篇句，首先介绍Kitty的基础属性，直接覆盖人物栏全部要点：She is 14 years old and does well in her studies, but she needs to improve her health.
2. 接下来介绍她喜爱的中国节日，选择中秋节补充符合节日特点的合理原因：Her favourite Chinese festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival because she enjoys eating mooncakes and admiring the full moon with family.
3. 随后描述她当前的生活方式，点明不健康的属性，把所有生活方式要点全部整合：However, her lifestyle is not healthy. She often eats cakes, drinks little water, and dislikes vegetables and fruit. She seldom exercises.
4. 最后介绍她的目标和对应计划，收尾补充简单期许：To become a dancer in the future, she plans to eat fewer snacks and exercise more every day. I hope she can succeed.
完成后检查所有要点无遗漏，语句通顺，词数符合要求，语法无错误。
【答案】
One possible version:
She is 14 years old and does well in her studies, but she needs to improve her health.
Her favourite Chinese festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival because she enjoys eating mooncakes and admiring the full moon with family. However, her lifestyle is not healthy. She often eats cakes, drinks little water, and dislikes vegetables and fruit. She seldom exercises.
To become a dancer in the future, she plans to eat fewer snacks and exercise more every day. I hope she can succeed.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，一般现在时运用，人物介绍谋篇
【点评】
本题属于初中常见的要点类人物介绍写作，难度较低，只需要将表格给出的所有信息点全部准确覆盖，适当补充合理的衔接内容让行文流畅，注意人称和时态的统一，避免出现语法错误，就可以完成符合要求的短文，写作时要注意不要遗漏任意一个给定要点，避免不必要的失分。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先明确写作任务：围绕好友Kitty的相关信息完成英语短文，第一步先梳理所有必须覆盖的要点：1. Kitty的基本情况：14岁、成绩优异、需要增强体质；2. 她喜爱的中国节日及对应原因，选择大众熟知的中秋节补充合理原因即可；3. 她当前的生活习惯：常吃蛋糕、喝水少、不爱蔬果、很少锻炼；4. 她的未来目标和改善计划：想成为舞蹈家、少吃零食多运动。接下来搭建行文逻辑：先承接题干给出的开头句介绍基础信息，再讲她喜欢的节日，接着描述她目前不健康的生活方式，最后讲她的改变计划，适当补充短句让文章连贯，控制词数在80左右，全程使用第三人称，主时态用一般现在时，计划部分用plan to结构即可，注意不要出现真实个人信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接开篇句，首先介绍Kitty的基础属性，直接覆盖人物栏全部要点：She is 14 years old and does well in her studies, but she needs to improve her health.
2. 接下来介绍她喜爱的中国节日，选择中秋节补充符合节日特点的合理原因：Her favourite Chinese festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival because she enjoys eating mooncakes and admiring the full moon with family.
3. 随后描述她当前的生活方式，点明不健康的属性，把所有生活方式要点全部整合：However, her lifestyle is not healthy. She often eats cakes, drinks little water, and dislikes vegetables and fruit. She seldom exercises.
4. 最后介绍她的目标和对应计划，收尾补充简单期许：To become a dancer in the future, she plans to eat fewer snacks and exercise more every day. I hope she can succeed.
完成后检查所有要点无遗漏，语句通顺，词数符合要求，语法无错误。
【答案】
One possible version:
She is 14 years old and does well in her studies, but she needs to improve her health.
Her favourite Chinese festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival because she enjoys eating mooncakes and admiring the full moon with family. However, her lifestyle is not healthy. She often eats cakes, drinks little water, and dislikes vegetables and fruit. She seldom exercises.
To become a dancer in the future, she plans to eat fewer snacks and exercise more every day. I hope she can succeed.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，一般现在时运用，人物介绍谋篇
【点评】
本题属于初中常见的要点类人物介绍写作，难度较低，只需要将表格给出的所有信息点全部准确覆盖，适当补充合理的衔接内容让行文流畅，注意人称和时态的统一，避免出现语法错误，就可以完成符合要求的短文，写作时要注意不要遗漏任意一个给定要点，避免不必要的失分。
【难度系数】
0.7
F(2026·扬州梅岭中学期末)
每个人都有理想的周末生活。请以“My Perfect Weekend”为题写一篇英语短文,分享你心中完美的周末安排。词数80~100,语句连贯。
内容提示:1. 描述你的理想周末作息时间及原因;2. 介绍你的兴趣爱好及周末活动安排;3. 介绍你理想周末的健康饮食搭配;4. 你对理想周末的感受。
注意事项:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;2. 必须包含所给信息,并适当发挥;3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等相关信息。
My Perfect Weekend
每个人都有理想的周末生活。请以“My Perfect Weekend”为题写一篇英语短文,分享你心中完美的周末安排。词数80~100,语句连贯。
内容提示:1. 描述你的理想周末作息时间及原因;2. 介绍你的兴趣爱好及周末活动安排;3. 介绍你理想周末的健康饮食搭配;4. 你对理想周末的感受。
注意事项:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;2. 必须包含所给信息,并适当发挥;3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等相关信息。
My Perfect Weekend
答案
One possible version:
My perfect weekend starts at 8 a. m. because enough sleep makes me energetic. In the morning, I usually read books or play the piano, as these are my favourite hobbies. After lunch, I often play basketball with friends to stay healthy.
For meals, I prefer a balanced diet. Breakfast includes milk and eggs, while lunch and dinner have vegetables, fish, and rice. This helps me keep fit.
Such a weekend is relaxing and enjoyable. It brings me joy and prepares me for the new week.
My perfect weekend starts at 8 a. m. because enough sleep makes me energetic. In the morning, I usually read books or play the piano, as these are my favourite hobbies. After lunch, I often play basketball with friends to stay healthy.
For meals, I prefer a balanced diet. Breakfast includes milk and eggs, while lunch and dinner have vegetables, fish, and rice. This helps me keep fit.
Such a weekend is relaxing and enjoyable. It brings me joy and prepares me for the new week.
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道写作题先完成审题：明确主题是介绍自己心中的完美周末，文体是说明类短文，人称用第一人称，时态选用一般现在时，词数要求80-100，需要覆盖全部4个给定内容要点。接下来梳理写作逻辑：按照时间先后顺序展开，先写理想的周末起床时间，点明充足睡眠带来充沛精力的原因，接着顺理成章介绍自己的兴趣爱好，对应安排周末的休闲、运动类活动，之后专门介绍三餐的健康搭配，最后收尾抒发对这类周末的感受，全程注意不要出现真实姓名、校名等敏感信息，适当用简单的衔接词让上下文更连贯，控制总词数在要求区间内即可。
【解析】
1. 审题定调：确定写作核心为分享理想周末安排，使用第一人称、一般现在时行文，确保覆盖作息及原因、兴趣相关活动、健康饮食、个人感受4个全部提示要点。
2. 搭建行文框架：
第一部分开篇点明理想周末的起床时间，说明充足睡眠能让人精力充沛的原因，接着介绍自己的爱好，对应安排上午阅读、练琴，下午和朋友打球的周末活动。
第二部分专门介绍三餐的均衡健康搭配，说明这样的饮食安排能帮助自己保持健康。
第三部分收尾抒发感受，点明这样的周末放松又愉快，能为新一周的生活做好准备。
3. 最终核查：核对所有要点无遗漏，修正语法错误，确认词数符合80-100的要求，无真实敏感信息。
【答案】
My Perfect Weekend
My perfect weekend starts at 8 a. m. because enough sleep makes me energetic. In the morning, I usually read books or play the piano, as these are my favourite hobbies. After lunch, I often play basketball with friends to stay healthy.
For meals, I prefer a balanced diet. Breakfast includes milk and eggs, while lunch and dinner have vegetables, fish, and rice. This helps me keep fit.
Such a weekend is relaxing and enjoyable. It brings me joy and prepares me for the new week.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，一般现在时运用，语篇逻辑衔接
【点评】
本篇参考范文完全覆盖题干给出的所有写作要点，按照时间顺序行文逻辑清晰自然，用词地道简洁，没有冗余表达，词数完全符合要求，既贴合学生的真实生活场景，也符合初中英语写作的评分标准，很适合学生参考模仿。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道写作题先完成审题：明确主题是介绍自己心中的完美周末，文体是说明类短文，人称用第一人称，时态选用一般现在时，词数要求80-100，需要覆盖全部4个给定内容要点。接下来梳理写作逻辑：按照时间先后顺序展开，先写理想的周末起床时间，点明充足睡眠带来充沛精力的原因，接着顺理成章介绍自己的兴趣爱好，对应安排周末的休闲、运动类活动，之后专门介绍三餐的健康搭配，最后收尾抒发对这类周末的感受，全程注意不要出现真实姓名、校名等敏感信息，适当用简单的衔接词让上下文更连贯，控制总词数在要求区间内即可。
【解析】
1. 审题定调：确定写作核心为分享理想周末安排，使用第一人称、一般现在时行文，确保覆盖作息及原因、兴趣相关活动、健康饮食、个人感受4个全部提示要点。
2. 搭建行文框架：
第一部分开篇点明理想周末的起床时间，说明充足睡眠能让人精力充沛的原因，接着介绍自己的爱好，对应安排上午阅读、练琴，下午和朋友打球的周末活动。
第二部分专门介绍三餐的均衡健康搭配，说明这样的饮食安排能帮助自己保持健康。
第三部分收尾抒发感受，点明这样的周末放松又愉快，能为新一周的生活做好准备。
3. 最终核查：核对所有要点无遗漏，修正语法错误，确认词数符合80-100的要求，无真实敏感信息。
【答案】
My Perfect Weekend
My perfect weekend starts at 8 a. m. because enough sleep makes me energetic. In the morning, I usually read books or play the piano, as these are my favourite hobbies. After lunch, I often play basketball with friends to stay healthy.
For meals, I prefer a balanced diet. Breakfast includes milk and eggs, while lunch and dinner have vegetables, fish, and rice. This helps me keep fit.
Such a weekend is relaxing and enjoyable. It brings me joy and prepares me for the new week.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，一般现在时运用，语篇逻辑衔接
【点评】
本篇参考范文完全覆盖题干给出的所有写作要点，按照时间顺序行文逻辑清晰自然，用词地道简洁，没有冗余表达，词数完全符合要求，既贴合学生的真实生活场景，也符合初中英语写作的评分标准，很适合学生参考模仿。
【难度系数】
0.7
