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任务三:书面表达。
从上面的短文中,我们了解到王宁在自己的坚持和队友的鼓励下成功登上了山顶。这次经历让他明白了"世上无难事,只要肯攀登"的道理。每个人在生活中都会遇到困难,但重要的是我们如何面对它们。请根据下列写作要点写一篇短文,描述你成功解决困难的一次经历。可适当发挥,不少于60词。
写作要点:
1. What was the problem?
2. How did you solve it?
3. What do you learn from this experience?
从上面的短文中,我们了解到王宁在自己的坚持和队友的鼓励下成功登上了山顶。这次经历让他明白了"世上无难事,只要肯攀登"的道理。每个人在生活中都会遇到困难,但重要的是我们如何面对它们。请根据下列写作要点写一篇短文,描述你成功解决困难的一次经历。可适当发挥,不少于60词。
写作要点:
1. What was the problem?
2. How did you solve it?
3. What do you learn from this experience?
答案
One possible version:
Last term, I met a big problem: I couldn't pass the 800-meter running test. I always felt tired halfway and couldn't finish the run in the required time, I even wanted to give up at that time.
Later, my PE teacher gave me some useful advice. I got up 30 minutes earlier every morning to practice running, and my best friend often ran with me to encourage me. I kept practicing for two months, and finally I got a full mark in the running test.
From this experience, I learn that nothing is too hard if we keep working on it. We should never give up when we meet difficulties.
Last term, I met a big problem: I couldn't pass the 800-meter running test. I always felt tired halfway and couldn't finish the run in the required time, I even wanted to give up at that time.
Later, my PE teacher gave me some useful advice. I got up 30 minutes earlier every morning to practice running, and my best friend often ran with me to encourage me. I kept practicing for two months, and finally I got a full mark in the running test.
From this experience, I learn that nothing is too hard if we keep working on it. We should never give up when we meet difficulties.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求根据三个要点写一篇描述克服困难经历的短文，需以一般过去时为主。首先要明确三个核心要点：1. 具体遇到的困难是什么；2. 解决困难的具体行动；3. 从经历中获得的感悟。写作时需紧扣要点，语言通顺，字数不少于60词。
【解析】
按照写作要点分三段完成：
1. 第一段：点明遇到的困难，如无法通过800米跑测试，中途易疲劳想放弃；
2. 第二段：说明解决过程，如听从体育老师建议，每天早起练习，好友陪伴鼓励，坚持两个月后取得满分；
3. 第三段：总结感悟，即坚持就能克服困难，遇到困难不能放弃。
【答案】
One possible version:
Last term, I met a big problem: I couldn't pass the 800-meter running test. I always felt tired halfway and couldn't finish the run in the required time, I even wanted to give up at that time.
Later, my PE teacher gave me some useful advice. I got up 30 minutes earlier every morning to practice running, and my best friend often ran with me to encourage me. I kept practicing for two months, and finally I got a full mark in the running test.
From this experience, I learn that nothing is too hard if we keep working on it. We should never give up when we meet difficulties.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般过去时、要点式写作
【点评】
范文紧扣三个写作要点，结构清晰，叙事具体，语言简洁自然，准确传达了“坚持克服困难”的主题，符合题目要求，是一篇优秀的参考范文，适合学生模仿学习。
【难度系数】
0.8
本题为英语书面表达题，要求根据三个要点写一篇描述克服困难经历的短文，需以一般过去时为主。首先要明确三个核心要点：1. 具体遇到的困难是什么；2. 解决困难的具体行动；3. 从经历中获得的感悟。写作时需紧扣要点，语言通顺，字数不少于60词。
【解析】
按照写作要点分三段完成：
1. 第一段：点明遇到的困难，如无法通过800米跑测试，中途易疲劳想放弃；
2. 第二段：说明解决过程，如听从体育老师建议，每天早起练习，好友陪伴鼓励，坚持两个月后取得满分；
3. 第三段：总结感悟，即坚持就能克服困难，遇到困难不能放弃。
【答案】
One possible version:
Last term, I met a big problem: I couldn't pass the 800-meter running test. I always felt tired halfway and couldn't finish the run in the required time, I even wanted to give up at that time.
Later, my PE teacher gave me some useful advice. I got up 30 minutes earlier every morning to practice running, and my best friend often ran with me to encourage me. I kept practicing for two months, and finally I got a full mark in the running test.
From this experience, I learn that nothing is too hard if we keep working on it. We should never give up when we meet difficulties.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般过去时、要点式写作
【点评】
范文紧扣三个写作要点，结构清晰，叙事具体，语言简洁自然，准确传达了“坚持克服困难”的主题，符合题目要求，是一篇优秀的参考范文，适合学生模仿学习。
【难度系数】
0.8
