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六、书面表达(共1题，计20分)
假如你是某英文杂志的Ask Paul栏目的编辑，专门帮助青少年解决一些烦恼。以下是一位叫李华的中学生写给栏目的一封信，请你以编辑保罗(Paul)的身份给他写一封回信，提一些建议来帮助他。
要求：
1. 所提建议一定要有积极意义并符合实际；
2. 不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数。
Dear Paul,
I argued with my parents last week.
I want to keep a pet dog at home, but they don't agree. They don't think I can look after it by myself. I don't know what I should do. Can you help me?
Thanks a lot!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Li Hua,
I'm sorry to hear about your problem.
I'd be happy to give you some advice.
I really hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Paul
假如你是某英文杂志的Ask Paul栏目的编辑，专门帮助青少年解决一些烦恼。以下是一位叫李华的中学生写给栏目的一封信，请你以编辑保罗(Paul)的身份给他写一封回信，提一些建议来帮助他。
要求：
1. 所提建议一定要有积极意义并符合实际；
2. 不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数。
Dear Paul,
I argued with my parents last week.
I want to keep a pet dog at home, but they don't agree. They don't think I can look after it by myself. I don't know what I should do. Can you help me?
Thanks a lot!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Li Hua,
I'm sorry to hear about your problem.
I'd be happy to give you some advice.
First, have a calm talk with them. Instead of arguing, tell them you understand their worries—the time, money or mess. Then, show them you're ready with some things, for example, you can get up a little earlier to clean your room or look after a small plant. This lets them see you're ready for a pet.
I really hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Paul
答案
One possible version:
Dear Li Hua,
I'm sorry to hear about your
problem. I'd be happy to give you some
advice.
First, have a calm talk with them.
Instead of arguing, tell them you
understand their worries—the time,
money or mess. Then, show them
you're ready with some things, for
example, you can get up a little earlier
to clean your room or look after a
small plant. This lets them see you're
ready for a pet.
I really hope my advice can
help you.
Yours,
Paul
Dear Li Hua,
I'm sorry to hear about your
problem. I'd be happy to give you some
advice.
First, have a calm talk with them.
Instead of arguing, tell them you
understand their worries—the time,
money or mess. Then, show them
you're ready with some things, for
example, you can get up a little earlier
to clean your room or look after a
small plant. This lets them see you're
ready for a pet.
I really hope my advice can
help you.
Yours,
Paul
解析
【分析】首先明确写作身份为Ask Paul栏目的编辑Paul，写作目的是帮助李华解决想养宠物狗但父母不同意的烦恼。解题思路：1. 开头使用题目给定的内容，表达对李华的理解；2. 提出积极可行的建议：先与父母冷静沟通，理解他们担心的时间、精力、卫生等问题，避免争吵；再用实际行动证明自己有责任感，比如早起打扫房间、照顾小植物，让父母看到自己已做好养宠物的准备；3. 结尾使用题目给定的内容，表达对李华的祝福。
【解析】按照书信格式及要求撰写：首先，与父母进行冷静沟通，告知自己理解他们的顾虑，避免争执；其次，通过实际行动展现自身准备，让父母认可自己有能力照顾宠物。具体内容如下：First, have a calm talk with them. Instead of arguing, tell them you understand their worries—the time, money or mess. Then, show them you're ready with some things, for example, you can get up a little earlier to clean your room or look after a small plant. This lets them see you're ready for a pet.
【答案】Dear Li Hua,
I'm sorry to hear about your problem. I'd be happy to give you some advice.
First, have a calm talk with them. Instead of arguing, tell them you understand their worries—the time, money or mess. Then, show them you're ready with some things, for example, you can get up a little earlier to clean your room or look after a small plant. This lets them see you're ready for a pet.
I really hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Paul
【知识点】英语书信写作；提建议的表达；日常交际用语
【点评】该回信符合题目要求，建议具体可行，贴合青少年实际情况，语言通顺流畅，结构清晰，有效解决了李华的烦恼，符合栏目编辑的角色定位。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照书信格式及要求撰写：首先，与父母进行冷静沟通，告知自己理解他们的顾虑，避免争执；其次，通过实际行动展现自身准备，让父母认可自己有能力照顾宠物。具体内容如下：First, have a calm talk with them. Instead of arguing, tell them you understand their worries—the time, money or mess. Then, show them you're ready with some things, for example, you can get up a little earlier to clean your room or look after a small plant. This lets them see you're ready for a pet.
【答案】Dear Li Hua,
I'm sorry to hear about your problem. I'd be happy to give you some advice.
First, have a calm talk with them. Instead of arguing, tell them you understand their worries—the time, money or mess. Then, show them you're ready with some things, for example, you can get up a little earlier to clean your room or look after a small plant. This lets them see you're ready for a pet.
I really hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Paul
【知识点】英语书信写作；提建议的表达；日常交际用语
【点评】该回信符合题目要求，建议具体可行，贴合青少年实际情况，语言通顺流畅，结构清晰，有效解决了李华的烦恼，符合栏目编辑的角色定位。
【难度系数】0.6
