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四、书面表达
文明的校园，是成长的沃土；优雅的言行，是青春的底色。校学生会计划发起 "文明校园共建行动"。请你以学生会名义，根据以下流程图提示，用英语写一封倡议书发布在学校公众号上，号召全体同学积极参与。
注意事项：1. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数不少于90，倡议书的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear schoolmates,
Our school is not only a place for study but also a warm home for everyone. To build a better school, we need to work together and begin with good manners. Here are some practical suggestions for us.
Let's start with small things and make our campus more beautiful!
The Students' Union
文明的校园，是成长的沃土；优雅的言行，是青春的底色。校学生会计划发起 "文明校园共建行动"。请你以学生会名义，根据以下流程图提示，用英语写一封倡议书发布在学校公众号上，号召全体同学积极参与。
注意事项：1. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数不少于90，倡议书的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear schoolmates,
Our school is not only a place for study but also a warm home for everyone. To build a better school, we need to work together and begin with good manners. Here are some practical suggestions for us.
First, never leave rubbish anywhere. It's our duty to put waste into the right bins. Also, follow traffic rules in the school and don't run in hallways to avoid accidents.
Second, we should behave politely. When talking to teachers and classmates, we should use kind words like "please" and "thank you". We ought to be patient when waiting in lines. Besides, don't shout loudly in public areas.
Moreover, we need to respect others. We'd better listen carefully when others are speaking. It's important to keep quiet when others are studying.
Let's start with small things and make our campus more beautiful!
The Students' Union
答案
One possible version:
Dear schoolmates,
Our school is not only a place for study but also a warm home for everyone. To build a better school, we need to work together and begin with good manners. Here are some practical suggestions for us.
First, never leave rubbish anywhere. It's our duty to put waste into the right bins. Also, follow traffic rules in the school and don't run in hallways to avoid accidents.
Second, we should behave politely. When talking to teachers and classmates, we should use kind words like "please" and "thank you". We ought to be patient when waiting in lines. Besides, don't shout loudly in public areas.
Moreover, we need to respect others. We'd better listen carefully when others are speaking. It's important to keep quiet when others are studying.
Let's start with small things and make our campus more beautiful!
The Students' Union.
(90 words)
Dear schoolmates,
Our school is not only a place for study but also a warm home for everyone. To build a better school, we need to work together and begin with good manners. Here are some practical suggestions for us.
First, never leave rubbish anywhere. It's our duty to put waste into the right bins. Also, follow traffic rules in the school and don't run in hallways to avoid accidents.
Second, we should behave politely. When talking to teachers and classmates, we should use kind words like "please" and "thank you". We ought to be patient when waiting in lines. Besides, don't shout loudly in public areas.
Moreover, we need to respect others. We'd better listen carefully when others are speaking. It's important to keep quiet when others are studying.
Let's start with small things and make our campus more beautiful!
The Students' Union.
(90 words)
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先要明确写作身份是校学生会，写作目的是号召全体同学参与文明校园共建。首先拆分流程图给出的两个核心写作方向：第一个方向对应“Clean & safe的校园要做什么”，我们需要联想校园里保持清洁、保障安全的具体可行的小事，比如不乱扔垃圾、正确投放废弃物、校内走廊不奔跑避免事故这类贴近学生日常的内容；第二个方向对应“好的行为要如何做”，梳理日常校园里的文明言行规范，比如使用礼貌用语、公共场所不大声喧哗、排队守秩序、尊重他人不打扰别人学习等内容。之后用合适的逻辑连接词把这些内容串联起来，衔接题目已经给出的开头和结尾，保证语句通顺、词数达标，符合倡议书的亲切有号召力的语气即可。
【解析】
1. 梳理核心写作要点，分为两大模块：
模块一：围绕校园清洁与安全展开：说明我们不能随处丢垃圾，要自觉把垃圾投放到对应的垃圾桶里维护校园整洁；同时在校内要遵守通行规则，不在走廊追逐奔跑，避免发生意外，共同维护安全的校园环境。
模块二：围绕文明言行展开：日常和老师、同学交流时要多用“请”“谢谢”这类礼貌用语，排队的时候自觉耐心等候，不在公共区域大声喧哗；他人发言时认真倾听，别人学习的时候主动保持安静，做到尊重身边的每一个人。
2. 使用First、Second、Moreover这类过渡词串联所有要点，让行文逻辑清晰连贯，符合倡议书正式又有号召力的风格。
3. 完成内容后检查语法错误，确认总词数符合不少于90的要求，自然衔接题目给出的首尾段落即可。
【答案】
First, never leave rubbish anywhere. It's our duty to put waste into the right bins. Also, follow traffic rules in the school and don't run in hallways to avoid accidents.
Second, we should behave politely. When talking to teachers and classmates, we should use kind words like "please" and "thank you". We ought to be patient when waiting in lines. Besides, don't shout loudly in public areas.
Moreover, we need to respect others. We'd better listen carefully when others are speaking. It's important to keep quiet when others are studying.
【知识点】
英语倡议书写作，情景交际表达，语篇逻辑衔接
【点评】
本题属于贴近学生校园生活的提示类应用文写作，给出的流程图明确划分了写作维度，降低了审题难度，既考查学生的英语书面表达能力，也引导学生树立共建文明校园的意识，写作时只要覆盖全部提示要点，用过渡词理顺逻辑，就能完成一篇合格的倡议书。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道书面表达题，首先要明确写作身份是校学生会，写作目的是号召全体同学参与文明校园共建。首先拆分流程图给出的两个核心写作方向：第一个方向对应“Clean & safe的校园要做什么”，我们需要联想校园里保持清洁、保障安全的具体可行的小事，比如不乱扔垃圾、正确投放废弃物、校内走廊不奔跑避免事故这类贴近学生日常的内容；第二个方向对应“好的行为要如何做”，梳理日常校园里的文明言行规范，比如使用礼貌用语、公共场所不大声喧哗、排队守秩序、尊重他人不打扰别人学习等内容。之后用合适的逻辑连接词把这些内容串联起来，衔接题目已经给出的开头和结尾，保证语句通顺、词数达标，符合倡议书的亲切有号召力的语气即可。
【解析】
1. 梳理核心写作要点，分为两大模块：
模块一：围绕校园清洁与安全展开：说明我们不能随处丢垃圾，要自觉把垃圾投放到对应的垃圾桶里维护校园整洁；同时在校内要遵守通行规则，不在走廊追逐奔跑，避免发生意外，共同维护安全的校园环境。
模块二：围绕文明言行展开：日常和老师、同学交流时要多用“请”“谢谢”这类礼貌用语，排队的时候自觉耐心等候，不在公共区域大声喧哗；他人发言时认真倾听，别人学习的时候主动保持安静，做到尊重身边的每一个人。
2. 使用First、Second、Moreover这类过渡词串联所有要点，让行文逻辑清晰连贯，符合倡议书正式又有号召力的风格。
3. 完成内容后检查语法错误，确认总词数符合不少于90的要求，自然衔接题目给出的首尾段落即可。
【答案】
First, never leave rubbish anywhere. It's our duty to put waste into the right bins. Also, follow traffic rules in the school and don't run in hallways to avoid accidents.
Second, we should behave politely. When talking to teachers and classmates, we should use kind words like "please" and "thank you". We ought to be patient when waiting in lines. Besides, don't shout loudly in public areas.
Moreover, we need to respect others. We'd better listen carefully when others are speaking. It's important to keep quiet when others are studying.
【知识点】
英语倡议书写作，情景交际表达，语篇逻辑衔接
【点评】
本题属于贴近学生校园生活的提示类应用文写作，给出的流程图明确划分了写作维度，降低了审题难度，既考查学生的英语书面表达能力，也引导学生树立共建文明校园的意识，写作时只要覆盖全部提示要点，用过渡词理顺逻辑，就能完成一篇合格的倡议书。
【难度系数】
0.6
