六、书面表达。(20 分)
每年的 8 月 8 日是我国的“全民健身日”。为了让运动更加深入人心,你校英语角组织了“运动与健康”主题活动,并以“Let's Do Exercise Together”为题,向全校学生征文。请根据以下提示和要求写一篇短文。
提示:
1. What's the importance of exercise?
2. When and how do you exercise?
要求:
1.必须包含所给提示,并做适当发挥,语句通顺,行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现真实人名和校名;
3.词数 70 左右;短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Let's Do Exercise Together
It's very important for us to do exercise.
Let's do exercise and live happily together!
每年的 8 月 8 日是我国的“全民健身日”。为了让运动更加深入人心,你校英语角组织了“运动与健康”主题活动,并以“Let's Do Exercise Together”为题,向全校学生征文。请根据以下提示和要求写一篇短文。
提示:
1. What's the importance of exercise?
2. When and how do you exercise?
要求:
1.必须包含所给提示,并做适当发挥,语句通顺,行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现真实人名和校名;
3.词数 70 左右;短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Let's Do Exercise Together
It's very important for us to do exercise.
Let's do exercise and live happily together!
答案
One possible version:
Let’s Do Exercise Together
It’s very important for us to do exercise. Doing exercise can help us keep healthy. It can also help us make more friends. What’s more, it is helpful to our study. I always go to school on foot or by bike. In PE classes, I often do different kinds of exercise, such as running, jumping, playing basketball and so on. On weekends, I go swimming with my friends. Also, I take trips during the holidays.
Let’s do exercise and live happily together!
Let’s Do Exercise Together
It’s very important for us to do exercise. Doing exercise can help us keep healthy. It can also help us make more friends. What’s more, it is helpful to our study. I always go to school on foot or by bike. In PE classes, I often do different kinds of exercise, such as running, jumping, playing basketball and so on. On weekends, I go swimming with my friends. Also, I take trips during the holidays.
Let’s do exercise and live happily together!
解析
【分析】本次书面表达主题为“Let's Do Exercise Together”,需覆盖两个核心提示:运动的重要性、自身的运动时间与方式。解题思路:1. 围绕“运动的重要性”,从健康、学习、交友三个维度阐述,明确运动的价值;2. 结合自身实际,说明日常上学、体育课、周末及假期的运动方式,对应第二个提示;3. 严格遵循要求:词数70左右,不出现真实人名校名,语句通顺连贯,利用给定的开头结尾完成写作。
【解析】1. 开篇承接给定开头,用“help us keep healthy”“help us make more friends”“be helpful to our study”等句型说明运动的重要性,覆盖第一个提示;2. 接着描述个人运动情况:日常上学选择步行或骑车,体育课参与跑步、打篮球等,周末和假期进行游泳、旅行,对应第二个提示;3. 调整语句使行文连贯,控制词数,最终形成符合要求的短文,呼应结尾主题。
【答案】Let’s Do Exercise Together
It’s very important for us to do exercise. Doing exercise can help us keep healthy. It can also help us make more friends. What’s more, it is helpful to our study. I always go to school on foot or by bike. In PE classes, I often do different kinds of exercise, such as running, jumping, playing basketball and so on. On weekends, I go swimming with my friends. Also, I take trips during the holidays.
Let’s do exercise and live happily together!
【知识点】英语书面表达;运动话题词汇
【点评】本文紧扣主题,完整覆盖所有提示内容,逻辑清晰,语句通顺,符合词数要求,是一篇符合题目标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 开篇承接给定开头,用“help us keep healthy”“help us make more friends”“be helpful to our study”等句型说明运动的重要性,覆盖第一个提示;2. 接着描述个人运动情况:日常上学选择步行或骑车,体育课参与跑步、打篮球等,周末和假期进行游泳、旅行,对应第二个提示;3. 调整语句使行文连贯,控制词数,最终形成符合要求的短文,呼应结尾主题。
【答案】Let’s Do Exercise Together
It’s very important for us to do exercise. Doing exercise can help us keep healthy. It can also help us make more friends. What’s more, it is helpful to our study. I always go to school on foot or by bike. In PE classes, I often do different kinds of exercise, such as running, jumping, playing basketball and so on. On weekends, I go swimming with my friends. Also, I take trips during the holidays.
Let’s do exercise and live happily together!
【知识点】英语书面表达;运动话题词汇
【点评】本文紧扣主题,完整覆盖所有提示内容,逻辑清晰,语句通顺,符合词数要求,是一篇符合题目标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6
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