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近年来中国发生了翻天覆地的变化，取得了很多举世瞩目的成就，例如航空航天技术的一步步突破、杂交水稻的成功培育、两届奥运会的成功举办……
某英文网站正在开展以“厉害了，我的祖国！”为主题的征文活动。请你以“China makes me feel surprised”为题，用英语写一篇 80 词左右的短文投稿。
要求：1. 选择中国的发展变化过程中一个让你感到惊喜的事件进行简单叙述，并写出你的感受。2. 书写规范，要点齐全，条理清晰，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：aerospace industry 航空航天工业；spacecraft 宇宙飞船；develop hybrid rice 培育杂交水稻；Beijing 2008 Summer Olympics 2008 年北京奥运会；Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games 2022 年北京冬奥会
[思路点拨] 1. 文体：记叙文。2. 时态：以一般过去时和现在完成时为主。3. 人称：第一、三人称。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
China makes me feel surprised
某英文网站正在开展以“厉害了，我的祖国！”为主题的征文活动。请你以“China makes me feel surprised”为题，用英语写一篇 80 词左右的短文投稿。
要求：1. 选择中国的发展变化过程中一个让你感到惊喜的事件进行简单叙述，并写出你的感受。2. 书写规范，要点齐全，条理清晰，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：aerospace industry 航空航天工业；spacecraft 宇宙飞船；develop hybrid rice 培育杂交水稻；Beijing 2008 Summer Olympics 2008 年北京奥运会；Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games 2022 年北京冬奥会
[思路点拨] 1. 文体：记叙文。2. 时态：以一般过去时和现在完成时为主。3. 人称：第一、三人称。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
China makes me feel surprised
In recent years, great changes have taken place in China and many achievements have attracted the attention of the world.
The successful launch of Shenzhou spacecraft surprises me most. I watched the live broadcast of the Shenzhou spacecraft's launch with my family. When the rocket rushed into the sky, we cheered loudly. Astronauts stayed in the space station for months, doing scientific experiments and exploring the universe.
This achievement shows China's powerful technology. I feel proud and excited. It tells me that nothing is impossible with hard work. I will study harder to contribute to our country in the future. China's development always fills me with hope!
答案
One possible version:
China makes me feel surprised
In recent years, great changes have taken place in
China and many achievements have attracted the attention of the world.
The successful launch of Shenzhou spacecraft surprises me most. I watched the live broadcast of the Shenzhou spacecraft's launch with my family. When the rocket rushed into the sky, we cheered loudly. Astronauts stayed in the space station for months, doing scientific experiments and exploring the universe.
This achievement shows China's powerful technology. I feel proud and excited. It tells me that nothing is impossible with hard work. I will study harder to contribute to our country in the future. China's development always fills me with hope!
China makes me feel surprised
In recent years, great changes have taken place in
China and many achievements have attracted the attention of the world.
The successful launch of Shenzhou spacecraft surprises me most. I watched the live broadcast of the Shenzhou spacecraft's launch with my family. When the rocket rushed into the sky, we cheered loudly. Astronauts stayed in the space station for months, doing scientific experiments and exploring the universe.
This achievement shows China's powerful technology. I feel proud and excited. It tells me that nothing is impossible with hard work. I will study harder to contribute to our country in the future. China's development always fills me with hope!
解析
【分析】
我们可以对照题目给出的三段写作提纲分步构思：第一步，先完成第一段总介绍，用现在完成时点明近年来中国发生了诸多举世瞩目的巨变，开门见山呼应征文主题；第二步，选取一个熟悉的中国发展成就作为具体事例，这里选择神舟系列飞船成功发射的事件，补充自己观看发射直播的亲身经历，把事件的核心细节交代清楚，满足题目叙述事件的要求；第三步，最后抒发个人感受，点明这个成就体现的中国科技实力，表达自己的自豪感以及未来努力报效祖国的决心，收尾升华主题。全程注意控制篇幅，时态搭配准确，人称使用符合要求，不要遗漏要点。
【解析】
1. 开篇段（Para.1）：按照总介绍的要求，使用现在完成时表述近年中国发生的变化，引出主题，对应内容点明中国近年巨变和全球瞩目的成就。
2. 主体段（Para.2）：按照举例的要求，选取神舟飞船成功发射的典型事例，补充个人观看直播的细节，描述火箭升空、航天员在轨工作的相关内容，把事件叙述完整。
3. 收尾段（Para.3）：按照感受抒发的要求，表达个人的自豪情绪，点明成就背后的中国科技实力，同时表达自己未来努力建设祖国的决心，完成全文收尾。
全文衔接自然，时态使用准确，所有题目要求的要点全部覆盖，符合征文投稿的规范。
【答案】
China makes me feel surprised
In recent years, great changes have taken place in China and many achievements have attracted the attention of the world.
The successful launch of Shenzhou spacecraft surprises me most. I watched the live broadcast of the Shenzhou spacecraft's launch with my family. When the rocket rushed into the sky, we cheered loudly. Astronauts stayed in the space station for months, doing scientific experiments and exploring the universe.
This achievement shows China's powerful technology. I feel proud and excited. It tells me that nothing is impossible with hard work. I will study harder to contribute to our country in the future. China's development always fills me with hope!
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，现在完成时应用，记叙文谋篇
【点评】
本文严格贴合给定的三段式写作框架，开篇点题清晰，选取的航天成就事例典型且加入了个人亲身经历的细节，内容饱满不空洞，情感抒发真挚自然，时态使用准确无误，完全符合题目的所有要求，主题突出，非常契合本次英文征文的投稿定位。
【难度系数】
0.6
我们可以对照题目给出的三段写作提纲分步构思：第一步，先完成第一段总介绍，用现在完成时点明近年来中国发生了诸多举世瞩目的巨变，开门见山呼应征文主题；第二步，选取一个熟悉的中国发展成就作为具体事例，这里选择神舟系列飞船成功发射的事件，补充自己观看发射直播的亲身经历，把事件的核心细节交代清楚，满足题目叙述事件的要求；第三步，最后抒发个人感受，点明这个成就体现的中国科技实力，表达自己的自豪感以及未来努力报效祖国的决心，收尾升华主题。全程注意控制篇幅，时态搭配准确，人称使用符合要求，不要遗漏要点。
【解析】
1. 开篇段（Para.1）：按照总介绍的要求，使用现在完成时表述近年中国发生的变化，引出主题，对应内容点明中国近年巨变和全球瞩目的成就。
2. 主体段（Para.2）：按照举例的要求，选取神舟飞船成功发射的典型事例，补充个人观看直播的细节，描述火箭升空、航天员在轨工作的相关内容，把事件叙述完整。
3. 收尾段（Para.3）：按照感受抒发的要求，表达个人的自豪情绪，点明成就背后的中国科技实力，同时表达自己未来努力建设祖国的决心，完成全文收尾。
全文衔接自然，时态使用准确，所有题目要求的要点全部覆盖，符合征文投稿的规范。
【答案】
China makes me feel surprised
In recent years, great changes have taken place in China and many achievements have attracted the attention of the world.
The successful launch of Shenzhou spacecraft surprises me most. I watched the live broadcast of the Shenzhou spacecraft's launch with my family. When the rocket rushed into the sky, we cheered loudly. Astronauts stayed in the space station for months, doing scientific experiments and exploring the universe.
This achievement shows China's powerful technology. I feel proud and excited. It tells me that nothing is impossible with hard work. I will study harder to contribute to our country in the future. China's development always fills me with hope!
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，现在完成时应用，记叙文谋篇
【点评】
本文严格贴合给定的三段式写作框架，开篇点题清晰，选取的航天成就事例典型且加入了个人亲身经历的细节，内容饱满不空洞，情感抒发真挚自然，时态使用准确无误，完全符合题目的所有要求，主题突出，非常契合本次英文征文的投稿定位。
【难度系数】
0.6
本部分共有 10 道小题，每小题你将听到一段对话，每段对话听两遍。在听每段对话前，你将有 5 秒钟的时间阅读题目；听完每段对话后，你仍有 5 秒钟的时间选出你认为最合适的备选答案。请在听到“嘀”的信号时，进入下一小题。
1. How did Robin go to school in the past?
2. What does Tom help do at home every day?
3. What does the girl usually do in the evenings?
4. When is Betty's birthday?
5. Where do they talk?
A. In a park.
B. In a shop.
C. In a school.
6. What's the date today?
A. April 11th.
B. April 2nd.
C. April 1st.
7. Which city will the visitor go to after Hefei?
A. Harbin.
B. Tianjin.
C. Dalian.
8. What will Mary give Bill as the presents?
A. A car and a pen.
B. A card and a pen.
C. A cup and a pencil.
9. Where is Tom's English teacher?
A. He is at school.
B. He is at home.
C. He is still in hospital.
10. What's Alex's hobby?
A. Travelling.
B. Writing a book.
C. Reading.
1. How did Robin go to school in the past?
2. What does Tom help do at home every day?
3. What does the girl usually do in the evenings?
4. When is Betty's birthday?
5. Where do they talk?
A. In a park.
B. In a shop.
C. In a school.
6. What's the date today?
A. April 11th.
B. April 2nd.
C. April 1st.
7. Which city will the visitor go to after Hefei?
A. Harbin.
B. Tianjin.
C. Dalian.
8. What will Mary give Bill as the presents?
A. A car and a pen.
B. A card and a pen.
C. A cup and a pencil.
9. Where is Tom's English teacher?
A. He is at school.
B. He is at home.
C. He is still in hospital.
10. What's Alex's hobby?
A. Travelling.
B. Writing a book.
C. Reading.
答案
1 B 2 A 3 C 4 B 5 B 6 C 7 C 8 B 9 A 10 C
解析
【分析】
这是一组英语短对话听力题，解题时首先要利用正式听录音前的预留时间，快速浏览每道小题的题干和备选答案，圈出核心提示信息，比如第1题的时间限定词"in the past"、各题的地点/日期/物品类选项，提前预判听力需要重点抓取的关键信息；播放第一遍录音时同步定位对应内容选出初步答案，第二遍播放时核对细节，排除干扰信息，确认最终选项即可。
【解析】
本题为听力理解题型，通过两遍播放的短对话内容逐一抓取对应题干的关键信息，匹配选项得到最终结果，所有选项均和听力原文给出的事实信息一一对应。
【答案】
1.B 2.A 3.C 4.B 5.B 6.C 7.C 8.B 9.A 10.C
【知识点】
短对话听力，场景信息辨析，细节信息抓取
【点评】
本题属于初中英语基础听力题型，考点覆盖日常出行、家务活动、时间日期、地点场景、行程安排、兴趣爱好等高频生活化听力场景，整体考点常规，只要考生养成提前预读选项的习惯，听录音时重点捕捉预读标记的关键信息，就能轻松排除干扰项拿到分数。
【难度系数】
0.8
这是一组英语短对话听力题，解题时首先要利用正式听录音前的预留时间，快速浏览每道小题的题干和备选答案，圈出核心提示信息，比如第1题的时间限定词"in the past"、各题的地点/日期/物品类选项，提前预判听力需要重点抓取的关键信息；播放第一遍录音时同步定位对应内容选出初步答案，第二遍播放时核对细节，排除干扰信息，确认最终选项即可。
【解析】
本题为听力理解题型，通过两遍播放的短对话内容逐一抓取对应题干的关键信息，匹配选项得到最终结果，所有选项均和听力原文给出的事实信息一一对应。
【答案】
1.B 2.A 3.C 4.B 5.B 6.C 7.C 8.B 9.A 10.C
【知识点】
短对话听力，场景信息辨析，细节信息抓取
【点评】
本题属于初中英语基础听力题型，考点覆盖日常出行、家务活动、时间日期、地点场景、行程安排、兴趣爱好等高频生活化听力场景，整体考点常规，只要考生养成提前预读选项的习惯，听录音时重点捕捉预读标记的关键信息，就能轻松排除干扰项拿到分数。
【难度系数】
0.8
