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俗话说：“国有国法，家有家规。”为了
使孩子身心健康、顺利成长，使家庭成员之
间的关系更融洽、更和谐，每个家庭都会有
这样或那样的家规。比如：早早起床、整理
床铺、按时回家；放学后先做作业；帮忙做
家务；平时不准外出、不准玩电脑游戏等。
请你结合家庭的实际情况，根据下面的提
示和要求，以“My Family Rules”为题，写
一篇短文。
提示：1.家里有哪些家规；
2.对家规的感受。
要求：1.必须包含所有提示内容，可以
适当发挥；
2.词数不少于80；
3.文中不得出现真实的地名和人名。
My Family Rules
There are many rules in my family.
范文欣赏
My Family Rules
There are many rules in my family.
My parents are very strict with me, so they
make many rules. Firstly, I can't play
basketball after school because I must finish
my homework on time. Secondly, I can't
play computer games. I must read a book
before I watch TV. Thirdly, I have to get
up early and make my bed. I have to go to
bed before 10: 00 p.m. What's more, I
have to do some housework.
I think my parents make rules to help
me and these rules can help me to live a
healthy and happy life. I have to follow
them.
【名师点评】
作者按照题目要求，运用所学词汇和
句式，通过提炼加工把提示信息有机地整
合成为一篇短文。短文包含了题目所有要
点，结构严谨、文笔流畅、用语准确、叙述
富有条理，全面而具体地介绍了自己的家规。
在本文写作中，作者能够运用本单元
所学词汇、句式，将家规进行准确描述。
如：There are many rules ... Firstly, I can't ...
because ... on time. Secondly, ... I must ...
Thirdly, I have to ... make my bed. 等句
式的运用，体现了作者善于运用所学知识
进行表达。Firstly、Secondly、Thirdly等
表示顺序的副词的运用，使叙事条理清
晰，体现了作者极强的语言运用能力。
俗话说：“国有国法，家有家规。”为了
使孩子身心健康、顺利成长，使家庭成员之
间的关系更融洽、更和谐，每个家庭都会有
这样或那样的家规。比如：早早起床、整理
床铺、按时回家；放学后先做作业；帮忙做
家务；平时不准外出、不准玩电脑游戏等。
请你结合家庭的实际情况，根据下面的提
示和要求，以“My Family Rules”为题，写
一篇短文。
提示：1.家里有哪些家规；
2.对家规的感受。
要求：1.必须包含所有提示内容，可以
适当发挥；
2.词数不少于80；
3.文中不得出现真实的地名和人名。
My Family Rules
There are many rules in my family.
范文欣赏
My Family Rules
There are many rules in my family.
My parents are very strict with me, so they
make many rules. Firstly, I can't play
basketball after school because I must finish
my homework on time. Secondly, I can't
play computer games. I must read a book
before I watch TV. Thirdly, I have to get
up early and make my bed. I have to go to
bed before 10: 00 p.m. What's more, I
have to do some housework.
I think my parents make rules to help
me and these rules can help me to live a
healthy and happy life. I have to follow
them.
【名师点评】
作者按照题目要求，运用所学词汇和
句式，通过提炼加工把提示信息有机地整
合成为一篇短文。短文包含了题目所有要
点，结构严谨、文笔流畅、用语准确、叙述
富有条理，全面而具体地介绍了自己的家规。
在本文写作中，作者能够运用本单元
所学词汇、句式，将家规进行准确描述。
如：There are many rules ... Firstly, I can't ...
because ... on time. Secondly, ... I must ...
Thirdly, I have to ... make my bed. 等句
式的运用，体现了作者善于运用所学知识
进行表达。Firstly、Secondly、Thirdly等
表示顺序的副词的运用，使叙事条理清
晰，体现了作者极强的语言运用能力。
答案
My Family Rules
There are many rules in my family.
My parents are very strict with me, so they make many rules. Firstly, I can't play basketball after school because I must finish my homework on time. Secondly, I can't play computer games. I must read a book before I watch TV. Thirdly, I have to get up early and make my bed. I have to go to bed before 10:00 p.m. What's more, I have to do some housework like sweeping the floor and folding clothes.
At first, I felt a little upset about these rules. But now I realize that my parents make these rules to help me. They can help me develop good habits and live a healthy and happy life. I will follow them willingly.
There are many rules in my family.
My parents are very strict with me, so they make many rules. Firstly, I can't play basketball after school because I must finish my homework on time. Secondly, I can't play computer games. I must read a book before I watch TV. Thirdly, I have to get up early and make my bed. I have to go to bed before 10:00 p.m. What's more, I have to do some housework like sweeping the floor and folding clothes.
At first, I felt a little upset about these rules. But now I realize that my parents make these rules to help me. They can help me develop good habits and live a healthy and happy life. I will follow them willingly.
解析
【分析】
本次写作任务是围绕“My Family Rules”写英语短文，需涵盖“家里的家规”和“对家规的感受”两个核心要点。写作思路：1. 开篇直接点题，说明家中有诸多家规；2. 用顺序副词（如Firstly、Secondly等）分点列举具体家规，补充细节让内容更充实；3. 表达对家规的感受，可从最初的不适应过渡到理解父母的用心，体现积极态度，同时满足词数要求，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开篇：用“There are many rules in my family.”点明主题；2. 列举家规：用Firstly引出第一条家规（如放学后先完成作业），Secondly引出第二条（如不玩电脑游戏，看电视前需读书），Thirdly引出第三条（如早起整理床铺、早睡），What's more引出第四条（如做家务，补充扫地、叠衣服等细节）；3. 表达感受：先写最初的不安，再转折说明理解父母是为了帮自己养成好习惯，最后表示愿意遵守。写作时需正确使用情态动词（can't、have to）、原因状语从句（because），用顺序副词梳理逻辑，词数不少于80，不出现真实地名和人名。
【答案】
My Family Rules
There are many rules in my family.
My parents are very strict with me, so they make many rules. Firstly, I can't play basketball after school because I must finish my homework on time. Secondly, I can't play computer games. I must read a book before I watch TV. Thirdly, I have to get up early and make my bed. I have to go to bed before 10:00 p.m. What's more, I have to do some housework like sweeping the floor and folding clothes.
At first, I felt a little upset about these rules. But now I realize that my parents make these rules to help me. They can help me develop good habits and live a healthy and happy life. I will follow them willingly.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、家庭话题表达、顺序连接词运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有要点，结构清晰，通过顺序副词使叙事条理分明；语言准确，正确运用情态动词、原因状语从句等句式，补充了做家务的具体细节，内容充实；情感转变自然，体现了对父母的理解，符合写作规范，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本次写作任务是围绕“My Family Rules”写英语短文，需涵盖“家里的家规”和“对家规的感受”两个核心要点。写作思路：1. 开篇直接点题，说明家中有诸多家规；2. 用顺序副词（如Firstly、Secondly等）分点列举具体家规，补充细节让内容更充实；3. 表达对家规的感受，可从最初的不适应过渡到理解父母的用心，体现积极态度，同时满足词数要求，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开篇：用“There are many rules in my family.”点明主题；2. 列举家规：用Firstly引出第一条家规（如放学后先完成作业），Secondly引出第二条（如不玩电脑游戏，看电视前需读书），Thirdly引出第三条（如早起整理床铺、早睡），What's more引出第四条（如做家务，补充扫地、叠衣服等细节）；3. 表达感受：先写最初的不安，再转折说明理解父母是为了帮自己养成好习惯，最后表示愿意遵守。写作时需正确使用情态动词（can't、have to）、原因状语从句（because），用顺序副词梳理逻辑，词数不少于80，不出现真实地名和人名。
【答案】
My Family Rules
There are many rules in my family.
My parents are very strict with me, so they make many rules. Firstly, I can't play basketball after school because I must finish my homework on time. Secondly, I can't play computer games. I must read a book before I watch TV. Thirdly, I have to get up early and make my bed. I have to go to bed before 10:00 p.m. What's more, I have to do some housework like sweeping the floor and folding clothes.
At first, I felt a little upset about these rules. But now I realize that my parents make these rules to help me. They can help me develop good habits and live a healthy and happy life. I will follow them willingly.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、家庭话题表达、顺序连接词运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有要点，结构清晰，通过顺序副词使叙事条理分明；语言准确，正确运用情态动词、原因状语从句等句式，补充了做家务的具体细节，内容充实；情感转变自然，体现了对父母的理解，符合写作规范，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
