【书面表达】
面对地震等自然灾害,人类的力量显得极其渺小。夏季是暴风雨多发的时节,我们应当学会保护自己。请以“How to Protect Ourselves During a Rainstorm”为题,根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇80—100词的短文,向英文网站投稿,提醒大家注意生命安全。标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。

How to Protect Ourselves During a Rainstorm
Rainstorms can be dangerous.
面对地震等自然灾害,人类的力量显得极其渺小。夏季是暴风雨多发的时节,我们应当学会保护自己。请以“How to Protect Ourselves During a Rainstorm”为题,根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇80—100词的短文,向英文网站投稿,提醒大家注意生命安全。标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Protect Ourselves During a Rainstorm
Rainstorms can be dangerous.
答案
One possible version:
How to Protect Ourselves During a Rainstorm
Rainstorms can be dangerous. It may cause serious landslides. When such terrible things happen, we should learn to protect ourselves.
When we are indoors, we mustn't get close to electricity. We mustn't use phones. When we are outdoors, we should stay at a safe place far away from tall trees. Finally, we should keep calm because only in this way can we find better ways to protect ourselves.
At the same time, schools should teach students some ways to protect themselves. Parents should also tell their children something about safety rules during a rainstorm.
How to Protect Ourselves During a Rainstorm
Rainstorms can be dangerous. It may cause serious landslides. When such terrible things happen, we should learn to protect ourselves.
When we are indoors, we mustn't get close to electricity. We mustn't use phones. When we are outdoors, we should stay at a safe place far away from tall trees. Finally, we should keep calm because only in this way can we find better ways to protect ourselves.
At the same time, schools should teach students some ways to protect themselves. Parents should also tell their children something about safety rules during a rainstorm.
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求:以“How to Protect Ourselves During a Rainstorm”为题,结合思维导图(暴风雨的危险、室内/户外保护方法、呼吁)写80-100词英文短文,开头已给出。解题思路:1. 承接开头说明暴风雨的危险(如滑坡);2. 分室内、户外阐述保护措施;3. 补充呼吁内容,确保语言连贯、符合字数要求。
【解析】
按照题目要求,结合思维导图内容组织语言:先点明暴风雨的潜在危险,再分别说明室内(远离电源、不使用电话)、户外(远离高树)的保护方法,最后呼吁学校和家长加强安全教育,确保短文语法正确、表达清晰,符合字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
How to Protect Ourselves During a Rainstorm
Rainstorms can be dangerous. It may cause serious landslides. When such terrible things happen, we should learn to protect ourselves.
When we are indoors, we mustn't get close to electricity. We mustn't use phones. When we are outdoors, we should stay at a safe place far away from tall trees. Finally, we should keep calm because only in this way can we find better ways to protect ourselves.
At the same time, schools should teach students some ways to protect themselves. Parents should also tell their children something about safety rules during a rainstorm.
【知识点】
英文书面表达、话题类写作、安全主题表达
【点评】
短文紧扣题目要求,结合思维导图涵盖了暴风雨的危险、室内外保护措施及呼吁内容,语言通顺,符合字数要求,能有效提醒大家暴风雨中的安全事项。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确题目要求:以“How to Protect Ourselves During a Rainstorm”为题,结合思维导图(暴风雨的危险、室内/户外保护方法、呼吁)写80-100词英文短文,开头已给出。解题思路:1. 承接开头说明暴风雨的危险(如滑坡);2. 分室内、户外阐述保护措施;3. 补充呼吁内容,确保语言连贯、符合字数要求。
【解析】
按照题目要求,结合思维导图内容组织语言:先点明暴风雨的潜在危险,再分别说明室内(远离电源、不使用电话)、户外(远离高树)的保护方法,最后呼吁学校和家长加强安全教育,确保短文语法正确、表达清晰,符合字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
How to Protect Ourselves During a Rainstorm
Rainstorms can be dangerous. It may cause serious landslides. When such terrible things happen, we should learn to protect ourselves.
When we are indoors, we mustn't get close to electricity. We mustn't use phones. When we are outdoors, we should stay at a safe place far away from tall trees. Finally, we should keep calm because only in this way can we find better ways to protect ourselves.
At the same time, schools should teach students some ways to protect themselves. Parents should also tell their children something about safety rules during a rainstorm.
【知识点】
英文书面表达、话题类写作、安全主题表达
【点评】
短文紧扣题目要求,结合思维导图涵盖了暴风雨的危险、室内外保护措施及呼吁内容,语言通顺,符合字数要求,能有效提醒大家暴风雨中的安全事项。
【难度系数】
0.6
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