2026年同步解析与测评学考练六年级英语下册人教版第81页答案
Ⅶ. Writing. (写作)
亲爱的同学,你的小学生活即将结束。在小学阶段,你一定有许多美好的记忆吧!请谈一谈你的小学校园生活,不少于 60 词。
My primary school life is over. It's time to say goodbye to my old school. I had a lot of fun at school. We studied from Monday to Friday. Our teachers were very kind. The school was clean and beautiful. There was a big playground. We often played football on the playground. We could also play the guitar and dance in the music room. I love my old school.









答案

My primary school life is over. It's time to say goodbye to my old school. I had a lot of fun at school. We studied from Monday to Friday. Our teachers were very kind. The school was clean and beautiful. There was a big playground. We often played football on the playground. We could also play the guitar and dance in the music room. I love my old school.

解析

【分析】
拿到这道写作题,首先要明确写作核心是回忆自己的小学校园生活,先理清写作逻辑:第一步先开篇点明小学生活即将结束的背景,引出回忆的主题;第二步从多个维度填充细节,比如上学的日常安排、老师的特点、校园的环境设施、自己和同学在校园里参与的各类活动,这些都是大家真实经历过的内容,很容易组织语言;最后收尾抒发对母校的喜爱不舍的情感,全程注意描述过往经历要用一般过去时,同时保证总词数不少于60词,就可以顺利完成写作。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题:直接开门见山说明小学生活即将结束,到了和母校告别的时刻,快速切入主题。
2. 中间填充细节:依次介绍在校的学习时间、老师的性格特点、校园的环境设施,再列举具体的校园活动,比如在操场踢足球、在音乐室弹吉他跳舞,用具体的细节让文章内容更饱满真实。
3. 结尾抒情:直接表达自己对母校的喜爱,收束全文。
4. 最后核查:确认时态使用正确,描述过往经历的部分都用一般过去时,总词数满足不少于60词的要求,没有语法错误。
【答案】
My primary school life is over. It's time to say goodbye to my old school. I had a lot of fun at school. We studied from Monday to Friday. Our teachers were very kind. The school was clean and beautiful. There was a big playground. We often played football on the playground. We could also play the guitar and dance in the music room. I love my old school.
【知识点】
一般过去时应用;校园主题英语写作;英语短文谋篇布局
【点评】
本题是小学阶段常见的叙事类写作题,贴近学生的真实生活经历,没有设置过高的写作门槛,学生只需要结合自身的真实校园记忆,按照“点题-叙事-抒情”的结构组织语言,搭配已学的校园相关词汇和基础句式就可以完成作答,参考范文内容贴合主题,细节生动,时态使用准确,完全符合题目的各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.7