2026年精彩练习就练这一本七年级英语上册外研版评议教辅第22页答案
假如你是李明,你正在参与学校举行的主题为“A teacher I like”的征文活动。请你根据以下相关信息,完成一篇稿件。


注意:1. 提供的信息仅供参考使用;2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;3. 词数70左右。

答案

标准提分版:
A teacher I like
My favourite teacher is Ms Li, our English teacher. She is young and always has a smile on her face.
I like her because her classes are very interesting. She uses games to help us learn. Also, she is very patient. Whenever I have questions, she helps me solve them.
Thanks to her, I have got a lot of useful knowledge and become more confident. I think she is a wonderful teacher.
进阶优化版:
A teacher I like
Of all my teachers, I like Mr Wang best. He is a knowledgeable maths teacher with a good sense of humour.
He makes his lessons lively and interesting. What impresses me most is his patience. Last term, when I failed an exam, he encouraged me to keep trying.
From him, I learn not only how to study but also how to be brave. He is truly a role model for me.

解析

【分析】
本题为英语话题征文写作题,主题是“A teacher I like”,解题思路如下:① 开篇点明自己喜欢的老师身份(学科、外貌/性格);② 阐述喜欢该老师的具体原因(如课堂有趣、有耐心等);③ 说明老师对自己的积极影响;④ 控制词数在70左右,且不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息,确保语言通顺、要点明确。
【解析】
写作时,首先开篇点题,介绍喜欢的老师(如英语老师Ms Li,年轻爱笑);接着说明喜欢的理由:课堂有趣(用游戏辅助学习)、有耐心(解答问题);最后总结老师带来的收获(知识、自信),符合词数要求,无违规信息。
【答案】
A teacher I like
My favourite teacher is Ms Li, our English teacher. She is young and always has a smile on her face.
I like her because her classes are very interesting. She uses games to help us learn. Also, she is very patient. Whenever I have questions, she helps me solve them.
Thanks to her, I have got a lot of useful knowledge and become more confident. I think she is a wonderful teacher.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题作文、词数规范
【点评】
本题考查学生围绕指定主题进行英语短文写作的能力,要求学生结合老师的特点阐述喜欢的原因,语言简洁,符合词数要求,同时需注意避免真实信息,是常见的英语写作题型,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6