2026年综合素质随堂反馈八年级英语上册译林版常州专版第36页答案
五、书面表达
假如你是张华,收到了校长室发来的学生意见调查表。请你认真阅读这份调查表,并结合自己的实际情况和想法,给校长室写一封100词左右的回信。

Dear headmaster,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.

Our library is modern and new. However, I don't think we have enough reading materials in it. Can we have some weekly magazines and newspapers to help us know what's happening in the world? I like the food in our dining hall, but I suggest that it should provide more local food.

My teachers are all kind and patient to us. With their support and help, I can learn all my subjects well.

Moreover, I hope there will be more clubs for us to choose from.




I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.

Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua

答案

Dear headmaster,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
Our library is modern and new. However, I don't think we have enough reading materials in it. Can we have some weekly magazines and newspapers to help us know what's happening in the world? I like the food in our dining hall, but I suggest that it should provide more local food. My teachers are all kind and patient to us. With their support and help, I can learn all my subjects well. Moreover, I hope there will be more clubs for us to choose from.
I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua

解析

【分析】
本题要求以张华的身份给校长室写一封回信,需结合调查表的三个核心问题(学校图书馆、食堂食物、老师学业帮助),并补充其他合理建议,属于英语应用文写作题。解题思路:① 开头点明写信目的(针对学校生活提建议);② 对应调查表问题,先肯定可取之处,再提出具体改进建议;③ 补充其他合理建议;④ 结尾表达希望建议有帮助,符合书信格式和词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头:用“I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.”点明写信目的;
2. 对应调查表问题:① 图书馆:肯定其现代新,建议补充周刊、报纸等读物;② 食堂:肯定食物,建议增加本地食物;③ 老师:肯定老师的帮助,说明对学习的作用;
3. 补充其他建议:希望增设更多社团;
4. 结尾:表达希望建议有助于改善校园生活,符合书信格式。
【答案】
Dear headmaster,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
Our library is modern and new. However, I don't think we have enough reading materials in it. Can we have some weekly magazines and newspapers to help us know what's happening in the world? I like the food in our dining hall, but I suggest that it should provide more local food. My teachers are all kind and patient to us. With their support and help, I can learn all my subjects well. Moreover, I hope there will be more clubs for us to choose from.
I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议表达、校园话题写作
【点评】
本题围绕校园生活主题,考查学生结合实际撰写英语建议信的能力,贴近学生生活,要求掌握书信格式与建议类表达,易于学生发挥。
【难度系数】
0.5