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第三节 书面表达(共15分)
时间都去哪儿了?这是许多成年人的感慨,也是一些中学生的烦恼:没有时间做作业,没有时间从事个人爱好……
其实,时间就在我们的掌握之中,关键是能否合理利用。请根据提示,以"How to Spend Our Time Properly"为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的看法。
要求:
(1) 词数80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2) 内容必须包括上图中的要点,可进行必要的发挥;确保语句连贯。
How to Spend Our Time Properly
Where has our time gone? How should we spend our time properly?
时间都去哪儿了?这是许多成年人的感慨,也是一些中学生的烦恼:没有时间做作业,没有时间从事个人爱好……
其实,时间就在我们的掌握之中,关键是能否合理利用。请根据提示,以"How to Spend Our Time Properly"为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的看法。
要求:
(1) 词数80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2) 内容必须包括上图中的要点,可进行必要的发挥;确保语句连贯。
How to Spend Our Time Properly
Where has our time gone? How should we spend our time properly?
As students, it is important for us to study, so we should make a plan every day.
Most importantly, we should listen carefully in class. For homework, we need to
make a list of tasks and work out how much time we need, and then finish them one
by one. Hobbies are also important in our lives and different students have different
kinds of hobbies. They can make us feel happy and confident. But we can't spend too
much time on them. We should maintain a balance between our study and our
hobbies.
We also need time for entertainment. For example, we spend time hanging out
with our friends and watching TV at the weekends.
If we make good use of our time, I'm sure we will have a happier school life.
Most importantly, we should listen carefully in class. For homework, we need to
make a list of tasks and work out how much time we need, and then finish them one
by one. Hobbies are also important in our lives and different students have different
kinds of hobbies. They can make us feel happy and confident. But we can't spend too
much time on them. We should maintain a balance between our study and our
hobbies.
We also need time for entertainment. For example, we spend time hanging out
with our friends and watching TV at the weekends.
If we make good use of our time, I'm sure we will have a happier school life.
答案
How to Spend Our Time Properly
Where has our time gone? How should we spend our time properly?
As students, it is important for us to study, so we should make a plan every day.
Most importantly, we should listen carefully in class. For homework, we need to
make a list of tasks and work out how much time we need, and then finish them one
by one. Hobbies are also important in our lives and different students have different
kinds of hobbies. They can make us feel happy and confident. But we can't spend too
much time on them. We should maintain a balance between our study and our
hobbies.
We also need time for entertainment. For example, we spend time hanging out
with our friends and watching TV at the weekends.
If we make good use of our time, I'm sure we will have a happier school life.
Where has our time gone? How should we spend our time properly?
As students, it is important for us to study, so we should make a plan every day.
Most importantly, we should listen carefully in class. For homework, we need to
make a list of tasks and work out how much time we need, and then finish them one
by one. Hobbies are also important in our lives and different students have different
kinds of hobbies. They can make us feel happy and confident. But we can't spend too
much time on them. We should maintain a balance between our study and our
hobbies.
We also need time for entertainment. For example, we spend time hanging out
with our friends and watching TV at the weekends.
If we make good use of our time, I'm sure we will have a happier school life.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“How to Spend Our Time Properly”为题写英语短文，需包含图中三个核心内容：学习方面（计划、听课、作业）、爱好方面（类型、好处、时间分配）、其他方面（如交流等），词数80左右，开头已给出。解题时需先梳理图中要点，将要点自然融入短文，注意语句连贯，符合英语表达习惯，确保覆盖所有要求内容。
【解析】
结合题目要求和图中要点，短文应先从学习角度说明要制定每日计划、认真听课、合理安排作业时间；再阐述爱好的重要性及需控制时间，平衡学习与爱好；最后补充其他方面的时间安排，形成连贯内容，具体如下：
As students, it is important for us to study, so we should make a plan every day. Most importantly, we should listen carefully in class. For homework, we need to make a list of tasks and work out how much time we need, and then finish them one by one. Hobbies are also important in our lives and different students have different kinds of hobbies. They can make us feel happy and confident. But we can't spend too much time on them. We should maintain a balance between our study and our hobbies. We also need time for other things, like hanging out with friends on weekends. If we make good use of our time, I'm sure we will have a happier school life.
【答案】
How to Spend Our Time Properly
Where has our time gone? How should we spend our time properly?
As students, it is important for us to study, so we should make a plan every day. Most importantly, we should listen carefully in class. For homework, we need to make a list of tasks and work out how much time we need, and then finish them one by one. Hobbies are also important in our lives and different students have different kinds of hobbies. They can make us feel happy and confident. But we can't spend too much time on them. We should maintain a balance between our study and our hobbies. We also need time for other things, like hanging out with friends on weekends. If we make good use of our time, I'm sure we will have a happier school life.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文、要点写作
【点评】
本文紧扣“合理利用时间”主题，全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁通顺，符合初中英语书面表达的要求，是一篇符合标准的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以“How to Spend Our Time Properly”为题写英语短文，需包含图中三个核心内容：学习方面（计划、听课、作业）、爱好方面（类型、好处、时间分配）、其他方面（如交流等），词数80左右，开头已给出。解题时需先梳理图中要点，将要点自然融入短文，注意语句连贯，符合英语表达习惯，确保覆盖所有要求内容。
【解析】
结合题目要求和图中要点，短文应先从学习角度说明要制定每日计划、认真听课、合理安排作业时间；再阐述爱好的重要性及需控制时间，平衡学习与爱好；最后补充其他方面的时间安排，形成连贯内容，具体如下：
As students, it is important for us to study, so we should make a plan every day. Most importantly, we should listen carefully in class. For homework, we need to make a list of tasks and work out how much time we need, and then finish them one by one. Hobbies are also important in our lives and different students have different kinds of hobbies. They can make us feel happy and confident. But we can't spend too much time on them. We should maintain a balance between our study and our hobbies. We also need time for other things, like hanging out with friends on weekends. If we make good use of our time, I'm sure we will have a happier school life.
【答案】
How to Spend Our Time Properly
Where has our time gone? How should we spend our time properly?
As students, it is important for us to study, so we should make a plan every day. Most importantly, we should listen carefully in class. For homework, we need to make a list of tasks and work out how much time we need, and then finish them one by one. Hobbies are also important in our lives and different students have different kinds of hobbies. They can make us feel happy and confident. But we can't spend too much time on them. We should maintain a balance between our study and our hobbies. We also need time for other things, like hanging out with friends on weekends. If we make good use of our time, I'm sure we will have a happier school life.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文、要点写作
【点评】
本文紧扣“合理利用时间”主题，全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁通顺，符合初中英语书面表达的要求，是一篇符合标准的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
