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五、书面表达。
学校正在举办以"My English Learning Experience"为主题的演讲活动。假设你是李明，请你用英文写一篇演讲稿，介绍自己的英语学习经历。
写作提示：
1.你在英语学习中遇到了哪些困难；
2.你是如何克服这些困难的；
3.你从这段经历中学到了什么。
写作要求：
1.文中须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名称；
3.词数70个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My English Learning Experience
Hi, I'm Li Ming. Today, I'm glad to share my English learning experience.
学校正在举办以"My English Learning Experience"为主题的演讲活动。假设你是李明，请你用英文写一篇演讲稿，介绍自己的英语学习经历。
写作提示：
1.你在英语学习中遇到了哪些困难；
2.你是如何克服这些困难的；
3.你从这段经历中学到了什么。
写作要求：
1.文中须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名称；
3.词数70个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My English Learning Experience
Hi, I'm Li Ming. Today, I'm glad to share my English learning experience.
答案
My English Learning Experience
Hi, I'm Li Ming. Today, I'm glad to
share my English learning experience.
I found it hard to learn English well at
first. I couldn't understand what teachers
said in class. In order to improve, I started
listening to short news in English daily,
repeating the listening materials over and
over again. And I spent 20 minutes
reviewing what I learned before going to
bed. Gradually, I understood better.
Speaking was another problem. I was
afraid to make mistakes. My English
teacher encouraged me a lot. She helped
me build confidence.
After that, I learned no matter how
hard it is, we should stick to it and never
give up.
Thank you!
Hi, I'm Li Ming. Today, I'm glad to
share my English learning experience.
I found it hard to learn English well at
first. I couldn't understand what teachers
said in class. In order to improve, I started
listening to short news in English daily,
repeating the listening materials over and
over again. And I spent 20 minutes
reviewing what I learned before going to
bed. Gradually, I understood better.
Speaking was another problem. I was
afraid to make mistakes. My English
teacher encouraged me a lot. She helped
me build confidence.
After that, I learned no matter how
hard it is, we should stick to it and never
give up.
Thank you!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道演讲稿写作题，首先要明确三个必须覆盖的核心要点：学习中遇到的困难、克服困难的方法、获得的感悟。首先第一步，先选取贴合中学生真实学习场景的困难，比如初期听不懂课堂内容、不敢开口说英语，内容真实不生硬；第二步，对应困难匹配合理的解决方法，比如日常磨耳朵听英语素材、睡前复习知识点、在老师帮助下建立开口的信心，逻辑通顺；第三步，最后提炼出符合主题的感悟，点明坚持不放弃的道理，最后加上演讲稿的常规致谢收尾，同时控制总词数符合要求，全程注意不要出现真实的个人和学校信息即可。
【解析】
写作可按照三步完成：
1. 承接给定开头，先介绍自己初期学习英语遇到的两类困难：一是课上无法听懂老师的授课内容，二是害怕说英语出错不敢开口。
2. 对应困难写出解决措施：为了提升听力每天坚持听简短的英语新闻反复跟读，每天花20分钟睡前复习当日所学内容，在英语老师的鼓励下逐步建立学习自信。
3. 最后点明自己从这段经历得到的收获：无论遇到多大的困难，都要坚持下去不要轻易放弃，最后补充演讲稿的致谢语收尾，调整语句让表达连贯自然，核对所有提示要点都覆盖，词数符合要求。
【答案】
My English Learning Experience
Hi, I'm Li Ming. Today, I'm glad to share my English learning experience.
I found it hard to learn English well at first. I couldn't understand what teachers said in class. In order to improve, I started listening to short news in English daily, repeating the listening materials over and over again. And I spent 20 minutes reviewing what I learned before going to bed. Gradually, I understood better.
Speaking was another problem. I was afraid to make mistakes. My English teacher encouraged me a lot. She helped me build confidence.
After that, I learned no matter how hard it is, we should stick to it and never give up.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作，学习类话题表达，要点式写作
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部写作要点，叙事脉络清晰，从遇到困难到付诸行动克服困难再到总结感悟层层递进，所用表达都是中学生阶段的常用句式和短语，难度适配，同时符合演讲稿的口语化表达特点，收尾的致谢也贴合演讲场景，是一篇非常规范的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道演讲稿写作题，首先要明确三个必须覆盖的核心要点：学习中遇到的困难、克服困难的方法、获得的感悟。首先第一步，先选取贴合中学生真实学习场景的困难，比如初期听不懂课堂内容、不敢开口说英语，内容真实不生硬；第二步，对应困难匹配合理的解决方法，比如日常磨耳朵听英语素材、睡前复习知识点、在老师帮助下建立开口的信心，逻辑通顺；第三步，最后提炼出符合主题的感悟，点明坚持不放弃的道理，最后加上演讲稿的常规致谢收尾，同时控制总词数符合要求，全程注意不要出现真实的个人和学校信息即可。
【解析】
写作可按照三步完成：
1. 承接给定开头，先介绍自己初期学习英语遇到的两类困难：一是课上无法听懂老师的授课内容，二是害怕说英语出错不敢开口。
2. 对应困难写出解决措施：为了提升听力每天坚持听简短的英语新闻反复跟读，每天花20分钟睡前复习当日所学内容，在英语老师的鼓励下逐步建立学习自信。
3. 最后点明自己从这段经历得到的收获：无论遇到多大的困难，都要坚持下去不要轻易放弃，最后补充演讲稿的致谢语收尾，调整语句让表达连贯自然，核对所有提示要点都覆盖，词数符合要求。
【答案】
My English Learning Experience
Hi, I'm Li Ming. Today, I'm glad to share my English learning experience.
I found it hard to learn English well at first. I couldn't understand what teachers said in class. In order to improve, I started listening to short news in English daily, repeating the listening materials over and over again. And I spent 20 minutes reviewing what I learned before going to bed. Gradually, I understood better.
Speaking was another problem. I was afraid to make mistakes. My English teacher encouraged me a lot. She helped me build confidence.
After that, I learned no matter how hard it is, we should stick to it and never give up.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作，学习类话题表达，要点式写作
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部写作要点，叙事脉络清晰，从遇到困难到付诸行动克服困难再到总结感悟层层递进，所用表达都是中学生阶段的常用句式和短语，难度适配，同时符合演讲稿的口语化表达特点，收尾的致谢也贴合演讲场景，是一篇非常规范的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
