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假如你是黄平，你校英语广播站正在招收新成员，包含以下职位：主持人、记者和音乐总监。请你用英语写一封自荐信，内容包括：
1. 想申请的职位；2. 你的优势；3. 想加入校广播站的原因。
参考词汇：music director 音乐总监；outgoing 外向的
注意：1. 词数100左右，信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息；3. 自荐信必须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm very interested in working at the school radio station.
Yours,
Huang Ping
假如你是黄平，你校英语广播站正在招收新成员，包含以下职位：主持人、记者和音乐总监。请你用英语写一封自荐信，内容包括：
1. 想申请的职位；2. 你的优势；3. 想加入校广播站的原因。
参考词汇：music director 音乐总监；outgoing 外向的
注意：1. 词数100左右，信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息；3. 自荐信必须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm very interested in working at the school radio station.
I'm writing to apply for the position of the radio host. I firmly believe that I'm the most suitable person to take on this role because of my unique advantages. Firstly, I served as a host in the English corner, so I have gained rich experience and I am good at spoken English. Secondly, I'm outgoing, which enables me to make broadcasts in an interesting and exciting way. Thirdly, an important quality for a radio host is the ability to remain calm in any situation, and I possess this ability. I have longed for the job for a long time because I'm passionate about the position of the host and I'm willing to challenge myself. Additionally, as a member of our school, I feel a sense of responsibility to contribute to its development and bring joy to others.
Thank you for considering my application. I hope I can have the opportunity to be the host.
Yours,
Huang Ping
答案
写作能力突破
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为自荐信。②时态:主要为"一般过去时"和"一般现在时"。③提示:文章需包含三个提示点,注意行文连贯,无明显拼写或语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,审题立意,从三个选项中任选一个,说明所选职位。第二步,详细介绍你申请这个职位的优势、你的爱好、曾受……影响(或指导)以及曾经在……场合有所表现。第三步,升华主题,摆明参加广播站的优良动机。
[词句积累]
①apply for 申请 ②serve as 充当,担任 ③long for 渴望
④ be passionate about 对……有激情 ⑤ a sense of responsibility 一种责任感
⑥I firmly believe that I'm the most suitable person to take on this role because of my unique advantages. (that 引导宾语从句)
⑦ Secondly, I'm outgoing, which enables me to make broadcasts in an interesting and exciting way. (which 引导非限制性定语从句)
One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm very interested in working at the school radio station. I'm writing to apply for the position of the radio host. I firmly believe that I'm the most suitable person to take on this role because of my unique advantages. Firstly, I served as a host in the English corner, so I have gained rich experience and I am good at spoken English. Secondly, I'm outgoing, which enables me to make broadcasts in an interesting and exciting
⇨ enable sb to do sth 使某人能够做某事
way. Thirdly, an important quality for a radio host is the ability to remain calm in any situation, and I possess this ability. I have longed for the job for a long time because I'm passionate about the position of the host and I'm willing to challenge myself. Additionally, as a member of our school, I feel a sense of responsibility to contribute to its development and bring joy to others.
Thank you for considering my application. I hope I can have the opportunity to be the host.
Yours,
Huang Ping
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为自荐信。②时态:主要为"一般过去时"和"一般现在时"。③提示:文章需包含三个提示点,注意行文连贯,无明显拼写或语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,审题立意,从三个选项中任选一个,说明所选职位。第二步,详细介绍你申请这个职位的优势、你的爱好、曾受……影响(或指导)以及曾经在……场合有所表现。第三步,升华主题,摆明参加广播站的优良动机。
[词句积累]
①apply for 申请 ②serve as 充当,担任 ③long for 渴望
④ be passionate about 对……有激情 ⑤ a sense of responsibility 一种责任感
⑥I firmly believe that I'm the most suitable person to take on this role because of my unique advantages. (that 引导宾语从句)
⑦ Secondly, I'm outgoing, which enables me to make broadcasts in an interesting and exciting way. (which 引导非限制性定语从句)
One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm very interested in working at the school radio station. I'm writing to apply for the position of the radio host. I firmly believe that I'm the most suitable person to take on this role because of my unique advantages. Firstly, I served as a host in the English corner, so I have gained rich experience and I am good at spoken English. Secondly, I'm outgoing, which enables me to make broadcasts in an interesting and exciting
⇨ enable sb to do sth 使某人能够做某事
way. Thirdly, an important quality for a radio host is the ability to remain calm in any situation, and I possess this ability. I have longed for the job for a long time because I'm passionate about the position of the host and I'm willing to challenge myself. Additionally, as a member of our school, I feel a sense of responsibility to contribute to its development and bring joy to others.
Thank you for considering my application. I hope I can have the opportunity to be the host.
Yours,
Huang Ping
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先先完成审题梳理：第一，明确体裁是英语自荐信，属于应用文，要求必须覆盖三个核心要点：申请的职位、个人优势、加入广播站的原因，词数控制在100左右，信的开头结尾已经给出不需要额外书写。接下来梳理写作思路：第一步，先从主持人、记者、音乐总监三个职位里选一个自己熟悉、容易展开描述的方向，开篇直接点明要申请的具体职位。第二步，分层介绍自身匹配该职位的优势，用题干表格给出的高级逻辑连接词first of all、in addition等替代普通的first、second，还可以用上not only...but also、so...that、定语从句这些高级表达升级简单句，让内容更出彩。第三步，说明自己想加入广播站的原因，表达申请诚意，全程注意不要出现真实的个人、学校相关信息，时态上介绍自身特质用一般现在时，描述过往相关经历用一般过去时即可。
【解析】
1. 审题确认：
体裁：自荐信（应用文）
人称：第一人称
时态：以一般现在时介绍自身特质为主，描述过往相关经历使用一般过去时
必写要点：①申请的具体职位 ②适配职位的个人优势 ③申请加入广播站的原因
2. 行文搭建：
① 承接给定的开头，直接点明自己想要申请的职位；
② 使用逻辑连接词分层阐述优势，结合相关经历佐证，体现自己完全适配该职位；
③ 说明加入广播站的动机，表达申请诚意和期待。
3. 润色升级：
参考题干给出的高级表达，用suitable替换普通的fit，用not only...but also连接并列性格特质，用so...that句型、定语从句升级零散的简单句，让行文更流畅高级，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm very interested in working at the school radio station. I'm writing to apply for the position of the radio host. I firmly believe that I'm the most suitable person to take on this role because of my unique advantages. Firstly, I served as a host in the English corner, so I have gained rich experience and I am good at spoken English. Secondly, I'm outgoing, which enables me to make broadcasts in an interesting and exciting way. Thirdly, an important quality for a radio host is the ability to remain calm in any situation, and I possess this ability. I have longed for the job for a long time because I'm passionate about the position of the host and I'm willing to challenge myself. Additionally, as a member of our school, I feel a sense of responsibility to contribute to its development and bring joy to others.
Thank you for considering my application. I hope I can have the opportunity to be the host.
Yours,
Huang Ping
【知识点】
英语书信写作，高级句式运用，语篇逻辑衔接
【点评】
本题是贴近校园日常场景的自荐信写作，题干还给出了词汇、句型升级的参考提示，有效降低了写作门槛，学生只要覆盖全部三个核心要点，合理使用逻辑连接词梳理行文顺序，避免基础的拼写语法错误就能拿到合格分数，灵活运用题干给出的高级表达还能进一步提升作文档次，拿到高分。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先先完成审题梳理：第一，明确体裁是英语自荐信，属于应用文，要求必须覆盖三个核心要点：申请的职位、个人优势、加入广播站的原因，词数控制在100左右，信的开头结尾已经给出不需要额外书写。接下来梳理写作思路：第一步，先从主持人、记者、音乐总监三个职位里选一个自己熟悉、容易展开描述的方向，开篇直接点明要申请的具体职位。第二步，分层介绍自身匹配该职位的优势，用题干表格给出的高级逻辑连接词first of all、in addition等替代普通的first、second，还可以用上not only...but also、so...that、定语从句这些高级表达升级简单句，让内容更出彩。第三步，说明自己想加入广播站的原因，表达申请诚意，全程注意不要出现真实的个人、学校相关信息，时态上介绍自身特质用一般现在时，描述过往相关经历用一般过去时即可。
【解析】
1. 审题确认：
体裁：自荐信（应用文）
人称：第一人称
时态：以一般现在时介绍自身特质为主，描述过往相关经历使用一般过去时
必写要点：①申请的具体职位 ②适配职位的个人优势 ③申请加入广播站的原因
2. 行文搭建：
① 承接给定的开头，直接点明自己想要申请的职位；
② 使用逻辑连接词分层阐述优势，结合相关经历佐证，体现自己完全适配该职位；
③ 说明加入广播站的动机，表达申请诚意和期待。
3. 润色升级：
参考题干给出的高级表达，用suitable替换普通的fit，用not only...but also连接并列性格特质，用so...that句型、定语从句升级零散的简单句，让行文更流畅高级，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm very interested in working at the school radio station. I'm writing to apply for the position of the radio host. I firmly believe that I'm the most suitable person to take on this role because of my unique advantages. Firstly, I served as a host in the English corner, so I have gained rich experience and I am good at spoken English. Secondly, I'm outgoing, which enables me to make broadcasts in an interesting and exciting way. Thirdly, an important quality for a radio host is the ability to remain calm in any situation, and I possess this ability. I have longed for the job for a long time because I'm passionate about the position of the host and I'm willing to challenge myself. Additionally, as a member of our school, I feel a sense of responsibility to contribute to its development and bring joy to others.
Thank you for considering my application. I hope I can have the opportunity to be the host.
Yours,
Huang Ping
【知识点】
英语书信写作，高级句式运用，语篇逻辑衔接
【点评】
本题是贴近校园日常场景的自荐信写作，题干还给出了词汇、句型升级的参考提示，有效降低了写作门槛，学生只要覆盖全部三个核心要点，合理使用逻辑连接词梳理行文顺序，避免基础的拼写语法错误就能拿到合格分数，灵活运用题干给出的高级表达还能进一步提升作文档次，拿到高分。
【难度系数】
0.7
