【写作背景】
本单元主要谈论了同学们即将结束初中生活，对三年的初中学习生活表达感悟，以及对即将到来的高中生活展开期望。
【写作要求】
假如你叫李平，毕业在即，请你根据以下提示给你的英语老师(Miss Zhang)写一封信。
提示：
(1)表达感激之情；
(2)回忆印象最深的一件事情(一次帮助、一次鼓励或一次批评……)
要求:
(1)不能逐字翻译；
(2)可适当发挥，加入自己的观点；
(3)写作词数为80个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Zhang，
As you know，


Best wishes to you!
Yours，
Li Ping
【思路点拨】
审题:本文要求给老师写一封信
定要点:
1.表达感激之情；
2.回忆印象最深的一件事情(一次帮助、一次鼓励或一次批评……)
定人称:第一人称
定时态:一般过去时
句型:
I've made great progress in...with your help.
You encouraged/helped me to do better in...
When I face difficulties in my daily life, your spirit...
I am sure I will grow up better with...
【我的作文】
Dear Miss Zhang，
As you know，



Best wishes to you!
Yours，
Li Ping

单元复习课
【我的作文】
Dear Miss Zhang,
As you know, I've made great progress in English with your help. At this moment, I want to say "Thank you".
I still remember it was very difficult for me at the beginning of learning English. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn't do well in it. I lost my confidence and almost gave it up. As soon as you knew it, you had a long talk with me about how to learn English well. You always encouraged me to do better whenever I made a little progress. Since then I have been interested in it and I improved a lot. What's more, when I face difficulties in my daily life, your spirit always guides me.
Although I have to say goodbye to you soon, I still think I am so lucky to be one of your students. I'm sure I will grow up better with your care. I hope you can relax yourself and keep healthy.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Ping

【分析】首先审题明确：本文是毕业前写给英语老师Miss Zhang的书信，需包含两个核心要点：表达感激之情、回忆印象最深的一件事（帮助/鼓励等）；接着确定写作要素：人称用第一人称，回忆的事例用一般过去时，表达情感用一般现在时；最后结合给定句型，避免逐字翻译，适当补充细节，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】写作时，开头先点明在老师帮助下取得进步，直接表达感激；中间回忆具体事例：初学时英语困难、想放弃，老师谈话鼓励，自己因此进步，紧扣“印象最深的事”；结尾再次抒发感激与祝福，符合书信格式，要点齐全，语言流畅。
【答案】Dear Miss Zhang,
As you know, I've made great progress in English with your help. At this moment, I want to say "Thank you".
I still remember it was very difficult for me at the beginning of learning English. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn't do well in it. I lost my confidence and almost gave it up. As soon as you knew it, you had a long talk with me about how to learn English well. You always encouraged me to do better whenever I made a little progress. Since then I have been interested in it and I improved a lot. What's more, when I face difficulties in my daily life, your spirit always guides me.
Although I have to say goodbye to you soon, I still think I am so lucky to be one of your students. I'm sure I will grow up better with your care. I hope you can relax yourself and keep healthy.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Ping
【知识点】英语书信写作，感恩主题表达，一般过去时运用
【点评】本文紧扣写作要求，要点完整，情感真挚，事例具体，运用指定句型，时态准确，语言流畅自然，符合毕业前给老师写信的语境，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】0.5