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五、假如你叫李华，你的英国朋友 Jack 将作为交换生于下学期来中国学习交流，他昨天给你发来一封电子邮件，向你询问一些中国的礼仪和习俗，以便更好地适应在中国的学习和生活。请根据以下图示和写作要求，给 Jack 回复一封电子邮件。
写作要求：
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 90 词左右（文中已给出部分不计入总词数）。
Dear Jack,
I know you're excited about coming to China soon! Here are some things to know about Chinese customs.
If you have more questions, feel free to ask!
Yours,
Li Hua
写作要求：
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 90 词左右（文中已给出部分不计入总词数）。
Dear Jack,
I know you're excited about coming to China soon! Here are some things to know about Chinese customs.
Firstly, when you meet someone for the first time, it's polite to say hello with a smile. It helps you make friends easily.
Secondly, if you visit a friend, try to arrive on time. It's polite to bring a small gift, such as fruit or tea. When entering, it's polite to take off your shoes if the host does so.
Thirdly, table manners are important. It's polite to wait until the host starts eating. Also, try using chopsticks — it's a sign of respect. Don't stick your chopsticks into your rice bowl.
Last but not least, don't be surprised if people ask you questions about your age, hobbies, or even your family. This is very common in China! People like to get to know others quickly.
If you have more questions, feel free to ask!
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I know you're excited about coming to China
soon! Here are some things to know about Chinese
customs.
Firstly, when you meet someone for the first
time, it's polite to say hello with a smile. It helps you
make friends easily.
Secondly, if you visit a friend, try to arrive on
time. It's polite to bring a small gift, such as fruit or
tea. When entering, it's polite to take off your shoes if
the host does so.
Thirdly, table manners are important. It's polite to
wait until the host starts eating. Also, try using
chopsticks — it's a sign of respect. Don't stick your
chopsticks into your rice bowl.
Last but not least, don't be surprised if people
ask you questions about your age, hobbies, or even
your family. This is very common in China! People like
to get to know others quickly.
If you have more questions, feel free to ask!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jack,
I know you're excited about coming to China
soon! Here are some things to know about Chinese
customs.
Firstly, when you meet someone for the first
time, it's polite to say hello with a smile. It helps you
make friends easily.
Secondly, if you visit a friend, try to arrive on
time. It's polite to bring a small gift, such as fruit or
tea. When entering, it's polite to take off your shoes if
the host does so.
Thirdly, table manners are important. It's polite to
wait until the host starts eating. Also, try using
chopsticks — it's a sign of respect. Don't stick your
chopsticks into your rice bowl.
Last but not least, don't be surprised if people
ask you questions about your age, hobbies, or even
your family. This is very common in China! People like
to get to know others quickly.
If you have more questions, feel free to ask!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先先审题：明确写作身份是李华，收信人是即将来中国做交换生的英国朋友Jack，写作核心目的是给对方介绍中国的日常习俗，帮他适应中国生活。接下来梳理要覆盖的所有要点：思维导图给出了三个核心方向，分别是问候礼仪、拜访朋友的礼仪、餐桌礼仪，我们可以按照分点说明的逻辑来写，先讲见面问候的注意事项，再讲登门拜访的相关礼节，接着讲餐桌上的礼仪，最后可以适当补充一个其他的日常小习俗，让内容更饱满，语气要符合朋友之间交流的轻松感，控制总词数在要求范围内，不要出现真实的个人、学校、地名信息即可。
【解析】
1. 确定文体：日常交际电子邮件，时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称为主，语气友好亲切。
2. 搭建内容框架：
① 对应greetings要点：说明初次见面时面带微笑问好是很礼貌的行为，能帮你快速交到朋友。
② 对应visiting a friend要点：说明拜访朋友要尽量准时，可以带水果、茶叶这类小礼物，如果主人进门就脱鞋，你也跟着脱鞋是很得体的做法。
③ 对应table manners要点：说明用餐时要等主人先动筷，要正确使用筷子，不要把筷子插在米饭里，这是不礼貌的。
④ 适当补充其他习俗：补充说明中国人日常会询问对方的年龄、爱好、家庭情况，这是表达友好的方式，不用感到意外。
3. 把内容用流畅的英文串联起来，衔接自然，符合邮件的表达习惯，控制总词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I know you're excited about coming to China soon! Here are some things to know about Chinese customs.
Firstly, when you meet someone for the first time, it's polite to say hello with a smile. It helps you make friends easily.
Secondly, if you visit a friend, try to arrive on time. It's polite to bring a small gift, such as fruit or tea. When entering, it's polite to take off your shoes if the host does so.
Thirdly, table manners are important. It's polite to wait until the host starts eating. Also, try using chopsticks — it's a sign of respect. Don't stick your chopsticks into your rice bowl.
Last but not least, don't be surprised if people ask you questions about your age, hobbies, or even your family. This is very common in China! People like to get to know others quickly.
If you have more questions, feel free to ask!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作，中国习俗表达，情景交际
【点评】
本题结合跨文化交际的真实场景命题，既考察学生的英语书面表达能力，也引导学生了解、传播中华传统礼仪文化。写作时只要紧扣题干给出的三个核心提示点，用清晰的逻辑分点介绍，补充合理的细节，就能写出符合要求的作文，同时要注意语气符合好友交流的语境，避免表达生硬。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题，首先先审题：明确写作身份是李华，收信人是即将来中国做交换生的英国朋友Jack，写作核心目的是给对方介绍中国的日常习俗，帮他适应中国生活。接下来梳理要覆盖的所有要点：思维导图给出了三个核心方向，分别是问候礼仪、拜访朋友的礼仪、餐桌礼仪，我们可以按照分点说明的逻辑来写，先讲见面问候的注意事项，再讲登门拜访的相关礼节，接着讲餐桌上的礼仪，最后可以适当补充一个其他的日常小习俗，让内容更饱满，语气要符合朋友之间交流的轻松感，控制总词数在要求范围内，不要出现真实的个人、学校、地名信息即可。
【解析】
1. 确定文体：日常交际电子邮件，时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称为主，语气友好亲切。
2. 搭建内容框架：
① 对应greetings要点：说明初次见面时面带微笑问好是很礼貌的行为，能帮你快速交到朋友。
② 对应visiting a friend要点：说明拜访朋友要尽量准时，可以带水果、茶叶这类小礼物，如果主人进门就脱鞋，你也跟着脱鞋是很得体的做法。
③ 对应table manners要点：说明用餐时要等主人先动筷，要正确使用筷子，不要把筷子插在米饭里，这是不礼貌的。
④ 适当补充其他习俗：补充说明中国人日常会询问对方的年龄、爱好、家庭情况，这是表达友好的方式，不用感到意外。
3. 把内容用流畅的英文串联起来，衔接自然，符合邮件的表达习惯，控制总词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I know you're excited about coming to China soon! Here are some things to know about Chinese customs.
Firstly, when you meet someone for the first time, it's polite to say hello with a smile. It helps you make friends easily.
Secondly, if you visit a friend, try to arrive on time. It's polite to bring a small gift, such as fruit or tea. When entering, it's polite to take off your shoes if the host does so.
Thirdly, table manners are important. It's polite to wait until the host starts eating. Also, try using chopsticks — it's a sign of respect. Don't stick your chopsticks into your rice bowl.
Last but not least, don't be surprised if people ask you questions about your age, hobbies, or even your family. This is very common in China! People like to get to know others quickly.
If you have more questions, feel free to ask!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作，中国习俗表达，情景交际
【点评】
本题结合跨文化交际的真实场景命题，既考察学生的英语书面表达能力，也引导学生了解、传播中华传统礼仪文化。写作时只要紧扣题干给出的三个核心提示点，用清晰的逻辑分点介绍，补充合理的细节，就能写出符合要求的作文，同时要注意语气符合好友交流的语境，避免表达生硬。
【难度系数】
0.6
