写作指导
假如你是李明,下面是你一天的主要活动,请以“My day”为题,根据提示向大家介绍你一天的活动情况。

要求:
1.包含表格中提供的信息,可适当发挥;2.短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其他相关信息;3.不少于60词。
写作佳句
1. 让我告诉你我的学校生活。
2. 你想知道我今天过得怎么样吗?
Do you
3. 我通常六点半起床。
I usually get up
4. 我从不在上学的晚上玩电脑游戏或看电视。
I
5. 我起得很早,上学从不迟到。
I
6. 我每天都过得很愉快。你呢?
I
思路导引
1. 人称:第
2. 时态:
3. 体裁:
4. 列提纲

写作范例
My day
My name is Li Ming. I'm a student. I have a busy day.
I get up at seven o'clock and get dressed at five past seven in the morning. Then I have breakfast. I go to school at seven thirty and I get to school at eight o'clock. At half past eight we have classes. Every weekday we have six classes. After school I go home. I do my homework at seven thirty. I go to bed at nine thirty in the evening.
This is my day. What about yours?
假如你是李明,下面是你一天的主要活动,请以“My day”为题,根据提示向大家介绍你一天的活动情况。
要求:
1.包含表格中提供的信息,可适当发挥;2.短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其他相关信息;3.不少于60词。
写作佳句
1. 让我告诉你我的学校生活。
Let
me
tell
you about my school life.2. 你想知道我今天过得怎么样吗?
Do you
want
to
know
about
my day?3. 我通常六点半起床。
I usually get up
at
half
past
six
.4. 我从不在上学的晚上玩电脑游戏或看电视。
I
never
play
computer
games
or watch TV on school nights.5. 我起得很早,上学从不迟到。
I
get
up
early
and I'm never
late
for
school.6. 我每天都过得很愉快。你呢?
I
have
a
good
time
every day. What about
you?思路导引
1. 人称:第
一
人称2. 时态:
一般现在时
3. 体裁:
记叙
文4. 列提纲
写作范例
My day
My name is Li Ming. I'm a student. I have a busy day.
I get up at seven o'clock and get dressed at five past seven in the morning. Then I have breakfast. I go to school at seven thirty and I get to school at eight o'clock. At half past eight we have classes. Every weekday we have six classes. After school I go home. I do my homework at seven thirty. I go to bed at nine thirty in the evening.
This is my day. What about yours?
答案
【写作佳句】
1. Let me tell
2. want to know about
3. at half past six
4. never play computer games
5. get up early; never late for
6. have a good time; What about
【思路导引】
1. 一
2. 一般现在时
3. 记叙
1. Let me tell
2. want to know about
3. at half past six
4. never play computer games
5. get up early; never late for
6. have a good time; What about
【思路导引】
1. 一
2. 一般现在时
3. 记叙
解析
【分析】
本题分为补充写作佳句短语和明确写作思路要素两部分。写作佳句需结合固定搭配与句意填写正确短语,思路导引需根据写作要求确定人称、时态、体裁。
【解析】
1. 写作佳句填空:
1. 固定搭配“let sb do sth”,对应句意“让我告诉你”,填Let me tell;
2. 固定搭配“want to know about”表“想知道关于……”,符合句意;
3. 时间“六点半”的正确英文表达为at half past six;
4. 固定短语“play computer games”,结合“从不”的语义,填never play computer games;
5. “起得很早”是get up early,“上学从不迟到”是never late for school;
6. “过得愉快”是have a good time,“你呢”是What about you?
2. 思路导引:
1. 以第一人称“我”叙述,故填一;
2. 描述日常活动用一般现在时,故填一般现在时;
3. 以叙述日常活动为主,属于记叙文,故填记叙。
【答案】
【写作佳句】
1. Let me tell
2. want to know about
3. at half past six
4. never play computer games
5. get up early; never late for
6. have a good time; What about
【思路导引】
1. 一
2. 一般现在时
3. 记叙
【知识点】
英语固定搭配、一般现在时、记叙文写作
【点评】
本题考察英语基础短语搭配、时态运用及写作基本要素,内容贴近日常,难度适中,适合巩固英语基础。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题分为补充写作佳句短语和明确写作思路要素两部分。写作佳句需结合固定搭配与句意填写正确短语,思路导引需根据写作要求确定人称、时态、体裁。
【解析】
1. 写作佳句填空:
1. 固定搭配“let sb do sth”,对应句意“让我告诉你”,填Let me tell;
2. 固定搭配“want to know about”表“想知道关于……”,符合句意;
3. 时间“六点半”的正确英文表达为at half past six;
4. 固定短语“play computer games”,结合“从不”的语义,填never play computer games;
5. “起得很早”是get up early,“上学从不迟到”是never late for school;
6. “过得愉快”是have a good time,“你呢”是What about you?
2. 思路导引:
1. 以第一人称“我”叙述,故填一;
2. 描述日常活动用一般现在时,故填一般现在时;
3. 以叙述日常活动为主,属于记叙文,故填记叙。
【答案】
【写作佳句】
1. Let me tell
2. want to know about
3. at half past six
4. never play computer games
5. get up early; never late for
6. have a good time; What about
【思路导引】
1. 一
2. 一般现在时
3. 记叙
【知识点】
英语固定搭配、一般现在时、记叙文写作
【点评】
本题考察英语基础短语搭配、时态运用及写作基本要素,内容贴近日常,难度适中,适合巩固英语基础。
【难度系数】
0.7
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