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假如你是李华，近期你们学校组织大家一起学习名人（伟人）生平事迹。请你根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语演讲稿介绍袁隆平。
内容提示：
1. 生卒：1930年9月7日出生于北京，2021年5月22日逝世于长沙。
2. 经历：从小立志学农；
1953年毕业于西南农学院（Southwest Agricultural College），成为一名教师；
20世纪60年代开始研究杂交水稻，解决了中国的粮食问题；
20世纪70年代，成功培育出杂交水稻，推动杂交水稻走向世界；
2019年9月，被授予“共和国勋章”。
3. 评价及个人观点：
评价：杂交水稻研究领域的开创者和带头人，被誉为“杂交水稻之父”。
个人观点：写出自己的观点（一至两个）。
要求：
1. 包含所有提示内容，可以适当发挥；
2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：
农业 agriculture 杂交水稻 hybrid rice 共和国勋章 the Medal of the Republic
Good afternoon, my dear teachers and fellow students.
Today, I'd like to tell you the story of an excellent expert, Yuan Longping.
假如你是李华，近期你们学校组织大家一起学习名人（伟人）生平事迹。请你根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语演讲稿介绍袁隆平。
内容提示：
1. 生卒：1930年9月7日出生于北京，2021年5月22日逝世于长沙。
2. 经历：从小立志学农；
1953年毕业于西南农学院（Southwest Agricultural College），成为一名教师；
20世纪60年代开始研究杂交水稻，解决了中国的粮食问题；
20世纪70年代，成功培育出杂交水稻，推动杂交水稻走向世界；
2019年9月，被授予“共和国勋章”。
3. 评价及个人观点：
评价：杂交水稻研究领域的开创者和带头人，被誉为“杂交水稻之父”。
个人观点：写出自己的观点（一至两个）。
要求：
1. 包含所有提示内容，可以适当发挥；
2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：
农业 agriculture 杂交水稻 hybrid rice 共和国勋章 the Medal of the Republic
Good afternoon, my dear teachers and fellow students.
Today, I'd like to tell you the story of an excellent expert, Yuan Longping.
My favourite scientist—Yuan Longping, who has made a great contribution to our country. Yuan Longping was born in Beijing on September 7th, 1930. What is a pity is that he died on May 22nd, 2021, which was the loss of our country.
He aspired to study agriculture from a young age. After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College in 1953, he became a teacher. He began researching hybrid rice in the 1960s, which has solved China's food problem. The hybrid rice was developed in the 1970s and was promoted to the world. In September 2019, he was awarded the Medal of the Republic.
Yuan Longping is a pioneer and leader in the field of hybrid rice research, and he is honored as "the Father of Hybrid Rice". In spite of his great achievements, Yuan Longping was indifferent to fame and wealth and he often called himself an old farmer. I decide to follow his example and study hard to build a better China.
He aspired to study agriculture from a young age. After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College in 1953, he became a teacher. He began researching hybrid rice in the 1960s, which has solved China's food problem. The hybrid rice was developed in the 1970s and was promoted to the world. In September 2019, he was awarded the Medal of the Republic.
Yuan Longping is a pioneer and leader in the field of hybrid rice research, and he is honored as "the Father of Hybrid Rice". In spite of his great achievements, Yuan Longping was indifferent to fame and wealth and he often called himself an old farmer. I decide to follow his example and study hard to build a better China.
答案
One possible version:
Good afternoon, my dear teachers and fellow students.
Today, I'd like to tell you the story of an excellent expert, Yuan Longping.
My favourite scientist—Yuan Longping, who has made a great contribution to our country. Yuan Longping was born in Beijing on September 7th, 1930. What is a pity is that he died on May 22nd, 2021, which was the loss of our country.
He aspired to study agriculture from a young age. After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College in 1953, he became a teacher. He began researching hybrid rice in the 1960s, which has solved China's food problem. The hybrid rice was developed in the 1970s and was promoted to the world. In September 2019, he was awarded the Medal of the Republic.
Yuan Longping is a pioneer and leader in the field of hybrid rice research, and he is honored as "the Father of Hybrid Rice". In spite of his great achievements, Yuan Longping was indifferent to fame and wealth and he often called himself an old farmer. I decide to follow his example and study hard to build a better China.
Good afternoon, my dear teachers and fellow students.
Today, I'd like to tell you the story of an excellent expert, Yuan Longping.
My favourite scientist—Yuan Longping, who has made a great contribution to our country. Yuan Longping was born in Beijing on September 7th, 1930. What is a pity is that he died on May 22nd, 2021, which was the loss of our country.
He aspired to study agriculture from a young age. After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College in 1953, he became a teacher. He began researching hybrid rice in the 1960s, which has solved China's food problem. The hybrid rice was developed in the 1970s and was promoted to the world. In September 2019, he was awarded the Medal of the Republic.
Yuan Longping is a pioneer and leader in the field of hybrid rice research, and he is honored as "the Father of Hybrid Rice". In spite of his great achievements, Yuan Longping was indifferent to fame and wealth and he often called himself an old farmer. I decide to follow his example and study hard to build a better China.
解析
【分析】
写这篇英语演讲稿时，需先承接已给出的开头，按时间顺序梳理袁隆平的生卒信息，再依次介绍他的成长经历（立志学农、毕业任教、研究杂交水稻的历程与成果、获勋章），接着点明他的评价，最后加入自己的观点，确保涵盖所有提示内容，语句连贯，符合字数要求，正确运用提示词。
【解析】
1. 承接开头后，先介绍袁隆平的生卒时间与地点；2. 按时间线叙述经历：从小立志学农→1953年毕业于西南农学院并任教→20世纪60年代研究杂交水稻解决中国粮食问题→70年代培育杂交水稻并推向世界→2019年获“共和国勋章”；3. 说明他的评价（杂交水稻研究的开创者，“杂交水稻之父”）；4. 加入个人观点（如向他学习，努力奋斗），注意用词准确，控制在100词左右，语句通顺。
【答案】
One possible version:
Good afternoon, my dear teachers and fellow students.
Today, I'd like to tell you the story of an excellent expert, Yuan Longping.
My favourite scientist—Yuan Longping, who has made a great contribution to our country. Yuan Longping was born in Beijing on September 7th, 1930. What is a pity is that he died on May 22nd, 2021, which was the loss of our country.
He aspired to study agriculture from a young age. After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College in 1953, he became a teacher. He began researching hybrid rice in the 1960s, which has solved China's food problem. The hybrid rice was developed in the 1970s and was promoted to the world. In September 2019, he was awarded the Medal of the Republic.
Yuan Longping is a pioneer and leader in the field of hybrid rice research, and he is honored as "the Father of Hybrid Rice". In spite of his great achievements, Yuan Longping was indifferent to fame and wealth and he often called himself an old farmer. I decide to follow his example and study hard to build a better China.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、人物介绍写作、提示词运用
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖所有提示内容，条理清晰，语句通顺，符合演讲稿的文体特点，加入了合理的个人观点，用词准确恰当，是一篇优秀的人物介绍类英语演讲稿。
【难度系数】
0.3
写这篇英语演讲稿时，需先承接已给出的开头，按时间顺序梳理袁隆平的生卒信息，再依次介绍他的成长经历（立志学农、毕业任教、研究杂交水稻的历程与成果、获勋章），接着点明他的评价，最后加入自己的观点，确保涵盖所有提示内容，语句连贯，符合字数要求，正确运用提示词。
【解析】
1. 承接开头后，先介绍袁隆平的生卒时间与地点；2. 按时间线叙述经历：从小立志学农→1953年毕业于西南农学院并任教→20世纪60年代研究杂交水稻解决中国粮食问题→70年代培育杂交水稻并推向世界→2019年获“共和国勋章”；3. 说明他的评价（杂交水稻研究的开创者，“杂交水稻之父”）；4. 加入个人观点（如向他学习，努力奋斗），注意用词准确，控制在100词左右，语句通顺。
【答案】
One possible version:
Good afternoon, my dear teachers and fellow students.
Today, I'd like to tell you the story of an excellent expert, Yuan Longping.
My favourite scientist—Yuan Longping, who has made a great contribution to our country. Yuan Longping was born in Beijing on September 7th, 1930. What is a pity is that he died on May 22nd, 2021, which was the loss of our country.
He aspired to study agriculture from a young age. After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College in 1953, he became a teacher. He began researching hybrid rice in the 1960s, which has solved China's food problem. The hybrid rice was developed in the 1970s and was promoted to the world. In September 2019, he was awarded the Medal of the Republic.
Yuan Longping is a pioneer and leader in the field of hybrid rice research, and he is honored as "the Father of Hybrid Rice". In spite of his great achievements, Yuan Longping was indifferent to fame and wealth and he often called himself an old farmer. I decide to follow his example and study hard to build a better China.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、人物介绍写作、提示词运用
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖所有提示内容，条理清晰，语句通顺，符合演讲稿的文体特点，加入了合理的个人观点，用词准确恰当，是一篇优秀的人物介绍类英语演讲稿。
【难度系数】
0.3
