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Ⅳ. Think and write.
Write an article about the person you find inspiring. The following questions may help you.
● Who is the most inspiring person to you?
● What did / does the person do?
● Why do you think the person is inspiring?
Write an article about the person you find inspiring. The following questions may help you.
● Who is the most inspiring person to you?
● What did / does the person do?
● Why do you think the person is inspiring?
答案
One possible version:
The Most Inspiring Person to Me
The most inspiring person to me is Pang Zhongwang, a student from a poor village in Hebei. His father was ill and his mother used a wheelchair, but he never complained.
It was responsible of him to try his best to support his family while still studying hard. Later, he got into Tsinghua University. Even then, he refused donations and lived on scholarships.
Why do I think he is inspiring? Because he turned pain into power. It is important for us young people to learn from his spirit—never giving up, and always fighting for a better future. As China Daily reported, Pang truly lives up to his name. He proves that where you start does not decide where you can go.
The Most Inspiring Person to Me
The most inspiring person to me is Pang Zhongwang, a student from a poor village in Hebei. His father was ill and his mother used a wheelchair, but he never complained.
It was responsible of him to try his best to support his family while still studying hard. Later, he got into Tsinghua University. Even then, he refused donations and lived on scholarships.
Why do I think he is inspiring? Because he turned pain into power. It is important for us young people to learn from his spirit—never giving up, and always fighting for a better future. As China Daily reported, Pang truly lives up to his name. He proves that where you start does not decide where you can go.
解析
【分析】
首先确定写作核心人物，选择具有典型鼓舞人心特质的人物（如庞众望）；其次依据题目给出的三个问题搭建文章结构：①点明人物身份与背景；②叙述人物的具体事迹；③阐述人物鼓舞人的原因；最后组织语言，使用合适的连接词使文章逻辑连贯，结尾升华主题，符合英语写作的表达规范。
【解析】
按照写作结构，先开头点明最鼓舞人心的人是来自河北贫困村庄的庞众望，介绍其家庭困境；中间段叙述他兼顾家庭责任与学业，考入清华大学后拒绝捐赠、依靠奖学金生活的事迹；结尾段说明他鼓舞人的原因：将痛苦转化为动力，拥有不放弃、为未来奋斗的精神，证明起点不决定终点，值得年轻人学习。具体范文如下：
The Most Inspiring Person to Me
The most inspiring person to me is Pang Zhongwang, a student from a poor village in Hebei. His father was ill and his mother used a wheelchair, but he never complained.
It was responsible of him to try his best to support his family while still studying hard. Later, he got into Tsinghua University. Even then, he refused donations and lived on scholarships.
Why do I think he is inspiring? Because he turned pain into power. It is important for us young people to learn from his spirit—never giving up, and always fighting for a better future. As China Daily reported, Pang truly lives up to his name. He proves that where you start does not decide where you can go.
【答案】
The Most Inspiring Person to Me
The most inspiring person to me is Pang Zhongwang, a student from a poor village in Hebei. His father was ill and his mother used a wheelchair, but he never complained.
It was responsible of him to try his best to support his family while still studying hard. Later, he got into Tsinghua University. Even then, he refused donations and lived on scholarships.
Why do I think he is inspiring? Because he turned pain into power. It is important for us young people to learn from his spirit—never giving up, and always fighting for a better future. As China Daily reported, Pang truly lives up to his name. He proves that where you start does not decide where you can go.
【知识点】
英语写作、人物品质表达、观点阐述
【点评】
本题为开放性英语写作题，通过给出三个核心问题引导学生完成人物主题写作，既考查学生的叙事能力，又考查观点表达能力，要求学生结合典型人物事迹，清晰展现人物的鼓舞之处，结构完整、内容充实、语言连贯即可。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先确定写作核心人物，选择具有典型鼓舞人心特质的人物（如庞众望）；其次依据题目给出的三个问题搭建文章结构：①点明人物身份与背景；②叙述人物的具体事迹；③阐述人物鼓舞人的原因；最后组织语言，使用合适的连接词使文章逻辑连贯，结尾升华主题，符合英语写作的表达规范。
【解析】
按照写作结构，先开头点明最鼓舞人心的人是来自河北贫困村庄的庞众望，介绍其家庭困境；中间段叙述他兼顾家庭责任与学业，考入清华大学后拒绝捐赠、依靠奖学金生活的事迹；结尾段说明他鼓舞人的原因：将痛苦转化为动力，拥有不放弃、为未来奋斗的精神，证明起点不决定终点，值得年轻人学习。具体范文如下：
The Most Inspiring Person to Me
The most inspiring person to me is Pang Zhongwang, a student from a poor village in Hebei. His father was ill and his mother used a wheelchair, but he never complained.
It was responsible of him to try his best to support his family while still studying hard. Later, he got into Tsinghua University. Even then, he refused donations and lived on scholarships.
Why do I think he is inspiring? Because he turned pain into power. It is important for us young people to learn from his spirit—never giving up, and always fighting for a better future. As China Daily reported, Pang truly lives up to his name. He proves that where you start does not decide where you can go.
【答案】
The Most Inspiring Person to Me
The most inspiring person to me is Pang Zhongwang, a student from a poor village in Hebei. His father was ill and his mother used a wheelchair, but he never complained.
It was responsible of him to try his best to support his family while still studying hard. Later, he got into Tsinghua University. Even then, he refused donations and lived on scholarships.
Why do I think he is inspiring? Because he turned pain into power. It is important for us young people to learn from his spirit—never giving up, and always fighting for a better future. As China Daily reported, Pang truly lives up to his name. He proves that where you start does not decide where you can go.
【知识点】
英语写作、人物品质表达、观点阐述
【点评】
本题为开放性英语写作题，通过给出三个核心问题引导学生完成人物主题写作，既考查学生的叙事能力，又考查观点表达能力，要求学生结合典型人物事迹，清晰展现人物的鼓舞之处，结构完整、内容充实、语言连贯即可。
【难度系数】
0.5
