跟踪演练
假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Jenny下周要来拜访你,你打算带她参观你的学校。请你根据以下提示写一封英文邮件,提前为Jenny介绍你的学校。
提示:1. How many buildings are there in your school? What are they?
2. Which building is your favourite? Where is it?
写作要求:1. 须包含以上提示,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数60—70(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Jenny,
I’m happy to hear you are coming to visit me next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Jenny下周要来拜访你,你打算带她参观你的学校。请你根据以下提示写一封英文邮件,提前为Jenny介绍你的学校。
提示:1. How many buildings are there in your school? What are they?
2. Which building is your favourite? Where is it?
写作要求:1. 须包含以上提示,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数60—70(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Jenny,
I’m happy to hear you are coming to visit me next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Let me tell you something about my school first. There are four buildings in our school: a classroom building, an office building, a library and a sports hall. My favourite building is the library. It's on the left of the playground, with many different kinds of books inside. I often read there after school. It is really a great place for study. I can't wait to show you around when you come.
解析
【分析】
本题为英文邮件写作题,需结合给定提示补充邮件内容。解题思路:1. 衔接已给开头,先介绍学校的建筑情况,明确建筑数量及具体类型;2. 说明自己最喜欢的建筑,交代其位置并补充合理细节(如用途、自身使用情况);3. 衔接结尾,表达期待带对方参观的心情,确保内容连贯、覆盖所有提示,符合词数要求。
【解析】
按照邮件写作规范,先衔接开头引出学校介绍:“Let me tell you something about my school first.”;接着说明建筑信息:“There are four buildings in our school: a classroom building, an office building, a library and a sports hall.”;再点明最喜欢的建筑及位置:“My favourite building is the library. It's on the left of the playground, with many different kinds of books inside.”;补充细节使内容完整:“I often read there after school. It is really a great place for study.”;最后衔接结尾表达期待:“I can't wait to show you around when you come.”,全程控制词数在要求范围内,覆盖所有提示要点。
【答案】
Let me tell you something about my school first. There are four buildings in our school: a classroom building, an office building, a library and a sports hall. My favourite building is the library. It's on the left of the playground, with many different kinds of books inside. I often read there after school. It is really a great place for study. I can't wait to show you around when you come.
【知识点】
英文邮件写作、学校场景英文表达、英文书信格式
【点评】
本题是基础应用文写作题,要求清晰,需整合提示信息完成内容,语言简洁连贯,适合考查学生的基础英文表达能力,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英文邮件写作题,需结合给定提示补充邮件内容。解题思路:1. 衔接已给开头,先介绍学校的建筑情况,明确建筑数量及具体类型;2. 说明自己最喜欢的建筑,交代其位置并补充合理细节(如用途、自身使用情况);3. 衔接结尾,表达期待带对方参观的心情,确保内容连贯、覆盖所有提示,符合词数要求。
【解析】
按照邮件写作规范,先衔接开头引出学校介绍:“Let me tell you something about my school first.”;接着说明建筑信息:“There are four buildings in our school: a classroom building, an office building, a library and a sports hall.”;再点明最喜欢的建筑及位置:“My favourite building is the library. It's on the left of the playground, with many different kinds of books inside.”;补充细节使内容完整:“I often read there after school. It is really a great place for study.”;最后衔接结尾表达期待:“I can't wait to show you around when you come.”,全程控制词数在要求范围内,覆盖所有提示要点。
【答案】
Let me tell you something about my school first. There are four buildings in our school: a classroom building, an office building, a library and a sports hall. My favourite building is the library. It's on the left of the playground, with many different kinds of books inside. I often read there after school. It is really a great place for study. I can't wait to show you around when you come.
【知识点】
英文邮件写作、学校场景英文表达、英文书信格式
【点评】
本题是基础应用文写作题,要求清晰,需整合提示信息完成内容,语言简洁连贯,适合考查学生的基础英文表达能力,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.3
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