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七、书面表达(满分 30 分)
A. 句子翻译(每小题 2 分,满分 10 分)
71. 士兵们要等到所有居民都安全了,才会离开这座城市。
72. 比起看企鹅我更喜欢乘坐游乐设施,因为它更刺激。
73. 洛阳是中国文化
74. 我们挤过人群,前去观赏美丽的牡丹花。
75. 不论你站在何处,你面前总有一幅完美的画卷。
A. 句子翻译(每小题 2 分,满分 10 分)
71. 士兵们要等到所有居民都安全了,才会离开这座城市。
Soldiers won't leave this city until all the citizens are safe.
72. 比起看企鹅我更喜欢乘坐游乐设施,因为它更刺激。
I prefer going on the rides to watching penguins because it's more exciting.
73. 洛阳是中国文化
的
发源地之一,曾是十三个朝代的都城。Luoyang is one of the birthplaces of Chinese culture and used to be the capital of thirteen dynasties.
74. 我们挤过人群,前去观赏美丽的牡丹花。
We made our way through the crowd to admire beautiful peonies.
75. 不论你站在何处,你面前总有一幅完美的画卷。
No matter where you stand, there is always a perfect picture in front of you.
答案
71. Soldiers won't leave this city until all the citizens are safe.
72. I prefer going on the rides to watching penguins because it's more exciting.
73. Luoyang is one of the birthplaces of Chinese culture and used to be the capital of thirteen dynasties.
74. We made our way through the crowd to admire beautiful peonies.
75. No matter where you stand, there is always a perfect picture in front of you.
72. I prefer going on the rides to watching penguins because it's more exciting.
73. Luoyang is one of the birthplaces of Chinese culture and used to be the capital of thirteen dynasties.
74. We made our way through the crowd to admire beautiful peonies.
75. No matter where you stand, there is always a perfect picture in front of you.
解析
【分析】
做这类汉译英句子翻译题，首先第一步要先拆解中文句子的核心逻辑和对应考点：1. 先定位句子的核心句型，比如“直到…才”对应not...until结构，“不论…都”对应no matter引导的让步状语从句；2. 匹配课内学过的标准固定搭配，避免逐字直译产生中式英语，比如“比起…更喜欢”对应prefer doing to doing，“挤过人群”对应make one's way through the crowd；3. 核对时态、主谓一致、名词单复数细节，检查是否有漏译的语义成分，最终组合出符合英语表达习惯的正确句子。
【解析】
71. 本句核心考察“直到…才”的时间状语结构not...until，主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时表将来，组合后得到对应译句。
72. 本句核心考察prefer的固定搭配prefer doing sth to doing sth（比起做某事更喜欢做某事），后接because引导的原因状语从句说明原因，组合后得到对应译句。
73. 本句核心考察“…之一”的结构one of + 可数名词复数，“发源地”译为birthplace，“曾是”用固定表达used to be，两个并列分句用and连接，组合后得到对应译句。
74. 本句考察固定短语make one's way through（挤过、艰难穿过），用不定式作目的状语说明挤过人群的目的，动作描述已发生的场景用一般过去时，组合后得到对应译句。
75. 本句考察no matter where引导的让步状语从句，主句用there be句型表存在，组合后得到对应译句。
【答案】
71. Soldiers won't leave this city until all the citizens are safe.
72. I prefer going on the rides to watching penguins because it's more exciting.
73. Luoyang is one of the birthplaces of Chinese culture and used to be the capital of thirteen dynasties.
74. We made our way through the crowd to admire beautiful peonies.
75. No matter where you stand, there is always a perfect picture in front of you.
【知识点】
汉译英翻译，固定搭配应用，状语从句
【点评】
本题覆盖了中学阶段核心的高频句型和短语考点，没有偏难怪的表达，所有参考译句都贴合课内所学的标准表达，做题时要注意规避中式英语，优先选用课本出现过的固定搭配，写完后核对时态、名词单复数等细节，就能拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
做这类汉译英句子翻译题，首先第一步要先拆解中文句子的核心逻辑和对应考点：1. 先定位句子的核心句型，比如“直到…才”对应not...until结构，“不论…都”对应no matter引导的让步状语从句；2. 匹配课内学过的标准固定搭配，避免逐字直译产生中式英语，比如“比起…更喜欢”对应prefer doing to doing，“挤过人群”对应make one's way through the crowd；3. 核对时态、主谓一致、名词单复数细节，检查是否有漏译的语义成分，最终组合出符合英语表达习惯的正确句子。
【解析】
71. 本句核心考察“直到…才”的时间状语结构not...until，主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时表将来，组合后得到对应译句。
72. 本句核心考察prefer的固定搭配prefer doing sth to doing sth（比起做某事更喜欢做某事），后接because引导的原因状语从句说明原因，组合后得到对应译句。
73. 本句核心考察“…之一”的结构one of + 可数名词复数，“发源地”译为birthplace，“曾是”用固定表达used to be，两个并列分句用and连接，组合后得到对应译句。
74. 本句考察固定短语make one's way through（挤过、艰难穿过），用不定式作目的状语说明挤过人群的目的，动作描述已发生的场景用一般过去时，组合后得到对应译句。
75. 本句考察no matter where引导的让步状语从句，主句用there be句型表存在，组合后得到对应译句。
【答案】
71. Soldiers won't leave this city until all the citizens are safe.
72. I prefer going on the rides to watching penguins because it's more exciting.
73. Luoyang is one of the birthplaces of Chinese culture and used to be the capital of thirteen dynasties.
74. We made our way through the crowd to admire beautiful peonies.
75. No matter where you stand, there is always a perfect picture in front of you.
【知识点】
汉译英翻译，固定搭配应用，状语从句
【点评】
本题覆盖了中学阶段核心的高频句型和短语考点，没有偏难怪的表达，所有参考译句都贴合课内所学的标准表达，做题时要注意规避中式英语，优先选用课本出现过的固定搭配，写完后核对时态、名词单复数等细节，就能拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
B. 写作(满分 20 分)
假定你是红星中学的初二学生李华,你的英国朋友 Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来中国旅游,他向你咨询相关信息,请你给他回邮件。
内容要点: 1. the purpose of the email; 2. cities or places of interest you will recommend(eg. Beijing, the Palace Museum, the Great Wall ...); 3. your recommendation reasons(list two or three reasons)
注意事项:
1. 邮件须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意,邮件中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息;
2. 100 词左右,邮件的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
I am glad to hear that you would like to visit China. Welcome to travel to China!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
假定你是红星中学的初二学生李华,你的英国朋友 Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来中国旅游,他向你咨询相关信息,请你给他回邮件。
内容要点: 1. the purpose of the email; 2. cities or places of interest you will recommend(eg. Beijing, the Palace Museum, the Great Wall ...); 3. your recommendation reasons(list two or three reasons)
注意事项:
1. 邮件须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意,邮件中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息;
2. 100 词左右,邮件的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
I am glad to hear that you would like to visit China. Welcome to travel to China!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
答案
B. 写作
Dear Jim,
I am glad to hear that you would like to visit China. Welcome to travel to China! I'm writing with delight to offer you some advice.
Since you are interested in Chinese culture, I recommend you to visit Beijing. First, you can visit the Palace Museum. With wonderful buildings and art treasures inside, it is well worth a visit. The Great Wall is another good choice. The wall was built over 2,000 years ago. It looks like a dragon running across northern China. What's more, if you are interested in Chinese art, I advise you to go into a teahouse. There you can enjoy Beijing Opera with a lasting value.
If you have any question about China, do let me know.
I look forward to seeing you in China.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
Dear Jim,
I am glad to hear that you would like to visit China. Welcome to travel to China! I'm writing with delight to offer you some advice.
Since you are interested in Chinese culture, I recommend you to visit Beijing. First, you can visit the Palace Museum. With wonderful buildings and art treasures inside, it is well worth a visit. The Great Wall is another good choice. The wall was built over 2,000 years ago. It looks like a dragon running across northern China. What's more, if you are interested in Chinese art, I advise you to go into a teahouse. There you can enjoy Beijing Opera with a lasting value.
If you have any question about China, do let me know.
I look forward to seeing you in China.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先要明确核心要求：这是一封给英国笔友的回复邮件，需要全覆盖题干给出的3个内容要点。第一步先对应第一个要点：开篇直接说明本次写邮件的目的，就是为对方提供来中国旅游的相关参考建议；第二步对应第二个要点，结合题干给出的示例元素，优先推荐北京作为旅行目的地，依次引出故宫、长城、特色茶馆这些符合中国文化主题的景点；第三步对应第三个要点，结合Jim对中国文化感兴趣的前提，给出2-3个合理的推荐理由，分别对应皇家历史文化、古代建筑奇迹、传统民俗体验三个维度，贴合对方需求。最后补充邮件常规的友好收尾内容，控制总词数在100词左右，保证语句通顺、语气符合朋友交流的轻松友好感即可。
【解析】
1. 补全开篇内容后，首先直接点明邮件目的：说明自己写这封邮件是为了给对方提供中国旅行的相关建议，完成第一个内容要点。
2. 结合Jim对中国文化感兴趣的背景，明确推荐北京作为旅行城市，依次引出故宫、长城、传统茶馆三个游览地点，完成第二个内容要点的景点推荐要求。
3. 逐一给出对应推荐理由：①故宫内有大量精美古建筑和艺术珍宝，游览价值极高，能直观感受中国古代皇家文化；②长城拥有两千多年的悠久历史，是中国最具代表性的文化符号之一；③在特色茶馆可以欣赏经典的京剧表演，沉浸式体验中国传统民俗，三个理由完全贴合对方的兴趣点，完成第三个内容要点的要求。
4. 最后补充友好收尾，告知对方有任何相关问题都可以询问，表达期待在中国见面的意愿，行文逻辑连贯，总词数符合100词左右的要求。
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I am glad to hear that you would like to visit China. Welcome to travel to China! I'm writing with delight to offer you some advice.
Since you are interested in Chinese culture, I recommend you to visit Beijing. First, you can visit the Palace Museum. With wonderful buildings and art treasures inside, it is well worth a visit. The Great Wall is another good choice. The wall was built over 2,000 years ago. It looks like a dragon running across northern China. What's more, if you are interested in Chinese art, I advise you to go into a teahouse. There you can enjoy Beijing Opera with a lasting value.
If you have any question about China, do let me know.
I look forward to seeing you in China.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作
提纲类作文
中国文化相关表达
【点评】
本篇作文完全覆盖题干所有指定内容要点，推荐的景点贴合题干给出的示例方向，给出的推荐理由精准匹配Jim对中国文化感兴趣的设定，行文语气自然友好，符合给同龄朋友写邮件的语境，用到了with复合结构、be well worth a visit等亮点表达，符合初二学生的写作能力要求，字数控制精准，逻辑连贯没有冗余内容。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题首先要明确核心要求：这是一封给英国笔友的回复邮件，需要全覆盖题干给出的3个内容要点。第一步先对应第一个要点：开篇直接说明本次写邮件的目的，就是为对方提供来中国旅游的相关参考建议；第二步对应第二个要点，结合题干给出的示例元素，优先推荐北京作为旅行目的地，依次引出故宫、长城、特色茶馆这些符合中国文化主题的景点；第三步对应第三个要点，结合Jim对中国文化感兴趣的前提，给出2-3个合理的推荐理由，分别对应皇家历史文化、古代建筑奇迹、传统民俗体验三个维度，贴合对方需求。最后补充邮件常规的友好收尾内容，控制总词数在100词左右，保证语句通顺、语气符合朋友交流的轻松友好感即可。
【解析】
1. 补全开篇内容后，首先直接点明邮件目的：说明自己写这封邮件是为了给对方提供中国旅行的相关建议，完成第一个内容要点。
2. 结合Jim对中国文化感兴趣的背景，明确推荐北京作为旅行城市，依次引出故宫、长城、传统茶馆三个游览地点，完成第二个内容要点的景点推荐要求。
3. 逐一给出对应推荐理由：①故宫内有大量精美古建筑和艺术珍宝，游览价值极高，能直观感受中国古代皇家文化；②长城拥有两千多年的悠久历史，是中国最具代表性的文化符号之一；③在特色茶馆可以欣赏经典的京剧表演，沉浸式体验中国传统民俗，三个理由完全贴合对方的兴趣点，完成第三个内容要点的要求。
4. 最后补充友好收尾，告知对方有任何相关问题都可以询问，表达期待在中国见面的意愿，行文逻辑连贯，总词数符合100词左右的要求。
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I am glad to hear that you would like to visit China. Welcome to travel to China! I'm writing with delight to offer you some advice.
Since you are interested in Chinese culture, I recommend you to visit Beijing. First, you can visit the Palace Museum. With wonderful buildings and art treasures inside, it is well worth a visit. The Great Wall is another good choice. The wall was built over 2,000 years ago. It looks like a dragon running across northern China. What's more, if you are interested in Chinese art, I advise you to go into a teahouse. There you can enjoy Beijing Opera with a lasting value.
If you have any question about China, do let me know.
I look forward to seeing you in China.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作
提纲类作文
中国文化相关表达
【点评】
本篇作文完全覆盖题干所有指定内容要点，推荐的景点贴合题干给出的示例方向，给出的推荐理由精准匹配Jim对中国文化感兴趣的设定，行文语气自然友好，符合给同龄朋友写邮件的语境，用到了with复合结构、be well worth a visit等亮点表达，符合初二学生的写作能力要求，字数控制精准，逻辑连贯没有冗余内容。
【难度系数】
0.6
