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假如你是李华，你的笔友 Tom 来信询问你周末的计划，你打算去当地儿童医院参与志愿服务。请你给 Tom 写一封回信，告诉他你的志愿计划及你想做这份志愿工作的原因。
要求:1. 内容贴合“帮助有需要的人”主题，说明志愿活动的时间、具体内容及阐述参与志愿服务的意义；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数不少于 80(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear from you. I'd like to tell you about my plan for this weekend.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
要求:1. 内容贴合“帮助有需要的人”主题，说明志愿活动的时间、具体内容及阐述参与志愿服务的意义；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数不少于 80(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear from you. I'd like to tell you about my plan for this weekend.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear from you. I'd like to tell you about my plan for this weekend.
I plan to do some voluntary work in the Children's Hospital near my home this Saturday morning. I will take some storybooks and painting tools there. I want to read interesting stories to the sick kids and teach them to draw simple pictures to cheer them up. I also hope to organise some small games to raise their spirits. I decide to do this because these kids are in great need of care and company. And I think helping others can make me learn to care for people around me and become a more responsible person. It's a meaningful experience for me.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear from you. I'd like to tell you about my plan for this weekend.
I plan to do some voluntary work in the Children's Hospital near my home this Saturday morning. I will take some storybooks and painting tools there. I want to read interesting stories to the sick kids and teach them to draw simple pictures to cheer them up. I also hope to organise some small games to raise their spirits. I decide to do this because these kids are in great need of care and company. And I think helping others can make me learn to care for people around me and become a more responsible person. It's a meaningful experience for me.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给笔友Tom写回信，核心是告知周末去儿童医院做志愿的计划及原因，需包含志愿的时间、具体内容、参与意义，贴合“帮助有需要的人”主题，符合书信格式且无真实信息，词数达标。解题时先确定志愿的时间、地点，再构思陪伴患病儿童的具体活动，最后说明做志愿的原因，确保内容完整符合要求。
【解析】
回信需围绕志愿计划展开：1. 明确志愿时间为本周六上午，地点是家附近的儿童医院；2. 具体活动为携带故事书、绘画工具，给患病儿童讲故事、教画画、组织小游戏以鼓舞他们；3. 参与原因是患病儿童需要关爱陪伴，志愿能让自己学会关心他人、增强责任感，是有意义的经历。语言需符合书信语气，满足词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear from you. I'd like to tell you about my plan for this weekend.
I plan to do some voluntary work in the Children's Hospital near my home this Saturday morning. I will take some storybooks and painting tools there. I want to read interesting stories to the sick kids and teach them to draw simple pictures to cheer them up. I also hope to organise some small games to raise their spirits. I decide to do this because these kids are in great need of care and company. And I think helping others can make me learn to care for people around me and become a more responsible person. It's a meaningful experience for me.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、志愿话题表达、原因阐述
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，内容完整，涵盖了志愿活动的时间、具体内容及参与意义，语言流畅自然，符合书信格式，贴合“帮助有需要的人”的主题，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以李华的身份给笔友Tom写回信，核心是告知周末去儿童医院做志愿的计划及原因，需包含志愿的时间、具体内容、参与意义，贴合“帮助有需要的人”主题，符合书信格式且无真实信息，词数达标。解题时先确定志愿的时间、地点，再构思陪伴患病儿童的具体活动，最后说明做志愿的原因，确保内容完整符合要求。
【解析】
回信需围绕志愿计划展开：1. 明确志愿时间为本周六上午，地点是家附近的儿童医院；2. 具体活动为携带故事书、绘画工具，给患病儿童讲故事、教画画、组织小游戏以鼓舞他们；3. 参与原因是患病儿童需要关爱陪伴，志愿能让自己学会关心他人、增强责任感，是有意义的经历。语言需符合书信语气，满足词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear from you. I'd like to tell you about my plan for this weekend.
I plan to do some voluntary work in the Children's Hospital near my home this Saturday morning. I will take some storybooks and painting tools there. I want to read interesting stories to the sick kids and teach them to draw simple pictures to cheer them up. I also hope to organise some small games to raise their spirits. I decide to do this because these kids are in great need of care and company. And I think helping others can make me learn to care for people around me and become a more responsible person. It's a meaningful experience for me.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、志愿话题表达、原因阐述
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，内容完整，涵盖了志愿活动的时间、具体内容及参与意义，语言流畅自然，符合书信格式，贴合“帮助有需要的人”的主题，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
