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假如你是李华，你的笔友Mary这学期来压力很大，经常熬夜学习，最近还生病了。请你给Mary写一封邮件，从学习和生活上给出建议，帮助她解决这些问题。
要求：1. 参考所给内容，可适当发挥；
2. 不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Mary,
I am sorry to hear you are not feeling well.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华，你的笔友Mary这学期来压力很大，经常熬夜学习，最近还生病了。请你给Mary写一封邮件，从学习和生活上给出建议，帮助她解决这些问题。
要求：1. 参考所给内容，可适当发挥；
2. 不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Mary,
I am sorry to hear you are not feeling well.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Mary,
I am sorry to hear you are not feeling well. I know you have been under heavy pressure this term and often stay up late for your study, but this habit is really bad for your health. Here I'd like to give you some advice.
For your study, you can make a careful daily study plan and finish your tasks in the daytime. Don't push yourself to work too late at night. If you meet difficult problems that you can't work out, turn to your teachers or classmates for help, it will help you save a lot of time.
For your life, you should spend at least 20 minutes doing sports every day, and eat more fresh fruit and vegetables. You'd better go to bed before 11 p.m. to get enough sleep. If you still feel bad, remember to see a doctor in time.
I hope you will get well soon and become more relaxed!
Yours,
Li Hua
I am sorry to hear you are not feeling well. I know you have been under heavy pressure this term and often stay up late for your study, but this habit is really bad for your health. Here I'd like to give you some advice.
For your study, you can make a careful daily study plan and finish your tasks in the daytime. Don't push yourself to work too late at night. If you meet difficult problems that you can't work out, turn to your teachers or classmates for help, it will help you save a lot of time.
For your life, you should spend at least 20 minutes doing sports every day, and eat more fresh fruit and vegetables. You'd better go to bed before 11 p.m. to get enough sleep. If you still feel bad, remember to see a doctor in time.
I hope you will get well soon and become more relaxed!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为英语建议类书信写作题，身份为李华，需针对笔友Mary压力大、熬夜学习、生病的情况，从学习和生活两方面给出合理建议。解题思路：先承接开头点明Mary的问题，再分学习、生活模块给出具体可操作的建议，最后表达关心与祝愿，确保符合书信格式、字数达标。
【解析】
首先承接开头，说明已知Mary这学期压力大、常熬夜学习且生病的状况；接着从学习层面，建议制定详细的每日学习计划，白天完成任务，遇到难题向老师或同学求助以节省时间；从生活层面，建议每天至少20分钟运动，多吃新鲜果蔬，11点前入睡保证睡眠，若仍不适及时就医；最后表达对Mary早日康复、放松的祝愿，完成书信。
【答案】
Dear Mary,
I am sorry to hear you are not feeling well. I know you have been under heavy pressure this term and often stay up late for your study, but this habit is really bad for your health. Here I'd like to give you some advice.
For your study, you can make a careful daily study plan and finish your tasks in the daytime. Don't push yourself to work too late at night. If you meet difficult problems that you can't work out, turn to your teachers or classmates for help, it will help you save a lot of time.
For your life, you should spend at least 20 minutes doing sports every day, and eat more fresh fruit and vegetables. You'd better go to bed before 11 p.m. to get enough sleep. If you still feel bad, remember to see a doctor in time.
I hope you will get well soon and become more relaxed!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、建议类书面表达
【点评】本题贴近学生日常交际场景，考查学生运用英语解决实际问题的应用文写作能力，要求内容完整、结构清晰、语言得体，是初中阶段常见的书面表达题型。
【难度系数】0.5
本题为英语建议类书信写作题，身份为李华，需针对笔友Mary压力大、熬夜学习、生病的情况，从学习和生活两方面给出合理建议。解题思路：先承接开头点明Mary的问题，再分学习、生活模块给出具体可操作的建议，最后表达关心与祝愿，确保符合书信格式、字数达标。
【解析】
首先承接开头，说明已知Mary这学期压力大、常熬夜学习且生病的状况；接着从学习层面，建议制定详细的每日学习计划，白天完成任务，遇到难题向老师或同学求助以节省时间；从生活层面，建议每天至少20分钟运动，多吃新鲜果蔬，11点前入睡保证睡眠，若仍不适及时就医；最后表达对Mary早日康复、放松的祝愿，完成书信。
【答案】
Dear Mary,
I am sorry to hear you are not feeling well. I know you have been under heavy pressure this term and often stay up late for your study, but this habit is really bad for your health. Here I'd like to give you some advice.
For your study, you can make a careful daily study plan and finish your tasks in the daytime. Don't push yourself to work too late at night. If you meet difficult problems that you can't work out, turn to your teachers or classmates for help, it will help you save a lot of time.
For your life, you should spend at least 20 minutes doing sports every day, and eat more fresh fruit and vegetables. You'd better go to bed before 11 p.m. to get enough sleep. If you still feel bad, remember to see a doctor in time.
I hope you will get well soon and become more relaxed!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、建议类书面表达
【点评】本题贴近学生日常交际场景，考查学生运用英语解决实际问题的应用文写作能力，要求内容完整、结构清晰、语言得体，是初中阶段常见的书面表达题型。
【难度系数】0.5
