端午节是中国的传统节日,也是 Su Yang 最喜欢的节日。请根据下图中的信息,帮助 Su Yang 写一篇题目为“The Dragon Boat Festival”的短文。
要求:1. 短文连贯通顺,条理清楚;2. 根据提示写全信息,不少于 40 词。

The Dragon Boat Festival
要求:1. 短文连贯通顺,条理清楚;2. 根据提示写全信息,不少于 40 词。
The Dragon Boat Festival
The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival and it is my favourite festival too. There are many activities on that day. People eat rice dumplings and salty eggs. Dragon boat races are traditional activities. Families will get together and have a big dinner. This is an important festival for us to honour Qu Yuan, a great hero and poet in ancient China.
答案
The Dragon Boat Festival
The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival and it is my favourite festival too. There are many activities on that day. People eat rice dumplings and salty eggs. Dragon boat races are traditional activities. Families will get together and have a big dinner. This is an important festival for us to honour Qu Yuan, a great hero and poet in ancient China.
The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival and it is my favourite festival too. There are many activities on that day. People eat rice dumplings and salty eggs. Dragon boat races are traditional activities. Families will get together and have a big dinner. This is an important festival for us to honour Qu Yuan, a great hero and poet in ancient China.
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道写作题,先明确核心要求:主题是端午节,要全部用到图中给出的4个提示信息(粽子、赛龙舟、咸蛋、家人团聚),字数不少于40词,行文通顺。我们可以按照从总到分的思路来构思:第一步开篇先点明端午节是中国传统节日,同时点出它是Su Yang最喜欢的节日,完成开篇点题;第二步依次介绍节日的相关习俗,先介绍节日特色食物,再介绍特色传统活动,最后介绍节日里家人的活动,把所有提示元素自然融入;最后可以补充端午节纪念屈原的文化背景,让内容更完整饱满,逻辑清晰也满足字数要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题:先总述端午节的属性,说明它是中国传统节日,同时呼应题干设定,写出开头句。
2. 习俗分层介绍:首先介绍节日的特色食物,把rice dumplings和salty eggs两个提示元素自然写出;接着介绍节日最具代表性的传统活动dragon boat races,对应第二个提示元素;之后介绍节日里的家庭活动,写出get together相关的内容,覆盖最后一个提示元素。
3. 收尾升华:补充端午节纪念古代伟大诗人屈原的文化意义,让短文内容更充实,整体字数远超40词,满足所有要求。
【答案】
The Dragon Boat Festival
The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival and it is my favourite festival too. There are many activities on that day. People eat rice dumplings and salty eggs. Dragon boat races are traditional activities. Families will get together and have a big dinner. This is an important festival for us to honour Qu Yuan, a great hero and poet in ancient China.
【知识点】
节日主题写作
端午相关词汇
英语语句连贯表达
【点评】
本题是基础的英语主题写作,已经给出了所有核心提示词汇,难度较低,学生只需要按照合理的逻辑把所有提示信息串联起来,避免遗漏要点,就可以完成符合要求的短文,适当补充相关文化常识还能让作文更出彩。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道写作题,先明确核心要求:主题是端午节,要全部用到图中给出的4个提示信息(粽子、赛龙舟、咸蛋、家人团聚),字数不少于40词,行文通顺。我们可以按照从总到分的思路来构思:第一步开篇先点明端午节是中国传统节日,同时点出它是Su Yang最喜欢的节日,完成开篇点题;第二步依次介绍节日的相关习俗,先介绍节日特色食物,再介绍特色传统活动,最后介绍节日里家人的活动,把所有提示元素自然融入;最后可以补充端午节纪念屈原的文化背景,让内容更完整饱满,逻辑清晰也满足字数要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题:先总述端午节的属性,说明它是中国传统节日,同时呼应题干设定,写出开头句。
2. 习俗分层介绍:首先介绍节日的特色食物,把rice dumplings和salty eggs两个提示元素自然写出;接着介绍节日最具代表性的传统活动dragon boat races,对应第二个提示元素;之后介绍节日里的家庭活动,写出get together相关的内容,覆盖最后一个提示元素。
3. 收尾升华:补充端午节纪念古代伟大诗人屈原的文化意义,让短文内容更充实,整体字数远超40词,满足所有要求。
【答案】
The Dragon Boat Festival
The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival and it is my favourite festival too. There are many activities on that day. People eat rice dumplings and salty eggs. Dragon boat races are traditional activities. Families will get together and have a big dinner. This is an important festival for us to honour Qu Yuan, a great hero and poet in ancient China.
【知识点】
节日主题写作
端午相关词汇
英语语句连贯表达
【点评】
本题是基础的英语主题写作,已经给出了所有核心提示词汇,难度较低,学生只需要按照合理的逻辑把所有提示信息串联起来,避免遗漏要点,就可以完成符合要求的短文,适当补充相关文化常识还能让作文更出彩。
【难度系数】
0.7
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