七、书面表达(满分35分)
A)句子翻译(每小题2分,满分10分)
66. 自去年以来Simon就加入了这个足球俱乐部。
Simon
67. 这部电影已经放映一个半小时了。
The film
68. 富有文化与历史,北京,中国的首都值得一游。
69. 直到昨天早上他才设法按时上交他的作业。
70. 不管自己有多忙,他总是愿意帮助别人。
A)句子翻译(每小题2分,满分10分)
66. 自去年以来Simon就加入了这个足球俱乐部。
Simon
has been in/has been a member of
the Football Club since last year
.67. 这部电影已经放映一个半小时了。
The film
has been on for one hour and a half/for one and a half hours
.68. 富有文化与历史,北京,中国的首都值得一游。
Rich in culture and history
, Beijing, the capital of China, is worth a visit
.69. 直到昨天早上他才设法按时上交他的作业。
He didn't manage to hand in his homework on time until yesterday morning
.70. 不管自己有多忙,他总是愿意帮助别人。
He is always ready to help others, no matter how busy he is
.答案
七、书面表达
A)句子翻译
66. has been in/has been a member of; since last year
67. has been on for one hour and a half/for one and a half hours
68. Rich in culture and history; is worth a visit
69. He didn't manage to hand in his homework on time until yesterday morning
70. He is always ready to help others, no matter how busy he is
A)句子翻译
66. has been in/has been a member of; since last year
67. has been on for one hour and a half/for one and a half hours
68. Rich in culture and history; is worth a visit
69. He didn't manage to hand in his homework on time until yesterday morning
70. He is always ready to help others, no matter how busy he is
解析
【分析】
做这类汉译英试题,首先要先抓取句子中的时间标志判断正确时态,再注意瞬间动词和时间段连用时的变形规则,同时结合对应的固定短语搭配完成翻译:
1. 第66题:先看到“自去年以来”这个现在完成时的典型标志,瞬间动词join不能和since引导的时间点连用,要转换为对应的延续性表达,后半空直接对应“自去年以来”的英文译法即可。
2. 第67题:“已经放映+时长”是现在完成时加时间段的结构,瞬间动词begin/show要替换为延续性的be on,再把“一个半小时”的正确英文表达放在for后作时间状语。
3. 第68题:前半部分是形容词短语作状语,直接翻译“富有文化与历史”的固定表达,后半部分考察固定搭配“值得做某事”,对应“值得一游”的标准译法。
4. 第69题:看到“直到…才”立刻想到not...until的核心句型,动作发生在昨天早上,用一般过去时,依次把“设法上交作业、按时”的对应短语代入结构即可。
5. 第70题:“不管多忙”是no matter how引导的让步状语从句,主句用一般现在时表一贯的状态,代入“总是愿意帮助别人”的常用表达即可。
【解析】
逐题对应推导:
66. 主语Simon是第三人称单数,since last year(自去年以来)是现在完成时的标志,瞬间动词join(加入)无法和since引导的时长语境连用,转换为延续性表达has been in(一直在俱乐部内)或者has been a member of(一直是俱乐部的成员),两个空分别对应填入即可。
67. 句子强调“放映”的状态持续了一个半小时,用现在完成时,“放映”的延续性表达是be on,主语the film是第三人称单数,助动词用has,“一个半小时”译为one hour and a half或者one and a half hours,前面加介词for引出时间段,完整表达为has been on for one hour and a half/for one and a half hours。
68. 句首用形容词短语作伴随状语,“富有文化与历史”译为Rich in culture and history;“值得一游”是固定搭配be worth a visit,主语是北京,be动词用is,后半部分填入is worth a visit。
69. 动作发生在昨天早上,用一般过去时,“直到…才”用not...until结构,“设法做某事”是manage to do sth,“上交作业”是hand in his homework,“按时”是on time,“昨天早上”是yesterday morning,组合后得到完整句子。
70. 描述一贯的状态用一般现在时,“愿意做某事”是be ready to do sth,“不管多么…”用no matter how引导让步状语从句,组合后得到完整句子。
【答案】
66. has been in/has been a member of; since last year
67. has been on for one hour and a half/for one and a half hours
68. Rich in culture and history; is worth a visit
69. He didn't manage to hand in his homework on time until yesterday morning
70. He is always ready to help others, no matter how busy he is
【知识点】
现在完成时延续用法;固定短语搭配;not…until句型
【点评】
本题是初中英语核心的句子翻译题型,核心易错点集中在现在完成时中瞬间动词不能直接和时间段连用的规则,同时考察了让步状语从句、常用固定搭配等高频考点,只要学生避开直接使用瞬间动词join、begin的常见错误,熟记相关固定表达即可顺利得分。
【难度系数】
0.6
做这类汉译英试题,首先要先抓取句子中的时间标志判断正确时态,再注意瞬间动词和时间段连用时的变形规则,同时结合对应的固定短语搭配完成翻译:
1. 第66题:先看到“自去年以来”这个现在完成时的典型标志,瞬间动词join不能和since引导的时间点连用,要转换为对应的延续性表达,后半空直接对应“自去年以来”的英文译法即可。
2. 第67题:“已经放映+时长”是现在完成时加时间段的结构,瞬间动词begin/show要替换为延续性的be on,再把“一个半小时”的正确英文表达放在for后作时间状语。
3. 第68题:前半部分是形容词短语作状语,直接翻译“富有文化与历史”的固定表达,后半部分考察固定搭配“值得做某事”,对应“值得一游”的标准译法。
4. 第69题:看到“直到…才”立刻想到not...until的核心句型,动作发生在昨天早上,用一般过去时,依次把“设法上交作业、按时”的对应短语代入结构即可。
5. 第70题:“不管多忙”是no matter how引导的让步状语从句,主句用一般现在时表一贯的状态,代入“总是愿意帮助别人”的常用表达即可。
【解析】
逐题对应推导:
66. 主语Simon是第三人称单数,since last year(自去年以来)是现在完成时的标志,瞬间动词join(加入)无法和since引导的时长语境连用,转换为延续性表达has been in(一直在俱乐部内)或者has been a member of(一直是俱乐部的成员),两个空分别对应填入即可。
67. 句子强调“放映”的状态持续了一个半小时,用现在完成时,“放映”的延续性表达是be on,主语the film是第三人称单数,助动词用has,“一个半小时”译为one hour and a half或者one and a half hours,前面加介词for引出时间段,完整表达为has been on for one hour and a half/for one and a half hours。
68. 句首用形容词短语作伴随状语,“富有文化与历史”译为Rich in culture and history;“值得一游”是固定搭配be worth a visit,主语是北京,be动词用is,后半部分填入is worth a visit。
69. 动作发生在昨天早上,用一般过去时,“直到…才”用not...until结构,“设法做某事”是manage to do sth,“上交作业”是hand in his homework,“按时”是on time,“昨天早上”是yesterday morning,组合后得到完整句子。
70. 描述一贯的状态用一般现在时,“愿意做某事”是be ready to do sth,“不管多么…”用no matter how引导让步状语从句,组合后得到完整句子。
【答案】
66. has been in/has been a member of; since last year
67. has been on for one hour and a half/for one and a half hours
68. Rich in culture and history; is worth a visit
69. He didn't manage to hand in his homework on time until yesterday morning
70. He is always ready to help others, no matter how busy he is
【知识点】
现在完成时延续用法;固定短语搭配;not…until句型
【点评】
本题是初中英语核心的句子翻译题型,核心易错点集中在现在完成时中瞬间动词不能直接和时间段连用的规则,同时考察了让步状语从句、常用固定搭配等高频考点,只要学生避开直接使用瞬间动词join、begin的常见错误,熟记相关固定表达即可顺利得分。
【难度系数】
0.6
B)写作(满分25分)
假如你是李华,暑假马上就要到了,请你结合以下思维导图写一封邮件邀请新加坡笔友Paul来你的家乡旅游。

要求:
(1)邮件中必须包含图示中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)80词左右;
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Paul,
Summer vacation is coming. I'd like to invite you to pay a visit to my hometown.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,暑假马上就要到了,请你结合以下思维导图写一封邮件邀请新加坡笔友Paul来你的家乡旅游。
要求:
(1)邮件中必须包含图示中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)80词左右;
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Paul,
Summer vacation is coming. I'd like to invite you to pay a visit to my hometown.
My hometown is located in the south of China. It has a long history and a pleasant climate. There are many places of interest here. The West Lake is very beautiful, with clear water and lovely scenery. The ancient temples are also meaningful, telling stories of the past.
The food in my hometown is really tasty. You must try the local dumplings and the delicious fish soup.
I love my hometown very much. It's a wonderful place, and I'm sure you'll have a great time here.
Looking forward to your reply.
The food in my hometown is really tasty. You must try the local dumplings and the delicious fish soup.
I love my hometown very much. It's a wonderful place, and I'm sure you'll have a great time here.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
B)写作
【审题指导】
这是一篇邮件,体裁为应用文;时态主要使用一般现在时。写作需根据要点提示,介绍自己的家乡并邀请笔友来家乡旅游。需要涉及家乡的基本情况(比如位置、历史、气候等)、名胜古迹、食物(可以描写食物的口感)以及对家乡的情感(可以阐述对家乡的热爱),要体现对笔友的邀请。可适当补充细节让内容更丰富。书信语言要自然亲切,契合与笔友交流的场景。注意词数要求,不要遗漏要点。
【写作指导】
步骤 内容
第一步 开篇点明写作目的,即暑假即将到来,邀请笔友Paul参观自己的家乡;
第二步 介绍家乡的基本情况;
第三步 详细描述家乡的特色景点;
第四步 推荐家乡的特色美食;
第五步 总结对家乡的喜爱,并表达对笔友来访会度过愉快时光的期待,以盼望回复收尾。
One possible version:
Dear Paul,
Summer vacation is coming. I'd like to invite you to pay a visit to my hometown.
My hometown is located in the south of China. It has a long history and a pleasant climate. There are many places of interest here. The West Lake is very beautiful, with clear water and lovely scenery. The ancient temples are also meaningful, telling stories of the past.
The food in my hometown is really tasty. You must try the local dumplings and the delicious fish soup.
I love my hometown very much. It's a wonderful place, and I'm sure you'll have a great time here.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【审题指导】
这是一篇邮件,体裁为应用文;时态主要使用一般现在时。写作需根据要点提示,介绍自己的家乡并邀请笔友来家乡旅游。需要涉及家乡的基本情况(比如位置、历史、气候等)、名胜古迹、食物(可以描写食物的口感)以及对家乡的情感(可以阐述对家乡的热爱),要体现对笔友的邀请。可适当补充细节让内容更丰富。书信语言要自然亲切,契合与笔友交流的场景。注意词数要求,不要遗漏要点。
【写作指导】
步骤 内容
第一步 开篇点明写作目的,即暑假即将到来,邀请笔友Paul参观自己的家乡;
第二步 介绍家乡的基本情况;
第三步 详细描述家乡的特色景点;
第四步 推荐家乡的特色美食;
第五步 总结对家乡的喜爱,并表达对笔友来访会度过愉快时光的期待,以盼望回复收尾。
One possible version:
Dear Paul,
Summer vacation is coming. I'd like to invite you to pay a visit to my hometown.
My hometown is located in the south of China. It has a long history and a pleasant climate. There are many places of interest here. The West Lake is very beautiful, with clear water and lovely scenery. The ancient temples are also meaningful, telling stories of the past.
The food in my hometown is really tasty. You must try the local dumplings and the delicious fish soup.
I love my hometown very much. It's a wonderful place, and I'm sure you'll have a great time here.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先要明确核心要求:这是一封邀请笔友来家乡旅游的邮件,必须覆盖思维导图全部4类要点,词数控制在80词左右,不能出现真实人名和校名。接下来梳理清晰的写作逻辑:1. 题目已经给出开篇邀请的开头,接下来先完成基础信息部分,直接套用提示的"...is located in..."句型介绍家乡位置,补充1个基础属性比如气候/历史即可;2. 接着介绍名胜古迹,用给出的beautiful/meaningful类形容词描述景点特色;3. 之后介绍家乡美食,用提示的tasty来描述食物的特点;4. 最后抒发自己对家乡的喜爱之情,表达期待对方来访、共度愉快假期的想法,收尾盼回复。全程注意语气要符合笔友交流的轻松亲切感,时态以一般现在时为主,适当加衔接词让行文流畅,不要生硬堆砌要点。
【解析】
写作可按四步完成:
步骤1:完成基础信息模块,套用提示的位置相关句型,补充家乡基础特点:My hometown is located in the south of China, it has a long history and pleasant climate all year round.
步骤2:完成名胜古迹模块,用指定的形容词修饰景点:There are many places of interest here. The West Lake is very beautiful with clear water, and the ancient temples are also meaningful, carrying many old stories.
步骤3:完成美食模块,用提示的tasty描述食物特色:The local food is really tasty, you must try the special dumplings and fresh fish soup here.
步骤4:完成家乡感受模块,收尾表达期待:I love my hometown very much, I'm sure you will have a great time here. Looking forward to your reply.
最后核查所有要点都已覆盖,词数符合要求,没有出现真实人名校名,调整语句连贯性即可。
完整参考版本:
Dear Paul,
Summer vacation is coming. I'd like to invite you to pay a visit to my hometown.
My hometown is located in the south of China. It has a long history and a pleasant climate. There are many places of interest here. The West Lake is very beautiful, with clear water and lovely scenery. The ancient temples are also meaningful, telling stories of the past.
The food in my hometown is really tasty. You must try the local dumplings and the delicious fish soup.
I love my hometown very much. It's a wonderful place, and I'm sure you'll have a great time here.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
符合要点要求、词数要求、无违规信息的合理版本均可得分,参考范文如上。
【知识点】
英语邀请信写作,家乡话题表达,应用文格式规范
【点评】
本题属于提示类初中英语应用文写作,思维导图已经明确给出所有写作要点和可用的提示表达,大幅降低了写作的构思门槛,学生只需要按逻辑串联各部分内容,注意控制词数,避免出现真实个人信息,保证行文流畅即可拿到较高分数,是非常典型的基础写作训练题型。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先要明确核心要求:这是一封邀请笔友来家乡旅游的邮件,必须覆盖思维导图全部4类要点,词数控制在80词左右,不能出现真实人名和校名。接下来梳理清晰的写作逻辑:1. 题目已经给出开篇邀请的开头,接下来先完成基础信息部分,直接套用提示的"...is located in..."句型介绍家乡位置,补充1个基础属性比如气候/历史即可;2. 接着介绍名胜古迹,用给出的beautiful/meaningful类形容词描述景点特色;3. 之后介绍家乡美食,用提示的tasty来描述食物的特点;4. 最后抒发自己对家乡的喜爱之情,表达期待对方来访、共度愉快假期的想法,收尾盼回复。全程注意语气要符合笔友交流的轻松亲切感,时态以一般现在时为主,适当加衔接词让行文流畅,不要生硬堆砌要点。
【解析】
写作可按四步完成:
步骤1:完成基础信息模块,套用提示的位置相关句型,补充家乡基础特点:My hometown is located in the south of China, it has a long history and pleasant climate all year round.
步骤2:完成名胜古迹模块,用指定的形容词修饰景点:There are many places of interest here. The West Lake is very beautiful with clear water, and the ancient temples are also meaningful, carrying many old stories.
步骤3:完成美食模块,用提示的tasty描述食物特色:The local food is really tasty, you must try the special dumplings and fresh fish soup here.
步骤4:完成家乡感受模块,收尾表达期待:I love my hometown very much, I'm sure you will have a great time here. Looking forward to your reply.
最后核查所有要点都已覆盖,词数符合要求,没有出现真实人名校名,调整语句连贯性即可。
完整参考版本:
Dear Paul,
Summer vacation is coming. I'd like to invite you to pay a visit to my hometown.
My hometown is located in the south of China. It has a long history and a pleasant climate. There are many places of interest here. The West Lake is very beautiful, with clear water and lovely scenery. The ancient temples are also meaningful, telling stories of the past.
The food in my hometown is really tasty. You must try the local dumplings and the delicious fish soup.
I love my hometown very much. It's a wonderful place, and I'm sure you'll have a great time here.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
符合要点要求、词数要求、无违规信息的合理版本均可得分,参考范文如上。
【知识点】
英语邀请信写作,家乡话题表达,应用文格式规范
【点评】
本题属于提示类初中英语应用文写作,思维导图已经明确给出所有写作要点和可用的提示表达,大幅降低了写作的构思门槛,学生只需要按逻辑串联各部分内容,注意控制词数,避免出现真实个人信息,保证行文流畅即可拿到较高分数,是非常典型的基础写作训练题型。
【难度系数】
0.7
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