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七、书面表达。
如今,越来越多的年轻人钟情于饲养宠物。对此你是如何看待的呢?假设你是李华,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法。
提示: 1. 为什么人们喜欢饲养宠物? 2. 饲养宠物的利弊。3. 你对饲养宠物的看法。
要求: 1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);4. 词数不少于80(已给出部分不计入总词数)。
Recently, more and more young people like to keep pets.
如今,越来越多的年轻人钟情于饲养宠物。对此你是如何看待的呢?假设你是李华,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法。
提示: 1. 为什么人们喜欢饲养宠物? 2. 饲养宠物的利弊。3. 你对饲养宠物的看法。
要求: 1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);4. 词数不少于80(已给出部分不计入总词数)。
Recently, more and more young people like to keep pets.
One possible version:
Recently, more and more young people like to keep pets. Some of them regard their pets as their family members.
They say that pets can accompany them and bring them joy and happiness. However, pets may also cause a lot of problems. For example, cats always scratch furniture, and some people are allergic to pet hair. What's more, keeping pets may need lots of time and money.
I like pets. Pets are our good friends. But I think people should keep them clean and avoid bringing trouble to others. What's more, we should spend more time with the pets.
As long as we do like this, we can have a better life with our pets.
答案
One possible version:
Recently, more and more young people like to keep pets. Some of them regard their pets as their family members.
They say that pets can accompany them and bring them joy and happiness. However, pets may also cause a lot of problems. For example, cats always scratch furniture, and some people are allergic to pet hair. What's more, keeping pets may need lots of time and money.
I like pets. Pets are our good friends. But I think people should keep them clean and avoid bringing trouble to others. What's more, we should spend more time with the pets.
As long as we do like this, we can have a better life with our pets.
Recently, more and more young people like to keep pets. Some of them regard their pets as their family members.
They say that pets can accompany them and bring them joy and happiness. However, pets may also cause a lot of problems. For example, cats always scratch furniture, and some people are allergic to pet hair. What's more, keeping pets may need lots of time and money.
I like pets. Pets are our good friends. But I think people should keep them clean and avoid bringing trouble to others. What's more, we should spend more time with the pets.
As long as we do like this, we can have a better life with our pets.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先第一步要先审题，明确核心要求：这是一篇观点类英语议论文，主题是谈谈你对年轻人养宠物的看法，必须覆盖题干给出的三个指定要点：人们喜欢养宠物的原因、饲养宠物的利弊、你个人的看法，同时要满足词数不少于80、不出现真实个人信息的要求。接下来梳理行文思路：首先承接题目给出的开头句，先点明当下年轻人把宠物当作家人的普遍现状，顺理成章引出大家爱养宠物的核心原因——宠物可以陪伴自己，消解孤独、带来快乐。之后用转折类衔接词过渡，辩证分析养宠物的两面性，既点明它的益处，也列举实际存在的弊端，比如宠物破坏家具、部分人对宠物毛发过敏、饲养需要投入大量时间金钱。最后输出自己的观点，既表达对养宠物的认可，也提出负责任饲养的合理建议，收尾升华主题，全程注意用衔接词串联内容，保证逻辑连贯，写完后核查要点是否遗漏、词数是否达标即可。
【解析】
写作可按照三步完成：
1. 开篇承接给定开头，引入话题：点明很多年轻人把宠物视作家庭成员，解释养宠物受欢迎的原因——宠物能够陪伴主人，为忙碌的年轻人带来欢乐，消解孤独感。
2. 中间段辩证分析利弊：先承接前面的陪伴属性点明养宠物的好处，再用转折词however过渡，列举养宠物的实际弊端：比如猫会抓坏家具、部分人对宠物毛发过敏，饲养宠物还需要耗费大量的时间和金钱，甚至可能打扰周边人的生活。
3. 结尾段输出个人观点：明确自己认可宠物是人类的好朋友，同时提出养宠物的合理要求：要保持宠物的清洁，避免给他人造成困扰，还要投入足够的时间陪伴宠物，最后点出只要做到这些，就能和宠物一起拥有更美好的生活。
全程注意使用合适的逻辑衔接词，保证语句通顺，核查没有出现真实姓名、校名等违规信息，词数满足要求即可。
【答案】
One possible version:
Recently, more and more young people like to keep pets. Some of them regard their pets as their family members.
They say that pets can accompany them and bring them joy and happiness. However, pets may also cause a lot of problems. For example, cats always scratch furniture, and some people are allergic to pet hair. What's more, keeping pets may need lots of time and money.
I like pets. Pets are our good friends. But I think people should keep them clean and avoid bringing trouble to others. What's more, we should spend more time with the pets.
As long as we do like this, we can have a better life with our pets.
【知识点】
英语议论文写作，逻辑衔接词使用，话题表达积累
【点评】
这篇参考范文完全贴合题目的所有要求，完整覆盖了题干给出的三个提示要点，采用“引入现象-辩证分析利弊-输出个人观点”的结构，逻辑层次非常清晰，使用了however、what's more等衔接词让语句过渡自然，列举的实例贴近日常生活，内容充实不空洞，词数符合要求，也没有出现违规的真实个人信息。同学们写同类观点类作文时，要注意避免观点过于片面，兼顾正反两面再给出合理的个人看法，更容易拿到高分。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道书面表达题，首先第一步要先审题，明确核心要求：这是一篇观点类英语议论文，主题是谈谈你对年轻人养宠物的看法，必须覆盖题干给出的三个指定要点：人们喜欢养宠物的原因、饲养宠物的利弊、你个人的看法，同时要满足词数不少于80、不出现真实个人信息的要求。接下来梳理行文思路：首先承接题目给出的开头句，先点明当下年轻人把宠物当作家人的普遍现状，顺理成章引出大家爱养宠物的核心原因——宠物可以陪伴自己，消解孤独、带来快乐。之后用转折类衔接词过渡，辩证分析养宠物的两面性，既点明它的益处，也列举实际存在的弊端，比如宠物破坏家具、部分人对宠物毛发过敏、饲养需要投入大量时间金钱。最后输出自己的观点，既表达对养宠物的认可，也提出负责任饲养的合理建议，收尾升华主题，全程注意用衔接词串联内容，保证逻辑连贯，写完后核查要点是否遗漏、词数是否达标即可。
【解析】
写作可按照三步完成：
1. 开篇承接给定开头，引入话题：点明很多年轻人把宠物视作家庭成员，解释养宠物受欢迎的原因——宠物能够陪伴主人，为忙碌的年轻人带来欢乐，消解孤独感。
2. 中间段辩证分析利弊：先承接前面的陪伴属性点明养宠物的好处，再用转折词however过渡，列举养宠物的实际弊端：比如猫会抓坏家具、部分人对宠物毛发过敏，饲养宠物还需要耗费大量的时间和金钱，甚至可能打扰周边人的生活。
3. 结尾段输出个人观点：明确自己认可宠物是人类的好朋友，同时提出养宠物的合理要求：要保持宠物的清洁，避免给他人造成困扰，还要投入足够的时间陪伴宠物，最后点出只要做到这些，就能和宠物一起拥有更美好的生活。
全程注意使用合适的逻辑衔接词，保证语句通顺，核查没有出现真实姓名、校名等违规信息，词数满足要求即可。
【答案】
One possible version:
Recently, more and more young people like to keep pets. Some of them regard their pets as their family members.
They say that pets can accompany them and bring them joy and happiness. However, pets may also cause a lot of problems. For example, cats always scratch furniture, and some people are allergic to pet hair. What's more, keeping pets may need lots of time and money.
I like pets. Pets are our good friends. But I think people should keep them clean and avoid bringing trouble to others. What's more, we should spend more time with the pets.
As long as we do like this, we can have a better life with our pets.
【知识点】
英语议论文写作，逻辑衔接词使用，话题表达积累
【点评】
这篇参考范文完全贴合题目的所有要求，完整覆盖了题干给出的三个提示要点，采用“引入现象-辩证分析利弊-输出个人观点”的结构，逻辑层次非常清晰，使用了however、what's more等衔接词让语句过渡自然，列举的实例贴近日常生活，内容充实不空洞，词数符合要求，也没有出现违规的真实个人信息。同学们写同类观点类作文时，要注意避免观点过于片面，兼顾正反两面再给出合理的个人看法，更容易拿到高分。
【难度系数】
0.6
