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“自我保护”是青少年必须掌握的重要能力。请根据以下要求，以“How to Keep Myself Safe”为题，写一篇英语短文。
Hi! I'm Lisa Smith, the editor（编辑）of *Teens Magazine*. Our magazine has set up a column（专栏）about teenagers' self-protection. We know you have something to say.
Here is the topic you might have opinions about.
1. Traffic safety; 2. Online safety; 3. …safety.
注意：1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，可适当发挥；2. 词数80—100。
How to Keep Myself Safe
“自我保护”是青少年必须掌握的重要能力。请根据以下要求，以“How to Keep Myself Safe”为题，写一篇英语短文。
Hi! I'm Lisa Smith, the editor（编辑）of *Teens Magazine*. Our magazine has set up a column（专栏）about teenagers' self-protection. We know you have something to say.
Here is the topic you might have opinions about.
1. Traffic safety; 2. Online safety; 3. …safety.
注意：1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，可适当发挥；2. 词数80—100。
How to Keep Myself Safe
Safety is very important to us teenagers. Here are some useful ideas to help us stay safe.
First, we must follow traffic rules. Be sure to look left and right before crossing the road.
Second, be careful online. Never share personal information like our address with strangers.
Third, pay attention to food safety. Don't eat food that looks or smells bad.
Also, we should learn to say "no" to bad behaviours and tell a parent or teacher immediately if we feel unsafe.
By remembering and following these rules, we can grow up healthily and happily.
答案
One possible version：
How to Keep Myself Safe
Safety is very important to us teenagers. Here are some useful ideas to help us stay safe.
First, we must follow traffic rules. Be sure to look left and right before crossing the road. Second, be careful online. Never share personal information like our address with strangers. Third, pay attention to food safety. Don't eat food that looks or smells bad. Also, we should learn to say "no" to bad behaviours and tell a parent or teacher immediately if we feel unsafe.
By remembering and following these rules, we can grow up healthily and happily.
How to Keep Myself Safe
Safety is very important to us teenagers. Here are some useful ideas to help us stay safe.
First, we must follow traffic rules. Be sure to look left and right before crossing the road. Second, be careful online. Never share personal information like our address with strangers. Third, pay attention to food safety. Don't eat food that looks or smells bad. Also, we should learn to say "no" to bad behaviours and tell a parent or teacher immediately if we feel unsafe.
By remembering and following these rules, we can grow up healthily and happily.
解析
【分析】
本次写作要求围绕青少年自我保护，以“How to Keep Myself Safe”为题写英语短文，需涵盖交通安全、网络安全，补充一个安全方面（如食品安全），词数80-100。解题思路为：先点明安全对青少年的重要性，再分点阐述各安全领域的自我保护方法，最后总结强调遵守规则的意义，确保要点齐全、结构清晰、语言简洁。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开头：点明安全对青少年的重要性，引出自我保护的相关方法；2. 分点阐述：①交通安全：遵守交通规则，过马路前左右查看；②网络安全：不向陌生人泄露地址等个人信息；③食品安全：不吃变质、变味的食物；④补充：遇到危险及时告知家长或老师；3. 结尾：总结遵守这些规则能健康成长，控制词数在要求范围内。
【答案】
How to Keep Myself Safe
Safety is very important to us teenagers. Here are some useful ideas to help us stay safe.
First, we must follow traffic rules. Be sure to look left and right before crossing the road. Second, be careful online. Never share personal information like our address with strangers. Third, pay attention to food safety. Don't eat food that looks or smells bad. Also, we should learn to say "no" to bad behaviours and tell a parent or teacher immediately if we feel unsafe.
By remembering and following these rules, we can grow up healthily and happily.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题类英语表达、要点式短文写作
【点评】
该短文紧扣主题，要点覆盖全面，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，准确传达了青少年自我保护的方法，是一篇符合要求的话题作文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本次写作要求围绕青少年自我保护，以“How to Keep Myself Safe”为题写英语短文，需涵盖交通安全、网络安全，补充一个安全方面（如食品安全），词数80-100。解题思路为：先点明安全对青少年的重要性，再分点阐述各安全领域的自我保护方法，最后总结强调遵守规则的意义，确保要点齐全、结构清晰、语言简洁。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开头：点明安全对青少年的重要性，引出自我保护的相关方法；2. 分点阐述：①交通安全：遵守交通规则，过马路前左右查看；②网络安全：不向陌生人泄露地址等个人信息；③食品安全：不吃变质、变味的食物；④补充：遇到危险及时告知家长或老师；3. 结尾：总结遵守这些规则能健康成长，控制词数在要求范围内。
【答案】
How to Keep Myself Safe
Safety is very important to us teenagers. Here are some useful ideas to help us stay safe.
First, we must follow traffic rules. Be sure to look left and right before crossing the road. Second, be careful online. Never share personal information like our address with strangers. Third, pay attention to food safety. Don't eat food that looks or smells bad. Also, we should learn to say "no" to bad behaviours and tell a parent or teacher immediately if we feel unsafe.
By remembering and following these rules, we can grow up healthily and happily.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题类英语表达、要点式短文写作
【点评】
该短文紧扣主题，要点覆盖全面，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，准确传达了青少年自我保护的方法，是一篇符合要求的话题作文。
【难度系数】
0.6
