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七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Janet因考试成绩不理想写信向你倾诉。请你根据以下内容提示,用英语写一封回信安慰她,并从缓解压力和提高成绩两方面给出可行建议。
What can she do to relax?
What learning methods do you suggest?
Who else can she ask for help?
Something more about your advice.
注意:文中不得透露真实的个人信息,词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出的词不计入总词数)。
Dear Janet,
I am sorry to hear that you didn't do well in your exams.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Janet因考试成绩不理想写信向你倾诉。请你根据以下内容提示,用英语写一封回信安慰她,并从缓解压力和提高成绩两方面给出可行建议。
What can she do to relax?
What learning methods do you suggest?
Who else can she ask for help?
Something more about your advice.
注意:文中不得透露真实的个人信息,词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出的词不计入总词数)。
Dear Janet,
I am sorry to hear that you didn't do well in your exams.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
[参考范文]
Dear Janet,
I am sorry to hear that you didn't do well in your exams. Don't be too worried. Everyone may have a hard time with their studies, and one exam does not decide your future.
First, you can do something relaxing, such as listening to music, taking a walk or doing sports. These activities can help you stay calm. Second, I suggest that you make a clear study plan. You can review your lessons step by step and write down your weak points. It is also a good idea to learn from your mistakes after each test. Besides, you can ask your teachers or classmates for help when you have problems.
Believe in yourself and keep trying. I'm sure you will make progress soon.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Janet,
I am sorry to hear that you didn't do well in your exams. Don't be too worried. Everyone may have a hard time with their studies, and one exam does not decide your future.
First, you can do something relaxing, such as listening to music, taking a walk or doing sports. These activities can help you stay calm. Second, I suggest that you make a clear study plan. You can review your lessons step by step and write down your weak points. It is also a good idea to learn from your mistakes after each test. Besides, you can ask your teachers or classmates for help when you have problems.
Believe in yourself and keep trying. I'm sure you will make progress soon.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给考试失利的英国笔友Janet写回信，需完成安慰、给出建议的任务，开头和结尾已固定，需围绕“放松方法、学习方法、求助对象”及额外建议展开，语气要真诚友好，符合英语书信的表达习惯，词数控制在100左右。解题思路：先承接开头的安慰，再分点给出具体可行的建议，最后鼓励对方，确保覆盖所有提示点，语言自然流畅。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，先安慰Janet，说明一次考试不代表未来，缓解她的焦虑；
2. 针对放松需求，给出听音乐、散步、运动等具体方式；
3. 针对学习方法，建议制定清晰的学习计划、逐步复习、整理错题；
4. 针对求助对象，建议向老师或同学寻求帮助；
5. 最后鼓励对方，表达信心，呼应结尾要求。
【答案】
Dear Janet,
I am sorry to hear that you didn't do well in your exams. Don't be too worried. Everyone may have a hard time with their studies, and one exam does not decide your future.
First, you can do something relaxing, such as listening to music, taking a walk or doing sports. These activities can help you stay calm. Second, I suggest that you make a clear study plan. You can review your lessons step by step and write down your weak points. It is also a good idea to learn from your mistakes after each test. Besides, you can ask your teachers or classmates for help when you have problems.
Believe in yourself and keep trying. I'm sure you will make progress soon.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议类表达、安慰类应用文
【点评】
本题为英语书面表达题，贴近学生生活实际，要求结合提示完成安慰与建议的内容，考查学生的英语语言运用能力和逻辑表达能力，结构清晰，难度适中，能有效检验学生的书面表达水平。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以李华的身份给考试失利的英国笔友Janet写回信，需完成安慰、给出建议的任务，开头和结尾已固定，需围绕“放松方法、学习方法、求助对象”及额外建议展开，语气要真诚友好，符合英语书信的表达习惯，词数控制在100左右。解题思路：先承接开头的安慰，再分点给出具体可行的建议，最后鼓励对方，确保覆盖所有提示点，语言自然流畅。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，先安慰Janet，说明一次考试不代表未来，缓解她的焦虑；
2. 针对放松需求，给出听音乐、散步、运动等具体方式；
3. 针对学习方法，建议制定清晰的学习计划、逐步复习、整理错题；
4. 针对求助对象，建议向老师或同学寻求帮助；
5. 最后鼓励对方，表达信心，呼应结尾要求。
【答案】
Dear Janet,
I am sorry to hear that you didn't do well in your exams. Don't be too worried. Everyone may have a hard time with their studies, and one exam does not decide your future.
First, you can do something relaxing, such as listening to music, taking a walk or doing sports. These activities can help you stay calm. Second, I suggest that you make a clear study plan. You can review your lessons step by step and write down your weak points. It is also a good idea to learn from your mistakes after each test. Besides, you can ask your teachers or classmates for help when you have problems.
Believe in yourself and keep trying. I'm sure you will make progress soon.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议类表达、安慰类应用文
【点评】
本题为英语书面表达题，贴近学生生活实际，要求结合提示完成安慰与建议的内容，考查学生的英语语言运用能力和逻辑表达能力，结构清晰，难度适中，能有效检验学生的书面表达水平。
【难度系数】
0.6
