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请根据昨天的情况写一篇90词左右的日记。
早上感到头疼，打喷嚏（sneeze），妈妈带你去医院，医生检查了一下并问了一些情况，最后给你开了一些药并让你好好休息。第二天你觉得好多了 ______ 。
请根据昨天的情况写一篇90词左右的日记。
早上感到头疼，打喷嚏（sneeze），妈妈带你去医院，医生检查了一下并问了一些情况，最后给你开了一些药并让你好好休息。第二天你觉得好多了 ______ 。
答案
Wednesday, March 25th
I felt terrible yesterday morning. My mother took me to the hospital. "What's your trouble, little boy?" the doctor asked. "I can't stop sneezing and I have a headache." "When did it start?" "This morning." "Open your mouth and say 'Ah'." My mother was worried and asked the doctor, "What's the matter with him?" "He has a bad cold, but it's nothing serious," the doctor said. Then the doctor told me to take some medicine. He asked me to stay in bed and have a good rest.
I felt better after taking the medicine.
I felt terrible yesterday morning. My mother took me to the hospital. "What's your trouble, little boy?" the doctor asked. "I can't stop sneezing and I have a headache." "When did it start?" "This morning." "Open your mouth and say 'Ah'." My mother was worried and asked the doctor, "What's the matter with him?" "He has a bad cold, but it's nothing serious," the doctor said. Then the doctor told me to take some medicine. He asked me to stay in bed and have a good rest.
I felt better after taking the medicine.
解析
【解析】
1. 文体格式：日记需在开头标注日期与星期，使用一般过去时叙述昨日发生的事件，符合日记的写作规范。
2. 内容梳理：按照时间顺序依次覆盖所有提示要点：开篇点明昨日晨起头疼、不停打喷嚏的不适状态，接着叙述妈妈陪同前往医院的经过，补充医生问诊、检查的细节，说明医生诊断后开具药物、嘱咐卧床休息的要求，最后收尾写次日身体好转的结果，整体词数控制在90左右，逻辑连贯。
3. 语言表达：选用贴合初中英语水平的常用句式，准确使用提示词sneeze，语句通顺无语法错误。
【答案】
Wednesday, March 25th
I felt terrible yesterday morning. My mother took me to the hospital. "What's your trouble, little boy?" the doctor asked. "I can't stop sneezing and I have a headache." "When did it start?" "This morning." "Open your mouth and say 'Ah'." My mother was worried and asked the doctor, "What's the matter with him?" "He has a bad cold, but it's nothing serious," the doctor said. Then the doctor told me to take some medicine. He asked me to stay in bed and have a good rest.
I felt better after taking the medicine.
【知识点】
英语日记写作，一般过去时运用，要点型作文表达
【点评】
这道题是基础的提示要点类英语日记写作题，难度较低，学生只需要准确对应所有给出的事件要点，正确使用一般过去时叙述事件，符合日记的格式要求，就可以完成合格的作文，适合巩固基础写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.8
1. 文体格式：日记需在开头标注日期与星期，使用一般过去时叙述昨日发生的事件，符合日记的写作规范。
2. 内容梳理：按照时间顺序依次覆盖所有提示要点：开篇点明昨日晨起头疼、不停打喷嚏的不适状态，接着叙述妈妈陪同前往医院的经过，补充医生问诊、检查的细节，说明医生诊断后开具药物、嘱咐卧床休息的要求，最后收尾写次日身体好转的结果，整体词数控制在90左右，逻辑连贯。
3. 语言表达：选用贴合初中英语水平的常用句式，准确使用提示词sneeze，语句通顺无语法错误。
【答案】
Wednesday, March 25th
I felt terrible yesterday morning. My mother took me to the hospital. "What's your trouble, little boy?" the doctor asked. "I can't stop sneezing and I have a headache." "When did it start?" "This morning." "Open your mouth and say 'Ah'." My mother was worried and asked the doctor, "What's the matter with him?" "He has a bad cold, but it's nothing serious," the doctor said. Then the doctor told me to take some medicine. He asked me to stay in bed and have a good rest.
I felt better after taking the medicine.
【知识点】
英语日记写作，一般过去时运用，要点型作文表达
【点评】
这道题是基础的提示要点类英语日记写作题，难度较低，学生只需要准确对应所有给出的事件要点，正确使用一般过去时叙述事件，符合日记的格式要求，就可以完成合格的作文，适合巩固基础写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.8
写作佳句
1. 我不停地打喷嚏，还头疼。
I ___ ___ sneezing and I ___ ___ ___.
2. 他怎么了？
What's ___ ___ ___ ___ ?
3. 医生让我吃点药。
The doctor let ___ ___ ___ ___.
4. 他让我卧床好好休息。
He asked me to ___ ___ ___ and have a good rest.
5. 吃了药之后，我感觉好多了。
I ___ ___ after taking the medicine.
1. 我不停地打喷嚏，还头疼。
I ___ ___ sneezing and I ___ ___ ___.
2. 他怎么了？
What's ___ ___ ___ ___ ?
3. 医生让我吃点药。
The doctor let ___ ___ ___ ___.
4. 他让我卧床好好休息。
He asked me to ___ ___ ___ and have a good rest.
5. 吃了药之后，我感觉好多了。
I ___ ___ after taking the medicine.
答案
1. can't stop; have a headache 2. the matter with him
3. me take some medicine 4. stay in bed 5. felt better
3. me take some medicine 4. stay in bed 5. felt better
解析
【分析】
本题考查日常健康相关的英语固定搭配，需结合中文句意匹配对应的英文常用表达，注意动词形式、人称代词宾格及固定句式的正确使用。
【解析】
1. “不停地做某事”对应固定短语can't stop doing sth，故前两空填can't stop；“头疼”的英文表达为have a headache，故后三空填have a headache。
2. “某人怎么了”的固定句式为What's the matter with sb，此处sb为him，故填the matter with him。
3. “让某人做某事”用let sb do sth，sb需用宾格me，“吃点药”是take some medicine，故填me take some medicine。
4. “卧床休息”的固定短语为stay in bed，故填stay in bed。
5. “感觉好多了”对应feel better，结合语境用过去式，故填felt better。
【答案】
1. can't stop; have a headache 2. the matter with him 3. me take some medicine 4. stay in bed 5. felt better
【知识点】
英语固定搭配、日常健康表达、动词短语
【点评】
本题围绕日常健康场景考查基础英语固定表达，都是课本中需掌握的核心短语，难度较低，侧重基础积累。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题考查日常健康相关的英语固定搭配，需结合中文句意匹配对应的英文常用表达，注意动词形式、人称代词宾格及固定句式的正确使用。
【解析】
1. “不停地做某事”对应固定短语can't stop doing sth，故前两空填can't stop；“头疼”的英文表达为have a headache，故后三空填have a headache。
2. “某人怎么了”的固定句式为What's the matter with sb，此处sb为him，故填the matter with him。
3. “让某人做某事”用let sb do sth，sb需用宾格me，“吃点药”是take some medicine，故填me take some medicine。
4. “卧床休息”的固定短语为stay in bed，故填stay in bed。
5. “感觉好多了”对应feel better，结合语境用过去式，故填felt better。
【答案】
1. can't stop; have a headache 2. the matter with him 3. me take some medicine 4. stay in bed 5. felt better
【知识点】
英语固定搭配、日常健康表达、动词短语
【点评】
本题围绕日常健康场景考查基础英语固定表达，都是课本中需掌握的核心短语，难度较低，侧重基础积累。
【难度系数】
0.3
