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假设你校英文校刊新开设了“美丽家乡”(Beautiful Hometown)专栏,现向全体同学征集稿件。请你作为家乡的“推介官”,选择一处你最喜欢的名胜古迹或地标,写一篇英文广告,向全校师生介绍它的魅力。
要求:80—100 词。
假设你校英文校刊新开设了“美丽家乡”(Beautiful Hometown)专栏,现向全体同学征集稿件。请你作为家乡的“推介官”,选择一处你最喜欢的名胜古迹或地标,写一篇英文广告,向全校师生介绍它的魅力。
要求:80—100 词。
答案
One possible version:
The West Lake: A Peaceful Paradise
Do you love peaceful lakes? Do you want to see a beautiful place like a living painting? If so, come to the West Lake in Hangzhou!
Located in the heart of Hangzhou city, the West Lake is one of China's most famous places. It covers about 6. 5 square kilometres and its beauty is world- famous. The lake is surrounded by green hills and connected by ancient bridges, like the famous Broken Bridge.
The West Lake is full of life and culture. Here, you can take a relaxing boat ride on the calm water or walk along the lovely paths. You will see ancient pagodas, graceful swans, and colourful flowers in every season. For people who love beauty and peace, visiting the West Lake is a wonderful dream!
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The West Lake: A Peaceful Paradise
Do you love peaceful lakes? Do you want to see a beautiful place like a living painting? If so, come to the West Lake in Hangzhou!
Located in the heart of Hangzhou city, the West Lake is one of China's most famous places. It covers about 6. 5 square kilometres and its beauty is world- famous. The lake is surrounded by green hills and connected by ancient bridges, like the famous Broken Bridge.
The West Lake is full of life and culture. Here, you can take a relaxing boat ride on the calm water or walk along the lovely paths. You will see ancient pagodas, graceful swans, and colourful flowers in every season. For people who love beauty and peace, visiting the West Lake is a wonderful dream!
(126 words)
解析
【分析】
本题要求作为家乡“推介官”，写一篇80-100词的英文广告推介一处名胜古迹或地标。解题思路：1. 选取熟悉且内容丰富的地标（如杭州西湖）；2. 开头用设问或感叹句吸引读者，点明推介对象；3. 中间简述位置、基本特征（规模、周边景观）、特色活动/文化元素；4. 结尾总结魅力并发出邀请，符合广告的宣传性，同时控制词数。
【解析】
以杭州西湖为例，写作步骤：1. 开头用两个设问“Do you love peaceful lakes? Do you want to see a beautiful place like a living painting?”引发兴趣，引出西湖；2. 中间介绍西湖的位置（位于杭州中心）、规模（约6.5平方公里）、周边景观（青山环绕、古桥如断桥），以及可参与的活动（乘船、散步）和四季特色（古塔、天鹅、鲜花）；3. 结尾总结适合爱美好和平的人，发出邀请。整体结构清晰，语言生动，符合广告的宣传性，内容紧扣要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
The West Lake: A Peaceful Paradise
Do you love peaceful lakes? Do you want to see a beautiful place like a living painting? If so, come to the West Lake in Hangzhou!
Located in the heart of Hangzhou city, the West Lake is one of China's most famous places. It covers about 6.5 square kilometres and its beauty is world-famous. The lake is surrounded by green hills and connected by ancient bridges, like the famous Broken Bridge.
The West Lake is full of life and culture. Here, you can take a relaxing boat ride on the calm water or walk along the lovely paths. You will see ancient pagodas, graceful swans, and colourful flowers in every season. For people who love beauty and peace, visiting the West Lake is a wonderful dream!
【知识点】
英语广告写作、名胜古迹英文介绍、英文写作结构
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，以西湖为推介对象，结构层次分明，语言生动有感染力，兼具介绍性与宣传性，符合“美丽家乡”专栏的推介需求，是优秀的书面表达范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求作为家乡“推介官”，写一篇80-100词的英文广告推介一处名胜古迹或地标。解题思路：1. 选取熟悉且内容丰富的地标（如杭州西湖）；2. 开头用设问或感叹句吸引读者，点明推介对象；3. 中间简述位置、基本特征（规模、周边景观）、特色活动/文化元素；4. 结尾总结魅力并发出邀请，符合广告的宣传性，同时控制词数。
【解析】
以杭州西湖为例，写作步骤：1. 开头用两个设问“Do you love peaceful lakes? Do you want to see a beautiful place like a living painting?”引发兴趣，引出西湖；2. 中间介绍西湖的位置（位于杭州中心）、规模（约6.5平方公里）、周边景观（青山环绕、古桥如断桥），以及可参与的活动（乘船、散步）和四季特色（古塔、天鹅、鲜花）；3. 结尾总结适合爱美好和平的人，发出邀请。整体结构清晰，语言生动，符合广告的宣传性，内容紧扣要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
The West Lake: A Peaceful Paradise
Do you love peaceful lakes? Do you want to see a beautiful place like a living painting? If so, come to the West Lake in Hangzhou!
Located in the heart of Hangzhou city, the West Lake is one of China's most famous places. It covers about 6.5 square kilometres and its beauty is world-famous. The lake is surrounded by green hills and connected by ancient bridges, like the famous Broken Bridge.
The West Lake is full of life and culture. Here, you can take a relaxing boat ride on the calm water or walk along the lovely paths. You will see ancient pagodas, graceful swans, and colourful flowers in every season. For people who love beauty and peace, visiting the West Lake is a wonderful dream!
【知识点】
英语广告写作、名胜古迹英文介绍、英文写作结构
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，以西湖为推介对象，结构层次分明，语言生动有感染力，兼具介绍性与宣传性，符合“美丽家乡”专栏的推介需求，是优秀的书面表达范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
