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开学已经一个月了，请根据表格中的信息以"This is me"为题写一篇英语短文，向你的同学介绍自己。
【要求】1. 词数 80 左右。
2. 内容必须包括表格中的要点并作适当发挥，要求语句通顺、条理清晰、书写工整。
This is me
Hello everyone! I'm Daniel,
【要求】1. 词数 80 左右。
2. 内容必须包括表格中的要点并作适当发挥，要求语句通顺、条理清晰、书写工整。
This is me
Hello everyone! I'm Daniel,
and I am 13 years old. I come from Jiangyan. I study in Class 9, Grade 7 in Sunshine Middle School. I am tall and I have short hair. I don't wear glasses. I go to school by bus every day.
I like English best because I think it is interesting and useful. I have English classes three times a week. My English teacher is very kind.
I also like doing sport and I like playing basketball best, because it can make me happy and relaxed.
I want to be a basketball player and I hope my dream can come true.
答案
实战演练
One possible version:
This is me
Hello everyone! I'm Daniel, and I am 13 years old. I
come from Jiangyan. I study in Class 9, Grade 7 in Sunshine
Middle School. I am tall and I have short hair. I don't wear
glasses. I go to school by bus every day.
I like English best because I think it is interesting and
useful. I have English classes three times a week. My English
teacher is very kind. I also like doing sport and I like playing
basketball best, because it can make me happy and relaxed.
I want to be a basketball player and I hope my dream
can come true.
One possible version:
This is me
Hello everyone! I'm Daniel, and I am 13 years old. I
come from Jiangyan. I study in Class 9, Grade 7 in Sunshine
Middle School. I am tall and I have short hair. I don't wear
glasses. I go to school by bus every day.
I like English best because I think it is interesting and
useful. I have English classes three times a week. My English
teacher is very kind. I also like doing sport and I like playing
basketball best, because it can make me happy and relaxed.
I want to be a basketball player and I hope my dream
can come true.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以"This is me"为题写一篇英语自我介绍短文，需结合表格信息并适当发挥，词数约80。解题思路：1. 开篇点明姓名、年龄等基本信息；2. 描述外貌特征；3. 说明最喜欢的科目及原因；4. 介绍兴趣爱好及原因；5. 表达个人理想。写作时需注意语句通顺、语法正确，适当补充细节让内容更完整。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 开头介绍基本信息：点明姓名Daniel、年龄13岁，补充就读学校等细节；
2. 描述外貌：结合表格的短发、不戴眼镜，补充身高、上学方式等内容；
3. 说明最喜欢的科目：选择英语，说明喜欢的原因，补充课程相关细节；
4. 介绍兴趣爱好：选择打篮球，说明爱好的原因；
5. 表达理想：说明想成为篮球运动员的愿望，表达对梦想实现的期望。
【答案】
This is me
Hello everyone! I'm Daniel, and I am 13 years old. I come from Jiangyan. I study in Class 9, Grade 7 in Sunshine Middle School. I am tall and I have short hair. I don't wear glasses. I go to school by bus every day.
I like English best because I think it is interesting and useful. I have English classes three times a week. My English teacher is very kind. I also like doing sport and I like playing basketball best, because it can make me happy and relaxed.
I want to be a basketball player and I hope my dream can come true.
【知识点】
英语自我介绍写作；一般现在时运用；常用句型表达
【点评】
本文覆盖了题目要求的所有要点，适当补充了学校、上学方式等细节，语句通顺，语法正确，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀自我介绍短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以"This is me"为题写一篇英语自我介绍短文，需结合表格信息并适当发挥，词数约80。解题思路：1. 开篇点明姓名、年龄等基本信息；2. 描述外貌特征；3. 说明最喜欢的科目及原因；4. 介绍兴趣爱好及原因；5. 表达个人理想。写作时需注意语句通顺、语法正确，适当补充细节让内容更完整。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 开头介绍基本信息：点明姓名Daniel、年龄13岁，补充就读学校等细节；
2. 描述外貌：结合表格的短发、不戴眼镜，补充身高、上学方式等内容；
3. 说明最喜欢的科目：选择英语，说明喜欢的原因，补充课程相关细节；
4. 介绍兴趣爱好：选择打篮球，说明爱好的原因；
5. 表达理想：说明想成为篮球运动员的愿望，表达对梦想实现的期望。
【答案】
This is me
Hello everyone! I'm Daniel, and I am 13 years old. I come from Jiangyan. I study in Class 9, Grade 7 in Sunshine Middle School. I am tall and I have short hair. I don't wear glasses. I go to school by bus every day.
I like English best because I think it is interesting and useful. I have English classes three times a week. My English teacher is very kind. I also like doing sport and I like playing basketball best, because it can make me happy and relaxed.
I want to be a basketball player and I hope my dream can come true.
【知识点】
英语自我介绍写作；一般现在时运用；常用句型表达
【点评】
本文覆盖了题目要求的所有要点，适当补充了学校、上学方式等细节，语句通顺，语法正确，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀自我介绍短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
