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学校英语俱乐部将举行题为“My best friend”的演讲比赛。请根据所给提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你最好的朋友 Mandy。词数 70 左右。
【提示】1. What does she look like?
2. Where is she from? Where does she live now?
3. What are her hobbies?
【要求】1. 文章应包括所有提示要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，所给开头句不计入总词数。
2. 可以适当发挥，使文章意思完整，内容充实。
My best friend
My best friend is Mandy.
【提示】1. What does she look like?
2. Where is she from? Where does she live now?
3. What are her hobbies?
【要求】1. 文章应包括所有提示要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，所给开头句不计入总词数。
2. 可以适当发挥，使文章意思完整，内容充实。
My best friend
My best friend is Mandy.
答案
She is tall and slim, and she has long black hair and a pair of big smiling eyes. She comes from Australia, but now she lives in Suzhou with her family. She loves drawing and listening to music in her free time. We often go to the city library together on weekends, and we get on very well with each other.
解析
本题为七年级英语单元写作题，主题是介绍自己的好友Mandy，写作需注意：1. 完整覆盖所有提示要点：依次介绍Mandy的外貌特征、来自哪里及现居地、兴趣爱好，可适当补充相处的小细节让内容更连贯；2. 使用七年级上册所学的基础常用句型，避免超纲词汇，保证语句通顺，总词数控制在70左右，给定的开头句不计入总词数。
1. 用第三人称来写。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 写出与人物相关的信息，并可适当发挥。
高分范文
My best friend
My best friend is Mandy. She is 14 years old. She is in Class 2, Grade 7.
Now she lives in Xuzhou with her parents. She thinks it's interesting to live there. She wears glasses. She looks very lovely. Her favourite subject is English. She often helps me with my English.
At the weekend, she likes doing sport. We often play volleyball in the playground after school. We often have a good time together.
实战演练
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 写出与人物相关的信息，并可适当发挥。
高分范文
My best friend
My best friend is Mandy. She is 14 years old. She is in Class 2, Grade 7.
Now she lives in Xuzhou with her parents. She thinks it's interesting to live there. She wears glasses. She looks very lovely. Her favourite subject is English. She often helps me with my English.
At the weekend, she likes doing sport. We often play volleyball in the playground after school. We often have a good time together.
实战演练
答案
作业7 Assessment & Further study(单元写作提升)
[遣词造句]
1. She is in Class 2, Grade 7.
2. She often helps me with my English.
3. At the weekend, she likes doing sport.
[遣词造句]
1. She is in Class 2, Grade 7.
2. She often helps me with my English.
3. At the weekend, she likes doing sport.
解析
【分析】
本题是英语单元写作提升的遣词造句练习，要求学生围绕第三人称、一般现在时的规则，完成与人物相关的正确句式表达，核心是掌握班级年级的常用表述、固定搭配及一般现在时第三人称单数的动词变化规则，需确保句子结构准确、符合语法规范。
【解析】
1. 表达“在几年级几班”的常用结构为“Class + 数词, Grade + 数词”，主语为第三人称单数she，be动词用is，因此句子为She is in Class 2, Grade 7。
2. “帮助某人做某事”的固定搭配是help sb with sth，主语是第三人称单数she，一般现在时中动词help需变为helps，因此句子为She often helps me with my English。
3. “在周末”的固定表达是at the weekend，“喜欢做某事”是like doing sth，主语she为第三人称单数，like变为likes，因此句子为At the weekend, she likes doing sport。
【答案】
1. She is in Class 2, Grade 7.
2. She often helps me with my English.
3. At the weekend, she likes doing sport.
【知识点】
一般现在时、固定搭配（help sb with sth）、班级年级表达
【点评】
本题为基础的英语遣词造句训练，聚焦单元写作的核心句式和常用短语，帮助学生巩固一般现在时第三人称单数的动词变形，是单元写作的必要基础，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题是英语单元写作提升的遣词造句练习，要求学生围绕第三人称、一般现在时的规则，完成与人物相关的正确句式表达，核心是掌握班级年级的常用表述、固定搭配及一般现在时第三人称单数的动词变化规则，需确保句子结构准确、符合语法规范。
【解析】
1. 表达“在几年级几班”的常用结构为“Class + 数词, Grade + 数词”，主语为第三人称单数she，be动词用is，因此句子为She is in Class 2, Grade 7。
2. “帮助某人做某事”的固定搭配是help sb with sth，主语是第三人称单数she，一般现在时中动词help需变为helps，因此句子为She often helps me with my English。
3. “在周末”的固定表达是at the weekend，“喜欢做某事”是like doing sth，主语she为第三人称单数，like变为likes，因此句子为At the weekend, she likes doing sport。
【答案】
1. She is in Class 2, Grade 7.
2. She often helps me with my English.
3. At the weekend, she likes doing sport.
【知识点】
一般现在时、固定搭配（help sb with sth）、班级年级表达
【点评】
本题为基础的英语遣词造句训练，聚焦单元写作的核心句式和常用短语，帮助学生巩固一般现在时第三人称单数的动词变形，是单元写作的必要基础，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
