四、书面表达。
亲爱的同学们，首先祝贺大家顺利完成七年级的课程学习！在这一年的学习中，大家经历了许多开心、感动和难忘的日子。请以“A Day to Remember”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你印象深刻且难忘的一天。
要求：①根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于70；②语言流畅、书写规范。
A Day to Remember
I had a lot of great memories, and there was a special day for me to remember.

A Day to Remember
I had a lot of great memories, and there was a special day for me to remember.
Last Friday, my friends Gina and Jack asked me to join them to teach some kids art lessons in Lincang. Whe we got there, the kids welcomed us at their school gate with a warm smile. I am good at the guitar, so I taugh them how to play it. What's more, Gina taught them how to draw a good picture, and Jack told them somethin about dance. With Jack's help, the children could dance by themselves. We ended the day with some music an a funny dance happily. We had only one day with those lovely kids, but I will remember this special day forever

【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“A Day to Remember”为题写一篇不少于70词的英语短文，属于记叙文写作。解题思路：1. 开篇承接给定开头，点题引出难忘的一天；2. 选取具体事件（如参与公益活动、帮助他人等），用一般过去时详细叙述当天的时间、人物、具体活动及细节；3. 结尾点明这一天难忘的原因，确保语言流畅、符合词数要求。
【解析】首先确定核心事件为教孩子艺术的公益经历，承接给定开头后，依次叙述时间（Last Friday）、同行人物（Gina和Jack）、各自的教学内容（吉他、画画、舞蹈）、孩子的反应（微笑欢迎）、互动成果（孩子学会跳舞），最后以欢快的结尾升华情感，全程使用一般过去时，保证语言通顺，满足词数要求。
【答案】A Day to Remember
I had a lot of great memories, and there was a special day for me to remember.
Last Friday, my friends Gina and Jack asked me to join them to teach some kids art lessons in Lincang. Whe we got there, the kids welcomed us at their school gate with a warm smile. I am good at the guitar, so I taugh them how to play it. What's more, Gina taught them how to draw a good picture, and Jack told them somethin about dance. With Jack's help, the children could dance by themselves. We ended the day with some music an a funny dance happily. We had only one day with those lovely kids, but I will remember this special day forever
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、一般过去时、话题类书面表达
【点评】短文紧扣主题，选取具体生动的事例，细节丰富，情感真挚，符合题目对词数和语言流畅性的要求，是一篇合格的书面表达。
【难度系数】0.4