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你听说过《乌鸦喝水》的故事吗?请你用英文描述一下这个故事,60词左右。
提示词:乌鸦 crow 狭窄的 narrow 石头 stone 上升 rise
你听说过《乌鸦喝水》的故事吗?请你用英文描述一下这个故事,60词左右。
提示词:乌鸦 crow 狭窄的 narrow 石头 stone 上升 rise
答案
One possible version:
One day, a crow was thirsty and she wanted to
find some water to drink. So she searched for water
everywhere. Finally, she found a bottle. There was
some water in it. But the neck of the bottle was
long and narrow. So she couldn't get any water from
it. Then she found some small stones around the
bottle. Suddenly she had a very good idea. She
picked up the small stones and put them into the
bottle. Soon the water rose. And she could drink
the water in the bottle.
One day, a crow was thirsty and she wanted to
find some water to drink. So she searched for water
everywhere. Finally, she found a bottle. There was
some water in it. But the neck of the bottle was
long and narrow. So she couldn't get any water from
it. Then she found some small stones around the
bottle. Suddenly she had a very good idea. She
picked up the small stones and put them into the
bottle. Soon the water rose. And she could drink
the water in the bottle.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇经典寓言故事类的英文小写作，解题时首先要明确叙事时态，这类已有的寓言故事统一用一般过去时来写最稳妥。接下来按照故事的时间线梳理情节：首先交代故事开端，乌鸦口渴外出找水；接着写遇到的困境：找到装水的瓶子，但瓶口太窄喝不到水；再写乌鸦的解决方法，找到周围的石头投入瓶中；最后写结局水位上升，乌鸦成功喝到水。写作过程中要自然把题干给出的所有提示词全部融入内容，控制语句简洁通顺，篇幅符合60词左右的要求即可。
【解析】
1. 时态选定：寓言故事属于已经发生的既定情节，全文使用一般过去时，保证时态统一，避免语法错误。
2. 情节串联：按照“起因-遇到困难-解决困难-结局”的逻辑排布内容：
① 起因：交代时间背景，说明乌鸦口渴想要找水喝，四处搜寻后找到了一个装有水的瓶子。
② 困难：描述瓶颈又长又窄，乌鸦的嘴伸不进去，没法喝到瓶里的水。
③ 解决方法：乌鸦发现瓶子周围有很多小石子，想到把石子逐个放进瓶子里的办法。
④ 结局：随着石子增多，瓶内水位上升，乌鸦顺利喝到了水。
3. 嵌入提示词：将提示词crow作为故事主角，用narrow修饰瓶颈，用stone指代乌鸦投放的物品，用rise描述水位的变化，全部覆盖题干给出的提示要求，行文连贯流畅。
【答案】
One possible version:
One day, a crow was thirsty and she wanted to find some water to drink. So she searched for water everywhere. Finally, she found a bottle. There was some water in it. But the neck of the bottle was long and narrow. So she couldn't get any water from it. Then she found some small stones around the bottle. Suddenly she had a very good idea. She picked up the small stones and put them into the bottle. Soon the water rose. And she could drink the water in the bottle.
【知识点】
一般过去时应用，故事类写作逻辑，提示词整合
【点评】
本题属于基础的英文短篇写作，依托学生熟知的《乌鸦喝水》寓言故事降低了写作门槛，只需要学生理顺故事的先后顺序，正确使用一般过去时叙事，自然融入所有提示词，就能写出符合要求的短文，写作时注意不要出现时态混乱、情节逻辑颠倒的问题即可。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇经典寓言故事类的英文小写作，解题时首先要明确叙事时态，这类已有的寓言故事统一用一般过去时来写最稳妥。接下来按照故事的时间线梳理情节：首先交代故事开端，乌鸦口渴外出找水；接着写遇到的困境：找到装水的瓶子，但瓶口太窄喝不到水；再写乌鸦的解决方法，找到周围的石头投入瓶中；最后写结局水位上升，乌鸦成功喝到水。写作过程中要自然把题干给出的所有提示词全部融入内容，控制语句简洁通顺，篇幅符合60词左右的要求即可。
【解析】
1. 时态选定：寓言故事属于已经发生的既定情节，全文使用一般过去时，保证时态统一，避免语法错误。
2. 情节串联：按照“起因-遇到困难-解决困难-结局”的逻辑排布内容：
① 起因：交代时间背景，说明乌鸦口渴想要找水喝，四处搜寻后找到了一个装有水的瓶子。
② 困难：描述瓶颈又长又窄，乌鸦的嘴伸不进去，没法喝到瓶里的水。
③ 解决方法：乌鸦发现瓶子周围有很多小石子，想到把石子逐个放进瓶子里的办法。
④ 结局：随着石子增多，瓶内水位上升，乌鸦顺利喝到了水。
3. 嵌入提示词：将提示词crow作为故事主角，用narrow修饰瓶颈，用stone指代乌鸦投放的物品，用rise描述水位的变化，全部覆盖题干给出的提示要求，行文连贯流畅。
【答案】
One possible version:
One day, a crow was thirsty and she wanted to find some water to drink. So she searched for water everywhere. Finally, she found a bottle. There was some water in it. But the neck of the bottle was long and narrow. So she couldn't get any water from it. Then she found some small stones around the bottle. Suddenly she had a very good idea. She picked up the small stones and put them into the bottle. Soon the water rose. And she could drink the water in the bottle.
【知识点】
一般过去时应用，故事类写作逻辑，提示词整合
【点评】
本题属于基础的英文短篇写作，依托学生熟知的《乌鸦喝水》寓言故事降低了写作门槛，只需要学生理顺故事的先后顺序，正确使用一般过去时叙事，自然融入所有提示词，就能写出符合要求的短文，写作时注意不要出现时态混乱、情节逻辑颠倒的问题即可。
【难度系数】
0.7
四、补充练习
根据短文内容,提取信息,填入表格。
In a magical forest, there lived a kind nine-coloured deer. Its fur shone like a
rainbow, and all the animals loved it. One sunny morning, the deer heard cries for help. A
man fell into a river! The deer jumped into the river at once and swam to him. It saved him.
The man was very thankful and promised, "I'll never tell anyone about you!"
The deer smiled and went into the trees.
But soon, the king's wife of a nearby kingdom dreamed of a deer with wonderful fur. "I must
have its coat!" she said. The king promised much money to anyone who could find it. When the
man who was saved by the deer heard this, he broke his promise and rushed to the king.
The man showed the way to find the deer. When the deer saw the man, it said sadly, "I
saved your life. Why did you lie to me?" The king was angry when he knew the man's lie, he
shouted, "Let the deer go! We must respect the deer's kindness!" He taught the man a lesson
and tried to keep the forest safe.
The nine-coloured deer lived happily in the forest again. The story shows that keeping
promises and being thankful are important.
1.
根据短文内容,提取信息,填入表格。
In a magical forest, there lived a kind nine-coloured deer. Its fur shone like a
rainbow, and all the animals loved it. One sunny morning, the deer heard cries for help. A
man fell into a river! The deer jumped into the river at once and swam to him. It saved him.
The man was very thankful and promised, "I'll never tell anyone about you!"
The deer smiled and went into the trees.
But soon, the king's wife of a nearby kingdom dreamed of a deer with wonderful fur. "I must
have its coat!" she said. The king promised much money to anyone who could find it. When the
man who was saved by the deer heard this, he broke his promise and rushed to the king.
The man showed the way to find the deer. When the deer saw the man, it said sadly, "I
saved your life. Why did you lie to me?" The king was angry when he knew the man's lie, he
shouted, "Let the deer go! We must respect the deer's kindness!" He taught the man a lesson
and tried to keep the forest safe.
The nine-coloured deer lived happily in the forest again. The story shows that keeping
promises and being thankful are important.
1.
saved
2. never/not
3. why
4. lesson
5. happy
答案
1.saved 2.never/not 3.why 4.lesson
5.happy
5.happy
解析
【分析】
这是故事类阅读理解的信息提取题，解题时可以顺着故事发展的时间线，逐个定位每个空格对应的情节，回到原文中找到对应的原句，提取匹配的词汇即可：先梳理完整故事脉络：九色鹿住在森林→救起落水男子→男子承诺绝不向他人透露鹿的存在→国王的妻子想要鹿的皮毛→男子违背承诺带路找鹿→九色鹿质问男子为什么要撒谎→国王得知真相后惩罚了男子→九色鹿重新过上安稳幸福的生活，顺着这个脉络逐一对应查找内容就能快速得出答案。
【解析】
1. 定位原文第一段内容“A man fell into a river! The deer jumped into the river at once and swam to him. It saved him.”，全文故事使用一般过去时叙事，空格处表示九色鹿救了落水的男子，因此填saved。
2. 定位原文第一段男子的承诺“I'll never tell anyone about you!”，可知男子承诺绝不向任何人说起九色鹿的事，因此填never，也可填not。
3. 定位原文第三段九色鹿的台词“I saved your life. Why did you lie to me?”，可知九色鹿质问男子为什么要对自己撒谎，因此填why。
4. 定位原文第三段“He taught the man a lesson and tried to keep the forest safe.”，可知国王得知全部真相后，给了背信弃义的男子一个教训，因此填lesson。
5. 定位原文最后一段“The nine-coloured deer lived happily in the forest again.”，空格后是名词life，需要用形容词修饰，将副词happily转化为形容词形式happy，因此填happy。
【答案】
1. saved 2. never/not 3. why 4. lesson 5. happy
【知识点】
1. 阅读信息提取
2. 动词过去式
3. 形容词修饰名词
【点评】
本题依托经典的九色鹿故事设置考点，完全按照故事发展顺序排布空格，原文定位难度很低，既考查了学生快速抓取文本关键信息的能力，也能引导学生理解信守承诺、心怀感恩的正向价值观。
【难度系数】
0.8
这是故事类阅读理解的信息提取题，解题时可以顺着故事发展的时间线，逐个定位每个空格对应的情节，回到原文中找到对应的原句，提取匹配的词汇即可：先梳理完整故事脉络：九色鹿住在森林→救起落水男子→男子承诺绝不向他人透露鹿的存在→国王的妻子想要鹿的皮毛→男子违背承诺带路找鹿→九色鹿质问男子为什么要撒谎→国王得知真相后惩罚了男子→九色鹿重新过上安稳幸福的生活，顺着这个脉络逐一对应查找内容就能快速得出答案。
【解析】
1. 定位原文第一段内容“A man fell into a river! The deer jumped into the river at once and swam to him. It saved him.”，全文故事使用一般过去时叙事，空格处表示九色鹿救了落水的男子，因此填saved。
2. 定位原文第一段男子的承诺“I'll never tell anyone about you!”，可知男子承诺绝不向任何人说起九色鹿的事，因此填never，也可填not。
3. 定位原文第三段九色鹿的台词“I saved your life. Why did you lie to me?”，可知九色鹿质问男子为什么要对自己撒谎，因此填why。
4. 定位原文第三段“He taught the man a lesson and tried to keep the forest safe.”，可知国王得知全部真相后，给了背信弃义的男子一个教训，因此填lesson。
5. 定位原文最后一段“The nine-coloured deer lived happily in the forest again.”，空格后是名词life，需要用形容词修饰，将副词happily转化为形容词形式happy，因此填happy。
【答案】
1. saved 2. never/not 3. why 4. lesson 5. happy
【知识点】
1. 阅读信息提取
2. 动词过去式
3. 形容词修饰名词
【点评】
本题依托经典的九色鹿故事设置考点，完全按照故事发展顺序排布空格，原文定位难度很低，既考查了学生快速抓取文本关键信息的能力，也能引导学生理解信守承诺、心怀感恩的正向价值观。
【难度系数】
0.8
