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假如你是李华,你的美国笔友 Jim 发来电子邮件,说他下周受邀来中国做客,但对中国的风俗习惯、见面礼仪及餐桌礼仪了解很少,于是向你寻求帮助。请你给他回一封电子邮件,告诉他有关中国风俗习惯、见面礼仪及餐桌礼仪的情况。
How do Chinese people greet each other?
What should people do when they are invited to someone's home?
What are the table manners in China?
Please write more about Chinese customs.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100词左右。
Dear Jim,
I am so happy to know that you are coming to China next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
请使用下面的表格完成自评并修改、誊写你的作文。
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友 Jim 发来电子邮件,说他下周受邀来中国做客,但对中国的风俗习惯、见面礼仪及餐桌礼仪了解很少,于是向你寻求帮助。请你给他回一封电子邮件,告诉他有关中国风俗习惯、见面礼仪及餐桌礼仪的情况。
How do Chinese people greet each other?
What should people do when they are invited to someone's home?
What are the table manners in China?
Please write more about Chinese customs.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100词左右。
Dear Jim,
I am so happy to know that you are coming to China next week.
I know you want to learn something about Chinese customs. Let me tell you some of them.
In China, people are supposed to shake hands when they meet for the first time. If you are invited to someone's home,
you should bring some small gifts like some fruit. But don't
bring a clock as a gift because it sounds like "death" in Chinese.
Flowers are a good choice except chrysanthemums because they
are used for the people that have passed away. When you are at
the dinner table,try to use chopsticks. Don't point at others with
your chopsticks or stick them into the rice. You'd better not talk
when your mouth is full.
I hope the advice is helpful to you. Have a good time in
China.
In China, people are supposed to shake hands when they meet for the first time. If you are invited to someone's home,
you should bring some small gifts like some fruit. But don't
bring a clock as a gift because it sounds like "death" in Chinese.
Flowers are a good choice except chrysanthemums because they
are used for the people that have passed away. When you are at
the dinner table,try to use chopsticks. Don't point at others with
your chopsticks or stick them into the rice. You'd better not talk
when your mouth is full.
I hope the advice is helpful to you. Have a good time in
China.
Yours,
Li Hua
请使用下面的表格完成自评并修改、誊写你的作文。
答案
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
I am so happy to know that you are coming to China next
week. I know you want to learn something about Chinese
customs. Let me tell you some of them.
In China, people are supposed to shake hands when they
meet for the first time. If you are invited to someone's home,
you should bring some small gifts like some fruit. But don't
bring a clock as a gift because it sounds like "death" in Chinese.
Flowers are a good choice except chrysanthemums because they
are used for the people that have passed away. When you are at
the dinner table,try to use chopsticks. Don't point at others with
your chopsticks or stick them into the rice. You'd better not talk
when your mouth is full.
I hope the advice is helpful to you. Have a good time in
China.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jim,
I am so happy to know that you are coming to China next
week. I know you want to learn something about Chinese
customs. Let me tell you some of them.
In China, people are supposed to shake hands when they
meet for the first time. If you are invited to someone's home,
you should bring some small gifts like some fruit. But don't
bring a clock as a gift because it sounds like "death" in Chinese.
Flowers are a good choice except chrysanthemums because they
are used for the people that have passed away. When you are at
the dinner table,try to use chopsticks. Don't point at others with
your chopsticks or stick them into the rice. You'd better not talk
when your mouth is full.
I hope the advice is helpful to you. Have a good time in
China.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
这是一封写给美国笔友的电子邮件，需围绕中国的见面礼仪、拜访礼仪、餐桌礼仪展开写作。解题思路：首先明确写作要求——人称用第二人称、时态用一般现在时，覆盖三个核心要点，词数约100词；接着按“开头点明写信目的→分述三类礼仪→结尾表达祝愿”的结构组织内容，确保语言准确、逻辑连贯，符合邮件格式。
【解析】
1. 开头：承接题干，说明写信意图，引出要介绍的中国礼仪相关内容；
2. 见面礼仪：明确说明初次见面应握手，符合中国传统习俗；
3. 拜访礼仪：告知受邀去别人家需带小礼物（如水果），禁忌送钟，可选鲜花（排除菊花）；
4. 餐桌礼仪：介绍用筷子的注意事项（不指人、不插米饭），嘴里有食物时不说话；
5. 结尾：表达希望帮助，祝对方在中国愉快。全程使用第二人称，一般现在时，确保语法、拼写正确，覆盖所有要求要点，行文流畅。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
I am so happy to know that you are coming to China next week. I know you want to learn something about Chinese customs. Let me tell you some of them.
In China, people are supposed to shake hands when they meet for the first time. If you are invited to someone's home, you should bring some small gifts like some fruit. But don't bring a clock as a gift because it sounds like "death" in Chinese. Flowers are a good choice except chrysanthemums because they are used for the people that have passed away. When you are at the dinner table,try to use chopsticks. Don't point at others with your chopsticks or stick them into the rice. You'd better not talk when your mouth is full.
I hope the advice is helpful to you. Have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；中国文化英语表达；一般现在时运用
【点评】
该范文完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，人称、时态正确，语法拼写无误，句型结构丰富，逻辑清晰、行文连贯，符合邮件写作格式，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一封写给美国笔友的电子邮件，需围绕中国的见面礼仪、拜访礼仪、餐桌礼仪展开写作。解题思路：首先明确写作要求——人称用第二人称、时态用一般现在时，覆盖三个核心要点，词数约100词；接着按“开头点明写信目的→分述三类礼仪→结尾表达祝愿”的结构组织内容，确保语言准确、逻辑连贯，符合邮件格式。
【解析】
1. 开头：承接题干，说明写信意图，引出要介绍的中国礼仪相关内容；
2. 见面礼仪：明确说明初次见面应握手，符合中国传统习俗；
3. 拜访礼仪：告知受邀去别人家需带小礼物（如水果），禁忌送钟，可选鲜花（排除菊花）；
4. 餐桌礼仪：介绍用筷子的注意事项（不指人、不插米饭），嘴里有食物时不说话；
5. 结尾：表达希望帮助，祝对方在中国愉快。全程使用第二人称，一般现在时，确保语法、拼写正确，覆盖所有要求要点，行文流畅。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
I am so happy to know that you are coming to China next week. I know you want to learn something about Chinese customs. Let me tell you some of them.
In China, people are supposed to shake hands when they meet for the first time. If you are invited to someone's home, you should bring some small gifts like some fruit. But don't bring a clock as a gift because it sounds like "death" in Chinese. Flowers are a good choice except chrysanthemums because they are used for the people that have passed away. When you are at the dinner table,try to use chopsticks. Don't point at others with your chopsticks or stick them into the rice. You'd better not talk when your mouth is full.
I hope the advice is helpful to you. Have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；中国文化英语表达；一般现在时运用
【点评】
该范文完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，人称、时态正确，语法拼写无误，句型结构丰富，逻辑清晰、行文连贯，符合邮件写作格式，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
你们班的交换生 David 这周末要参加一个中国朋友的生日聚会。
任务一:According to Chinese birthday party traditions,fill in the blanks with proper suggestions.
1. Dressing:Clothing like
2. Greetings:When you arrive,greet the host with a
3. Gifts:You may bring
4. Table manners:When eating,you should
任务二:Besides the points above,give 2 more tips to David.
任务一:According to Chinese birthday party traditions,fill in the blanks with proper suggestions.
1. Dressing:Clothing like
a shirt and nice trousers/...
is great. But remember to avoid colours like black and white
.2. Greetings:When you arrive,greet the host with a
bright smile/handshake
. You can say happy birthday
to the birthday person.3. Gifts:You may bring
a small gift/...
to the birthday person. It's rude to bring gifts like clocks
.4. Table manners:When eating,you should
start eating after everyone sits down/...
. Never point at others with your chopsticks/...
.任务二:Besides the points above,give 2 more tips to David.
1. You may talk about the food,family and cultural stories with
them.
2. In China,the birthday person cuts the cake first,and guests
often cheer.
them.
2. In China,the birthday person cuts the cake first,and guests
often cheer.
答案
任务一:
1. a shirt and nice trousers/... ;black and white
2. bright smile/handshake;happy birthday
3. a small gift/... ;bring gifts like clocks
4. start eating after everyone sits down/... ;point at others with
your chopsticks/...
任务二:
1. You may talk about the food,family and cultural stories with
them.
2. In China,the birthday person cuts the cake first,and guests
often cheer.
1. a shirt and nice trousers/... ;black and white
2. bright smile/handshake;happy birthday
3. a small gift/... ;bring gifts like clocks
4. start eating after everyone sits down/... ;point at others with
your chopsticks/...
任务二:
1. You may talk about the food,family and cultural stories with
them.
2. In China,the birthday person cuts the cake first,and guests
often cheer.
解析
【分析】本题考查中国生日聚会的传统礼仪，解题时需结合中国文化常识，分别从着装、问候、礼物、餐桌礼仪四个维度完成任务一的填空，再围绕中国生日聚会的额外规则补充两个小贴士完成任务二，确保填写内容符合传统且合理。
【解析】任务一：1. 中国生日聚会着装需整洁得体，可选择衬衫和西裤等，避免黑色、白色（因这两种颜色在中国常与丧事相关）；2. 到达后用微笑或握手问候主人，对生日者说“生日快乐”；3. 可带小礼物，送钟表是不礼貌的（“钟”谐音“终”，寓意不吉利）；4. 用餐时需等所有人坐下后再开始，不能用筷子指人。任务二：补充的小贴士可围绕交流话题、生日流程等，如可与主人聊食物、家庭或文化故事，生日者先切蛋糕，客人常欢呼。
【答案】任务一:
1. a shirt and nice trousers/... ;black and white
2. bright smile/handshake;happy birthday
3. a small gift/... ;bring gifts like clocks
4. start eating after everyone sits down/... ;point at others with your chopsticks/...
任务二:
1. You may talk about the food,family and cultural stories with them.
2. In China,the birthday person cuts the cake first,and guests often cheer.
【知识点】中国传统礼仪、日常英语应用
【点评】本题结合实际场景考查中国传统礼仪的英语表达，贴近生活，既考查文化常识又锻炼英语运用能力，实用性较强。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】任务一：1. 中国生日聚会着装需整洁得体，可选择衬衫和西裤等，避免黑色、白色（因这两种颜色在中国常与丧事相关）；2. 到达后用微笑或握手问候主人，对生日者说“生日快乐”；3. 可带小礼物，送钟表是不礼貌的（“钟”谐音“终”，寓意不吉利）；4. 用餐时需等所有人坐下后再开始，不能用筷子指人。任务二：补充的小贴士可围绕交流话题、生日流程等，如可与主人聊食物、家庭或文化故事，生日者先切蛋糕，客人常欢呼。
【答案】任务一:
1. a shirt and nice trousers/... ;black and white
2. bright smile/handshake;happy birthday
3. a small gift/... ;bring gifts like clocks
4. start eating after everyone sits down/... ;point at others with your chopsticks/...
任务二:
1. You may talk about the food,family and cultural stories with them.
2. In China,the birthday person cuts the cake first,and guests often cheer.
【知识点】中国传统礼仪、日常英语应用
【点评】本题结合实际场景考查中国传统礼仪的英语表达，贴近生活，既考查文化常识又锻炼英语运用能力，实用性较强。
【难度系数】0.5
