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10. (B)校园生活如同一片花园,同学们在其中播种、欢笑和收获。这些经历记录了同学们的成长。初中生活即将结束,你们学校英语社团正在开展主题为“My
写作要求:1. 请补全标题; 2. 记录真实故事,表达个人情感; 3. 语句连贯,语言通顺,词数在80词左右。
My
Happy
School Days”的征文活动,请你结合海报内容写一篇短文参与此活动。(15 分)写作要求:1. 请补全标题; 2. 记录真实故事,表达个人情感; 3. 语句连贯,语言通顺,词数在80词左右。
My
Happy
School DaysMy junior high school days are like a beautiful garden, full of joy and growth. My junior high school days are precious memories I'll never forget. I still remember last term's Art Festival is still fresh in my mind. I was nervous about my painting show, but my friends stayed beside me, giving encouragement. My art teacher also guided me patiently, helping me fix details. We shared laughs at lunchtime and supported each other in math class. These days let friendship grow and dreams take shape. Teachers were always kind and patient. When I struggled with math, my teacher stayed after class to explain problems again and again. These warm moments made my friendships grow and my dreams take flight. Thank you, my school, for making me brighter and braver. These unforgettable days will stay in my heart forever.
答案
My Happy School Days
My junior high school days are like a beautiful garden, full of joy and growth. My junior high school days are precious memories I'll never forget. I still remember last term's Art Festival is still fresh in my mind. I was nervous about my painting show, but my friends stayed beside me, giving encouragement. My art teacher also guided me patiently, helping me fix details.
We shared laughs at lunchtime and supported each other in math class. These days let friendship grow and dreams take shape.
Teachers were always kind and patient. When I struggled with math, my teacher stayed after class to explain problems again and again. These warm moments made my friendships grow and my dreams take flight.
Thank you, my school, for making me brighter and braver. These unforgettable days will stay in my heart forever.
My junior high school days are like a beautiful garden, full of joy and growth. My junior high school days are precious memories I'll never forget. I still remember last term's Art Festival is still fresh in my mind. I was nervous about my painting show, but my friends stayed beside me, giving encouragement. My art teacher also guided me patiently, helping me fix details.
We shared laughs at lunchtime and supported each other in math class. These days let friendship grow and dreams take shape.
Teachers were always kind and patient. When I struggled with math, my teacher stayed after class to explain problems again and again. These warm moments made my friendships grow and my dreams take flight.
Thank you, my school, for making me brighter and braver. These unforgettable days will stay in my heart forever.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，解题思路如下：首先需结合校园生活的积极主题补全标题，从海报中“fun”“kind”“bright”等关键词，选择合适的形容词（如“Happy”）；接着围绕补全的标题，结合海报里的校园元素（艺术节、老师帮助、数学学习、午餐时光、友谊等），选取真实的个人经历；最后组织语言，做到语句连贯、情感真挚，词数控制在80左右，符合征文要求。
【解析】
1. 补全标题：结合主题与海报内容，确定标题为“My Happy School Days”；
2. 开头点题：将初中校园生活比作充满欢乐与成长的花园，引出主题；
3. 内容展开：结合海报元素，选取具体事例（艺术节时朋友和老师的鼓励、数学学习中老师的帮助、午餐时的分享），体现校园生活的温暖与成长；
4. 结尾升华：表达对学校的感谢，呼应标题，抒发难忘校园生活的情感。
【答案】
My Happy School Days
My junior high school days are like a beautiful garden, full of joy and growth. I still remember last term's Art Festival: I was nervous about my painting show, but my friends stayed beside me to encourage me, and my art teacher guided me patiently. We shared laughs at lunchtime and supported each other in math class. When I struggled with math, my teacher explained problems again after class. These warm moments made my friendship grow and my dreams take flight. Thank you, my school, for making me brighter. These unforgettable days will stay in my heart forever.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；标题补全；情感表达
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，结合海报中的校园元素，选取真实事例，情感真挚，语句连贯，符合词数要求，完美呼应标题，是一篇符合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语应用文写作题，解题思路如下：首先需结合校园生活的积极主题补全标题，从海报中“fun”“kind”“bright”等关键词，选择合适的形容词（如“Happy”）；接着围绕补全的标题，结合海报里的校园元素（艺术节、老师帮助、数学学习、午餐时光、友谊等），选取真实的个人经历；最后组织语言，做到语句连贯、情感真挚，词数控制在80左右，符合征文要求。
【解析】
1. 补全标题：结合主题与海报内容，确定标题为“My Happy School Days”；
2. 开头点题：将初中校园生活比作充满欢乐与成长的花园，引出主题；
3. 内容展开：结合海报元素，选取具体事例（艺术节时朋友和老师的鼓励、数学学习中老师的帮助、午餐时的分享），体现校园生活的温暖与成长；
4. 结尾升华：表达对学校的感谢，呼应标题，抒发难忘校园生活的情感。
【答案】
My Happy School Days
My junior high school days are like a beautiful garden, full of joy and growth. I still remember last term's Art Festival: I was nervous about my painting show, but my friends stayed beside me to encourage me, and my art teacher guided me patiently. We shared laughs at lunchtime and supported each other in math class. When I struggled with math, my teacher explained problems again after class. These warm moments made my friendship grow and my dreams take flight. Thank you, my school, for making me brighter. These unforgettable days will stay in my heart forever.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；标题补全；情感表达
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，结合海报中的校园元素，选取真实事例，情感真挚，语句连贯，符合词数要求，完美呼应标题，是一篇符合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】
0.6
