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四、书面表达(共 20 分)
9. (A)在今年的“地球一小时 (Earth Hour)”活动之前,请你在主题班会上用英语介绍这一活动。假如你是张明,请根据以下表格内容,写一篇40字左右的英语短文。(5 分)
写作要求:1. 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范; 2. 必须包括所有要点并作适当补充; 3. 短文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息; 4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
Today, I want to introduce Earth Hour to you.
9. (A)在今年的“地球一小时 (Earth Hour)”活动之前,请你在主题班会上用英语介绍这一活动。假如你是张明,请根据以下表格内容,写一篇40字左右的英语短文。(5 分)
写作要求:1. 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范; 2. 必须包括所有要点并作适当补充; 3. 短文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息; 4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
Today, I want to introduce Earth Hour to you.
It takes place from 8:30 p.m. to 9:30 p.m. on the last Saturday in March every year. During this hour, people turn off lights to raise awareness about environmental protection, reduce pollution and fight climate change. Let's take action together! We can also make long-term changes, such as using less plastic and saving energy daily. Every small effort counts for our planet's future.
答案
It takes place from 8:30 p.m. to 9:30 p.m. on the last Saturday in March every year. During this hour, people turn off lights to raise awareness about environmental protection, reduce pollution and fight climate change.
Let's take action together! We can also make long-term changes, such as using less plastic and saving energy daily. Every small effort counts for our planet's future.
Let's take action together! We can also make long-term changes, such as using less plastic and saving energy daily. Every small effort counts for our planet's future.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以张明的身份在主题班会上用英语介绍“地球一小时”活动，需涵盖表格中的所有要点（名称、时间、形式、目的），并适当补充内容，语句通顺连贯，开头已给出，需衔接开头完成短文。解题思路：先明确活动的时间、形式，再说明活动目的，最后补充呼吁行动的内容，确保所有要点都包含，语言符合英语表达习惯，语句流畅自然。
【解析】
承接开头后，先介绍活动时间：It takes place from 8:30 p.m. to 9:30 p.m. on the last Saturday in March every year. 接着说明活动形式与目的：During this hour, people turn off lights to raise awareness about environmental protection, reduce pollution and fight climate change. 最后补充呼吁内容，使短文更完整：Let's take action together! We can also make long-term changes, such as using less plastic and saving energy daily. Every small effort counts for our planet's future.
【答案】
It takes place from 8:30 p.m. to 9:30 p.m. on the last Saturday in March every year. During this hour, people turn off lights to raise awareness about environmental protection, reduce pollution and fight climate change. Let's take action together! We can also make long-term changes, such as using less plastic and saving energy daily. Every small effort counts for our planet's future.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、环保主题写作
【点评】
该短文完整覆盖了“地球一小时”活动的所有要点，语句通顺、逻辑连贯，适当补充了日常环保行动的内容，符合题目要求，是一篇符合标准的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以张明的身份在主题班会上用英语介绍“地球一小时”活动，需涵盖表格中的所有要点（名称、时间、形式、目的），并适当补充内容，语句通顺连贯，开头已给出，需衔接开头完成短文。解题思路：先明确活动的时间、形式，再说明活动目的，最后补充呼吁行动的内容，确保所有要点都包含，语言符合英语表达习惯，语句流畅自然。
【解析】
承接开头后，先介绍活动时间：It takes place from 8:30 p.m. to 9:30 p.m. on the last Saturday in March every year. 接着说明活动形式与目的：During this hour, people turn off lights to raise awareness about environmental protection, reduce pollution and fight climate change. 最后补充呼吁内容，使短文更完整：Let's take action together! We can also make long-term changes, such as using less plastic and saving energy daily. Every small effort counts for our planet's future.
【答案】
It takes place from 8:30 p.m. to 9:30 p.m. on the last Saturday in March every year. During this hour, people turn off lights to raise awareness about environmental protection, reduce pollution and fight climate change. Let's take action together! We can also make long-term changes, such as using less plastic and saving energy daily. Every small effort counts for our planet's future.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、环保主题写作
【点评】
该短文完整覆盖了“地球一小时”活动的所有要点，语句通顺、逻辑连贯，适当补充了日常环保行动的内容，符合题目要求，是一篇符合标准的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
