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【写作赏析】
【写作主题】本单元的话题是“如何成为更好的自己”，要求学生学会运用本单元所学知识及语法写一篇关于成功人士的文章。
【范文赏析】
I think Yuan Longping is a great scientist in my heart. （引出话题）He has something special and important that we can learn from.
He faced many challenges. For example, he had to deal with doubts from others. But to our surprise, he had stuck to his dream for many years. He worked hard in the fields and had a try at doing lots of experiments. As long as there was a chance to succeed, he was willing to overcome the challenges. He made history by developing hybrid rice.（袁隆平面临的挑战及取得的成就）
I think we should learn from him. We shouldn't be afraid of the problems we meet. Instead, we should be willing to work hard and go for our goals.（呼吁）
☑体裁：
☑时态：
☑佳词佳句积累：
1. 特别且重要的东西
2. 向……学习；从……中学到
4. 比如
6. 令某人惊讶的是
8. 尝试做某事
10. 愿意做某事
12. 害怕
14. 但令我们惊讶的是，他多年来一直坚持自己的梦想。
15. 只要有成功的机会，他就愿意去挑战。
☑写作提升：使用所给短语并参考其在范文中的句子，根据中文提示，翻译句子。
1. 为什么你不试试帮助他？（have a try at doing sth）
2. 只要你努力练习，你就有机会获奖。（as long as）
【写作主题】本单元的话题是“如何成为更好的自己”，要求学生学会运用本单元所学知识及语法写一篇关于成功人士的文章。
【范文赏析】
I think Yuan Longping is a great scientist in my heart. （引出话题）He has something special and important that we can learn from.
He faced many challenges. For example, he had to deal with doubts from others. But to our surprise, he had stuck to his dream for many years. He worked hard in the fields and had a try at doing lots of experiments. As long as there was a chance to succeed, he was willing to overcome the challenges. He made history by developing hybrid rice.（袁隆平面临的挑战及取得的成就）
I think we should learn from him. We shouldn't be afraid of the problems we meet. Instead, we should be willing to work hard and go for our goals.（呼吁）
☑体裁：
议论文
☑人称：第一人称、第三人称
☑时态：
一般过去时、一般现在时
☑佳词佳句积累：
1. 特别且重要的东西
something special and important
2. 向……学习；从……中学到
learn from
3. 面临挑战 face challenges
4. 比如
for example
5. 处理 deal with
6. 令某人惊讶的是
to one's surprise
7. 坚持 stick to
8. 尝试做某事
have a try at doing sth
9. 只要 as long as
10. 愿意做某事
be willing to do sth
11. 创造历史 make history
12. 害怕
be afraid of
13. 追求 go for
14. 但令我们惊讶的是，他多年来一直坚持自己的梦想。
But to our surprise, he had stuck to his dream for many years.
15. 只要有成功的机会，他就愿意去挑战。
As long as there was a chance to succeed, he was willing to overcome the challenges.
☑写作提升：使用所给短语并参考其在范文中的句子，根据中文提示，翻译句子。
1. 为什么你不试试帮助他？（have a try at doing sth）
Why don't you have a try at helping him?
2. 只要你努力练习，你就有机会获奖。（as long as）
As long as you practise hard, you will have a chance of winning the prize.
答案
体裁：议论文
人称：第一人称、第三人称
时态：一般过去时、一般现在时
1. something special and important
2. learn from
3. face challenges
4. for example
5. deal with
6. to one's surprise
7. stick to
8. have a try at doing sth
9. as long as
10. be willing to do sth
11. make history
12. be afraid of
13. go for
14. But to our surprise, he had stuck to his dream for many years.
15. As long as there was a chance to succeed, he was willing to overcome the challenges.
写作提升：
1. Why don't you have a try at helping him?
2. As long as you practise hard, you will have a chance of winning the prize.
人称：第一人称、第三人称
时态：一般过去时、一般现在时
1. something special and important
2. learn from
3. face challenges
4. for example
5. deal with
6. to one's surprise
7. stick to
8. have a try at doing sth
9. as long as
10. be willing to do sth
11. make history
12. be afraid of
13. go for
14. But to our surprise, he had stuck to his dream for many years.
15. As long as there was a chance to succeed, he was willing to overcome the challenges.
写作提升：
1. Why don't you have a try at helping him?
2. As long as you practise hard, you will have a chance of winning the prize.
解析
【分析】
本题围绕英语写作赏析展开，涵盖体裁、人称、时态判断，短语积累及句子翻译，解题思路为：1. 体裁：根据范文的结构（引出人物-叙述事迹-表达感悟）判断；2. 人称：梳理文中使用的人称代词确定；3. 时态：区分叙述事迹和表达观点对应的时态；4. 短语积累：直接对应范文中的固定搭配；5. 句子翻译：结合给定短语，按英语表达习惯组织符合中文意思的句子，注意句式和时态。
【解析】
1. 体裁：范文围绕人物事迹表达观点，属于议论文；
2. 人称：文中用第一人称“I”表达看法，用第三人称“he”指代袁隆平，故为第一人称、第三人称；
3. 时态：叙述袁隆平的过往事迹用一般过去时，表达个人观点用一般现在时；
4. 佳词佳句：对应范文中的固定短语和句子，直接提取；
5. 写作提升：1. 用“Why don't you...”句式，结合给定短语“have a try at doing sth”组织句子；2. 用“as long as”引导条件状语从句，从句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时，结合给定短语完成翻译。
【答案】
体裁：议论文
人称：第一人称、第三人称
时态：一般过去时、一般现在时
佳词佳句积累：
1. something special and important
2. learn from
3. face challenges
4. for example
5. deal with
6. to one's surprise
7. stick to
8. have a try at doing sth
9. as long as
10. be willing to do sth
11. make history
12. be afraid of
13. go for
14. But to our surprise, he had stuck to his dream for many years.
15. As long as there was a chance to succeed, he was willing to overcome the challenges.
写作提升：
1. Why don't you have a try at helping him?
2. As long as you practise hard, you will have a chance of winning the prize.
【知识点】
英语写作体裁、英语人称与时态、英语短语运用
【点评】
本题贴合单元写作话题，考查基础写作相关的体裁、人称、时态判断，以及短语积累和句子翻译能力，帮助学生巩固写作基础，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题围绕英语写作赏析展开，涵盖体裁、人称、时态判断，短语积累及句子翻译，解题思路为：1. 体裁：根据范文的结构（引出人物-叙述事迹-表达感悟）判断；2. 人称：梳理文中使用的人称代词确定；3. 时态：区分叙述事迹和表达观点对应的时态；4. 短语积累：直接对应范文中的固定搭配；5. 句子翻译：结合给定短语，按英语表达习惯组织符合中文意思的句子，注意句式和时态。
【解析】
1. 体裁：范文围绕人物事迹表达观点，属于议论文；
2. 人称：文中用第一人称“I”表达看法，用第三人称“he”指代袁隆平，故为第一人称、第三人称；
3. 时态：叙述袁隆平的过往事迹用一般过去时，表达个人观点用一般现在时；
4. 佳词佳句：对应范文中的固定短语和句子，直接提取；
5. 写作提升：1. 用“Why don't you...”句式，结合给定短语“have a try at doing sth”组织句子；2. 用“as long as”引导条件状语从句，从句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时，结合给定短语完成翻译。
【答案】
体裁：议论文
人称：第一人称、第三人称
时态：一般过去时、一般现在时
佳词佳句积累：
1. something special and important
2. learn from
3. face challenges
4. for example
5. deal with
6. to one's surprise
7. stick to
8. have a try at doing sth
9. as long as
10. be willing to do sth
11. make history
12. be afraid of
13. go for
14. But to our surprise, he had stuck to his dream for many years.
15. As long as there was a chance to succeed, he was willing to overcome the challenges.
写作提升：
1. Why don't you have a try at helping him?
2. As long as you practise hard, you will have a chance of winning the prize.
【知识点】
英语写作体裁、英语人称与时态、英语短语运用
【点评】
本题贴合单元写作话题，考查基础写作相关的体裁、人称、时态判断，以及短语积累和句子翻译能力，帮助学生巩固写作基础，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.3
