76. 假设你是李华,要参加校英语俱乐部以“Speak up for my hometown ”为主题的征文比赛。请你写一篇80—100词的英语短文,内容包含以下要点:
(1)个人经历:探寻家乡历史古迹或传承家乡传统民俗;
(2)推广建议:向青少年提出推广家乡本土文化的建议。
My hometown has a long history and wonderful traditional culture.
(1)个人经历:探寻家乡历史古迹或传承家乡传统民俗;
(2)推广建议:向青少年提出推广家乡本土文化的建议。
My hometown has a long history and wonderful traditional culture.
答案
76. One possible version:
My hometown has a long history and wonderful traditional culture. Last weekend, I visited the local history museum. I listened to the guide carefully and learnt many interesting historical stories and local customs. I also took some photos and shared them online to introduce my hometown’s culture to more people.
As teenagers, we should learn more about our hometown’s history first. We can learn traditional skills and spread local art in English. It is our duty to protect and pass on our hometown’s culture. Let’s take action and feel proud to be the voice of our hometown’s historical culture.
My hometown has a long history and wonderful traditional culture. Last weekend, I visited the local history museum. I listened to the guide carefully and learnt many interesting historical stories and local customs. I also took some photos and shared them online to introduce my hometown’s culture to more people.
As teenagers, we should learn more about our hometown’s history first. We can learn traditional skills and spread local art in English. It is our duty to protect and pass on our hometown’s culture. Let’s take action and feel proud to be the voice of our hometown’s historical culture.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语征文写作题,主题为“为家乡发声”,需覆盖两个核心要点:一是个人探访家乡历史古迹或传统民俗的经历,二是给青少年推广家乡文化的建议。解题思路为:先承接给定开头点题,再用具体事例写个人经历,最后针对青少年提出可操作的推广建议,确保词数在80-100词,语言通顺、要点齐全。
【解析】
1. 开头:承接给定句子“My hometown has a long history and wonderful traditional culture.”,自然过渡到个人经历;
2. 个人经历部分:用过去式描述具体事例,如参观当地历史博物馆,记录学习到的历史故事、民俗,以及分享文化的行为;
3. 推广建议部分:用一般现在时,针对青少年提出建议,如先了解家乡文化、学习传统技能、用英语传播本土文化,最后呼吁行动;
4. 检查:确保词数符合要求,要点无遗漏,语言符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
One possible version:
My hometown has a long history and wonderful traditional culture. Last weekend, I visited the local history museum. I listened to the guide carefully and learnt many interesting historical stories and local customs. I also took some photos and shared them online to introduce my hometown’s culture to more people.
As teenagers, we should learn more about our hometown’s history first. We can learn traditional skills and spread local art in English. It is our duty to protect and pass on our hometown’s culture. Let’s take action and feel proud to be the voice of our hometown’s historical culture.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、家乡文化主题写作、要点式作文
【点评】
本题结合学生生活实际,既引导学生关注家乡本土文化,又考查英语应用文写作能力,要求紧扣主题覆盖两个核心要点,符合初中英语写作的考查方向,贴近学生认知水平。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语征文写作题,主题为“为家乡发声”,需覆盖两个核心要点:一是个人探访家乡历史古迹或传统民俗的经历,二是给青少年推广家乡文化的建议。解题思路为:先承接给定开头点题,再用具体事例写个人经历,最后针对青少年提出可操作的推广建议,确保词数在80-100词,语言通顺、要点齐全。
【解析】
1. 开头:承接给定句子“My hometown has a long history and wonderful traditional culture.”,自然过渡到个人经历;
2. 个人经历部分:用过去式描述具体事例,如参观当地历史博物馆,记录学习到的历史故事、民俗,以及分享文化的行为;
3. 推广建议部分:用一般现在时,针对青少年提出建议,如先了解家乡文化、学习传统技能、用英语传播本土文化,最后呼吁行动;
4. 检查:确保词数符合要求,要点无遗漏,语言符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
One possible version:
My hometown has a long history and wonderful traditional culture. Last weekend, I visited the local history museum. I listened to the guide carefully and learnt many interesting historical stories and local customs. I also took some photos and shared them online to introduce my hometown’s culture to more people.
As teenagers, we should learn more about our hometown’s history first. We can learn traditional skills and spread local art in English. It is our duty to protect and pass on our hometown’s culture. Let’s take action and feel proud to be the voice of our hometown’s historical culture.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、家乡文化主题写作、要点式作文
【点评】
本题结合学生生活实际,既引导学生关注家乡本土文化,又考查英语应用文写作能力,要求紧扣主题覆盖两个核心要点,符合初中英语写作的考查方向,贴近学生认知水平。
【难度系数】
0.6
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