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1. 写作任务
生日是成长的见证,每个人对每次生日都有不一样的感受。请你根据以下提示和写作要求,以“My Birthday”为题,用英语写一篇不少于60个词的短文,描述你的生日。
写作要求：(1) 短文须包含上图中所有信息,并适当拓展；(2) 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
2. 思路点拨
第一步：审题 体裁：
第二步：列提纲
第三步：句子积累
开头句：
(1) My birthday is
(2) My friend Tony
中间句：
(1) She
(2) I want to go to the party and
(3) I
(4) I
(5) I like
结尾句：
(1) She has a happy birthday party. 她有一个快乐的生日聚会。
(2) I want to do
名言名句：
(1) How time flies! 时光飞逝！
(2) Another year older, another year wiser. 长一岁,更智慧。
3. 范文品鉴
My Birthday
My name is Wang Xiao. My birthday is on 9th July. (开篇点题,点出生日时间)
On that day, I usually get lots of gifts from my family and friends. We always have a big dinner together at home. My parents usually make my favourite food and a delicious birthday cake for me. Everyone says “Happy birthday” to me, and I make a wish and blow out the candles. Next, we enjoy the delicious food and the cake. After that, we take some photos together. It's fun to look at the photos later. (描述怎么庆祝生日)
Another year older, another year wiser. Every birthday, I feel happy and thankful. I think I am a lucky girl. (描述自己的感受)
生日是成长的见证,每个人对每次生日都有不一样的感受。请你根据以下提示和写作要求,以“My Birthday”为题,用英语写一篇不少于60个词的短文,描述你的生日。
写作要求：(1) 短文须包含上图中所有信息,并适当拓展；(2) 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
2. 思路点拨
第一步：审题 体裁：
记叙文
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
第二步：列提纲
第三步：句子积累
开头句：
(1) My birthday is
on March 12th
. 我的生日是3月12日。 (2) My friend Tony
has a
birthday party this Saturday at
his house. 这个星期六我的朋友托尼在他家有一个生日聚会。 中间句：
(1) She
invites
her friends to
her birthday party. 她邀请她的朋友们去她的生日聚会。 (2) I want to go to the party and
give her a special birthday gift
. 我想要去聚会并给她一份特殊的生日礼物。 (3) I
make a wish
and blow out the candles. 我许了个愿,吹灭了蜡烛。 (4) I
hope
he likes the gift and has a happy birthday. 我希望他喜欢这个礼物,并且有个快乐的生日。 (5) I like
taking photos
because they can help me remember. 我喜欢拍照,因为它们能帮我铭记。 结尾句：
(1) She has a happy birthday party. 她有一个快乐的生日聚会。
(2) I want to do
something special
/ different next time to make it more meaningful
. 下次我想做点特殊的/不同的事情来让它更加有意义。 名言名句：
(1) How time flies! 时光飞逝！
(2) Another year older, another year wiser. 长一岁,更智慧。
3. 范文品鉴
My Birthday
My name is Wang Xiao. My birthday is on 9th July. (开篇点题,点出生日时间)
On that day, I usually get lots of gifts from my family and friends. We always have a big dinner together at home. My parents usually make my favourite food and a delicious birthday cake for me. Everyone says “Happy birthday” to me, and I make a wish and blow out the candles. Next, we enjoy the delicious food and the cake. After that, we take some photos together. It's fun to look at the photos later. (描述怎么庆祝生日)
Another year older, another year wiser. Every birthday, I feel happy and thankful. I think I am a lucky girl. (描述自己的感受)
答案
1. My Birthday
My birthday is on 15th October. On that day, my family and friends always celebrate with me. My parents cook my favorite dishes and make a big birthday cake. I invite my best friends to my home. We sing "Happy Birthday" together, then I make a wish and blow out the candles. After enjoying the cake and dinner, we play games and take photos. Every birthday makes me feel loved and happy. Another year older, another year wiser. I’m thankful for my family and friends.
2. 思路点拨
第一步：体裁：记叙文；人称：第一人称；时态：一般现在时
第三步：句子积累
开头句：(1) on March 12th；(2) has a; at
中间句：(1) invites; to；(2) give her a special birthday gift；(3) make a wish；(4) hope；(5) taking photos
结尾句：(2) something special; meaningful
My birthday is on 15th October. On that day, my family and friends always celebrate with me. My parents cook my favorite dishes and make a big birthday cake. I invite my best friends to my home. We sing "Happy Birthday" together, then I make a wish and blow out the candles. After enjoying the cake and dinner, we play games and take photos. Every birthday makes me feel loved and happy. Another year older, another year wiser. I’m thankful for my family and friends.
2. 思路点拨
第一步：体裁：记叙文；人称：第一人称；时态：一般现在时
第三步：句子积累
开头句：(1) on March 12th；(2) has a; at
中间句：(1) invites; to；(2) give her a special birthday gift；(3) make a wish；(4) hope；(5) taking photos
结尾句：(2) something special; meaningful
