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八、书面表达
假设你是阳光中学的李华，请根据下面表格中的提示信息，以“Earth and Its Satellite — the Moon”为题，向学校报社科普栏目组投稿。词数80个左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含表格中的所有提示信息，
可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Earth and Its Satellite — the Moon
The Moon is Earth's only natural satellite.
It goes around Earth.
Now humans are still exploring the Moon to learn more about it.
假设你是阳光中学的李华，请根据下面表格中的提示信息，以“Earth and Its Satellite — the Moon”为题，向学校报社科普栏目组投稿。词数80个左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含表格中的所有提示信息，
可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Earth and Its Satellite — the Moon
The Moon is Earth's only natural satellite.
It goes around Earth.
Now humans are still exploring the Moon to learn more about it.
答案
参考范文
Earth and Its Satellite — the Moon
The Moon is Earth's only natural satellite. It goes around Earth.
The Moon is smaller than Earth. It has a diameter of around 3,500 kilometers and Earth's diameter is around 13,000 kilometers. The Moon has very different temperatures at night and in the daytime. It is very hot in the daytime and very cold at night. And the average temperature on the Moon is about -23℃. The temperature on Earth is neither too hot nor too cold. It is about 14℃ on average. There is much water on Earth while there is no water or air on the Moon. So there are no living things on Moon.
Now humans are still exploring the Moon to learn more about it.
Earth and Its Satellite — the Moon
The Moon is Earth's only natural satellite. It goes around Earth.
The Moon is smaller than Earth. It has a diameter of around 3,500 kilometers and Earth's diameter is around 13,000 kilometers. The Moon has very different temperatures at night and in the daytime. It is very hot in the daytime and very cold at night. And the average temperature on the Moon is about -23℃. The temperature on Earth is neither too hot nor too cold. It is about 14℃ on average. There is much water on Earth while there is no water or air on the Moon. So there are no living things on Moon.
Now humans are still exploring the Moon to learn more about it.
解析
【分析】本题为科普类英语书面表达，需以李华身份向校报科普栏目投稿，主题是地球与月球。解题思路：1. 衔接给定开头，先对比两者的直径（地球约13000公里、月球约3500公里）；2. 介绍平均温度（地球14℃、月球-23℃），可补充月球昼夜温差大的常识；3. 说明水的情况（地球有大量水、月球没有）；4. 衔接给定结尾，确保涵盖所有表格信息，语言通顺，词数符合要求。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头，对比直径：The Moon is smaller than Earth. It has a diameter of around 3,500 kilometers and Earth's diameter is around 13,000 kilometers.；2. 介绍温度：The average temperature on the Moon is about -23℃, while Earth's is about 14℃. The Moon has a large temperature difference between day and night.；3. 说明水的情况：There is much water on Earth, but there is no water on the Moon.；4. 衔接给定结尾，调整语句使行文连贯，词数约80，符合要求。
【答案】参考范文
Earth and Its Satellite — the Moon
The Moon is Earth's only natural satellite. It goes around Earth.
The Moon is smaller than Earth. It has a diameter of around 3,500 kilometers and Earth's diameter is around 13,000 kilometers. The Moon has very different temperatures at night and in the daytime. It is very hot in the daytime and very cold at night. And the average temperature on the Moon is about -23℃. The temperature on Earth is neither too hot nor too cold. It is about 14℃ on average. There is much water on Earth while there is no water or air on the Moon. So there are no living things on Moon.
Now humans are still exploring the Moon to learn more about it.
【知识点】英语书面表达、科普写作、信息整合
【点评】本题要求整合表格中的科普信息，准确传达地球与月球的关键特征，语言需通顺连贯，符合校报科普栏目的风格，注重学生的信息提取与书面表达能力，是初中英语常见题型。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头，对比直径：The Moon is smaller than Earth. It has a diameter of around 3,500 kilometers and Earth's diameter is around 13,000 kilometers.；2. 介绍温度：The average temperature on the Moon is about -23℃, while Earth's is about 14℃. The Moon has a large temperature difference between day and night.；3. 说明水的情况：There is much water on Earth, but there is no water on the Moon.；4. 衔接给定结尾，调整语句使行文连贯，词数约80，符合要求。
【答案】参考范文
Earth and Its Satellite — the Moon
The Moon is Earth's only natural satellite. It goes around Earth.
The Moon is smaller than Earth. It has a diameter of around 3,500 kilometers and Earth's diameter is around 13,000 kilometers. The Moon has very different temperatures at night and in the daytime. It is very hot in the daytime and very cold at night. And the average temperature on the Moon is about -23℃. The temperature on Earth is neither too hot nor too cold. It is about 14℃ on average. There is much water on Earth while there is no water or air on the Moon. So there are no living things on Moon.
Now humans are still exploring the Moon to learn more about it.
【知识点】英语书面表达、科普写作、信息整合
【点评】本题要求整合表格中的科普信息，准确传达地球与月球的关键特征，语言需通顺连贯，符合校报科普栏目的风格，注重学生的信息提取与书面表达能力，是初中英语常见题型。
【难度系数】0.6
