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五、书面表达
友谊是一束温暖的阳光，是一份珍贵的宝藏。假如你校英文周刊正以“Friendship”为题向同学们征稿。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。词数100左右。
Friendship
In our life, everyone needs friends. They make our lives brighter and more colourful.
友谊是一束温暖的阳光，是一份珍贵的宝藏。假如你校英文周刊正以“Friendship”为题向同学们征稿。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。词数100左右。
Friendship
In our life, everyone needs friends. They make our lives brighter and more colourful.
I have such a friend. Her name is Lily. She has a round face and always wears her hair in a ponytail. She is kinder and more humorous than anyone else I know. We share secrets and always help each other.
To get along with friends, I think the most important thing is to be honest. If you tell lies, your friends will not trust you. Also, we need to be patient. Listening to our friends can support them when they meet problems.
Friendship matters a lot in everyone's life. A true friend will make our lives much better and happier.
答案
Friendship
In our life, everyone needs friends. They make our lives brighter and more colourful.
I have such a friend. Her name is Lily. She has a round face and always wears her hair in a ponytail. She is kinder and more humorous than anyone else I know. We share secrets and always help each other.
To get along with friends, I think the most important thing is to be honest. If you tell lies, your friends will not trust you. Also, we need to be patient. Listening to our friends can support them when they meet problems.
Friendship matters a lot in everyone's life. A true friend will make our lives much better and happier.
In our life, everyone needs friends. They make our lives brighter and more colourful.
I have such a friend. Her name is Lily. She has a round face and always wears her hair in a ponytail. She is kinder and more humorous than anyone else I know. We share secrets and always help each other.
To get along with friends, I think the most important thing is to be honest. If you tell lies, your friends will not trust you. Also, we need to be patient. Listening to our friends can support them when they meet problems.
Friendship matters a lot in everyone's life. A true friend will make our lives much better and happier.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“Friendship”为题写短文，需结合三个提示完成：介绍最好的朋友、给出与朋友相处的至少两点建议、阐述友谊的意义。解题思路为：先承接开头引入自己的好友（对应第一个提示），再给出具体的相处建议（对应第二个提示），最后点明友谊的价值（对应第三个提示），确保语言通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】
按照书面表达的结构分步完成：
1. 介绍好友：点明好友的名字、外貌、性格特点，以及彼此间的相处细节（如分享秘密、互相帮助）；
2. 相处建议：选取两点核心建议，如诚实、耐心，分别说明其重要性；
3. 阐述意义：总结友谊对生活的积极作用，呼应开头的主题。
【答案】
Friendship
In our life, everyone needs friends. They make our lives brighter and more colourful.
I have such a friend. Her name is Lily. She has a round face and always wears her hair in a ponytail. She is kinder and more humorous than anyone else I know. We share secrets and always help each other.
To get along with friends, I think the most important thing is to be honest. If you tell lies, your friends will not trust you. Also, we need to be patient. Listening to our friends can support them when they meet problems.
Friendship matters a lot in everyone's life. A true friend will make our lives much better and happier.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作、词汇运用
【点评】
本题围绕“友谊”这一常见话题，结合明确的写作要点，既考查学生的英语表达能力，又引导学生思考友谊的内涵，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，结构清晰，易于学生上手完成。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“Friendship”为题写短文，需结合三个提示完成：介绍最好的朋友、给出与朋友相处的至少两点建议、阐述友谊的意义。解题思路为：先承接开头引入自己的好友（对应第一个提示），再给出具体的相处建议（对应第二个提示），最后点明友谊的价值（对应第三个提示），确保语言通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】
按照书面表达的结构分步完成：
1. 介绍好友：点明好友的名字、外貌、性格特点，以及彼此间的相处细节（如分享秘密、互相帮助）；
2. 相处建议：选取两点核心建议，如诚实、耐心，分别说明其重要性；
3. 阐述意义：总结友谊对生活的积极作用，呼应开头的主题。
【答案】
Friendship
In our life, everyone needs friends. They make our lives brighter and more colourful.
I have such a friend. Her name is Lily. She has a round face and always wears her hair in a ponytail. She is kinder and more humorous than anyone else I know. We share secrets and always help each other.
To get along with friends, I think the most important thing is to be honest. If you tell lies, your friends will not trust you. Also, we need to be patient. Listening to our friends can support them when they meet problems.
Friendship matters a lot in everyone's life. A true friend will make our lives much better and happier.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作、词汇运用
【点评】
本题围绕“友谊”这一常见话题，结合明确的写作要点，既考查学生的英语表达能力，又引导学生思考友谊的内涵，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，结构清晰，易于学生上手完成。
【难度系数】
0.5
