素材积累>>
[开头句]
1. DIY, which stands for "Do-It-Yourself", has become popular among students. (引出主题)
2. I enjoy doing things by myself. I'm crazy about DIY. (陈述观点,下同)
3. I love DIY. It helps us learn to do things with our hands.
4. If you want to have fun making new things at home, why not try tie-dyeing? (提出建议)
[中间句]
1. First, we chose a clean glove with bright colours and a fun pattern. (阐述步骤,下同)
2. Next, we made the doll's legs...
3. Then, we used the main part of the glove...
4. Finally, we added some colourful string to the head.
[结尾句]
1. Doing DIY brings me great joy. (抒发感想,下同)
2. DIY is a good way to have fun and save money.
[名言警句]
1. The best way to learn is by doing.
学习的最佳方式就是实践。
2. DIY is not about perfection; it's about the joy of creating.
DIY不在于完美,而在于创造的乐趣。
写作演练>>
假设你是阳光中学八年级的学生李星,你
想申请加入学校的DIY俱乐部,请根据以下流程写一封英文申请信。
流程:1. Introduce yourself;2. Tell the reason;3. Share your DIY story.
要求:1. 申请信须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;2. 词数90左右,已给出部分不计入总词数;3. 信中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
[思路点拨]
①人称:以第一人称为主;②时态:一般现在时和一般过去时;③写作时要注意顺序,先自我介绍并表达申请意向,再说明想加入DIY俱乐部的理由,最后介绍自己DIY的故事。
[写作提纲]

[妙笔生花]
Dear Chairperson,
I'm Li Xing in Grade 8.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Xing
(更多精彩作文素材见"强基手册")
[开头句]
1. DIY, which stands for "Do-It-Yourself", has become popular among students. (引出主题)
2. I enjoy doing things by myself. I'm crazy about DIY. (陈述观点,下同)
3. I love DIY. It helps us learn to do things with our hands.
4. If you want to have fun making new things at home, why not try tie-dyeing? (提出建议)
[中间句]
1. First, we chose a clean glove with bright colours and a fun pattern. (阐述步骤,下同)
2. Next, we made the doll's legs...
3. Then, we used the main part of the glove...
4. Finally, we added some colourful string to the head.
[结尾句]
1. Doing DIY brings me great joy. (抒发感想,下同)
2. DIY is a good way to have fun and save money.
[名言警句]
1. The best way to learn is by doing.
学习的最佳方式就是实践。
2. DIY is not about perfection; it's about the joy of creating.
DIY不在于完美,而在于创造的乐趣。
写作演练>>
假设你是阳光中学八年级的学生李星,你
想申请加入学校的DIY俱乐部,请根据以下流程写一封英文申请信。
流程:1. Introduce yourself;2. Tell the reason;3. Share your DIY story.
要求:1. 申请信须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;2. 词数90左右,已给出部分不计入总词数;3. 信中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
[思路点拨]
①人称:以第一人称为主;②时态:一般现在时和一般过去时;③写作时要注意顺序,先自我介绍并表达申请意向,再说明想加入DIY俱乐部的理由,最后介绍自己DIY的故事。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Chairperson,
I'm Li Xing in Grade 8.
I'm really excited to apply for the DIY Club in our school.
I love DIY a lot. It's really fun! When I do DIY projects, I can make things with my own hands. It helps me relax after a long day at school. Also, it makes me feel really good when I finish making something new.
Last month, I made a photo frame. First, I found some cardboard and cut it into the right shape. Then I used coloured paper and stickers to decorate it. It took me a whole afternoon to finish it.
But when I put my favourite photo in it and saw how nice it looked, I felt so happy and proud. I think I can have even more fun and learn a lot in the DIY Club.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Xing
(更多精彩作文素材见"强基手册")
答案
One possible version:
Dear Chairperson,
I'm Li Xing in Grade 8. I'm really excited to apply for the DIY Club in our school.
I love DIY a lot. It's really fun! When I do DIY projects, I can make things with my own hands. It helps me relax after a long day at school. Also, it makes me feel really good when I finish making something new.
Last month, I made a photo frame. First, I found some cardboard and cut it into the right shape. Then I used coloured paper and stickers to decorate it. It took me a whole afternoon to finish it. But when I put my favourite photo in it and saw how nice it looked, I felt so happy and proud. I think I can have even more fun and learn a lot in the DIY Club.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Xing
Dear Chairperson,
I'm Li Xing in Grade 8. I'm really excited to apply for the DIY Club in our school.
I love DIY a lot. It's really fun! When I do DIY projects, I can make things with my own hands. It helps me relax after a long day at school. Also, it makes me feel really good when I finish making something new.
Last month, I made a photo frame. First, I found some cardboard and cut it into the right shape. Then I used coloured paper and stickers to decorate it. It took me a whole afternoon to finish it. But when I put my favourite photo in it and saw how nice it looked, I felt so happy and proud. I think I can have even more fun and learn a lot in the DIY Club.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Xing
解析
【分析】这是一封申请加入DIY俱乐部的英文信,需遵循申请信的基本结构,分三段完成:第一段先自我介绍并明确表达申请意向;第二段说明喜欢DIY的原因,结合DIY的意义(如亲手创作、放松身心、获得成就感);第三段分享具体的DIY经历,体现自己的动手能力和对DIY的热爱。写作时需注意用第一人称,合理切换时态(一般现在时表喜好,一般过去时表经历),语句连贯,涵盖所有提示要点,控制词数在90左右。
【解析】1. 开头部分:补全自我介绍,说明申请加入学校DIY俱乐部,对应第一段要点;2. 中间部分:阐述喜欢DIY的理由,如能亲手制作物品、帮助缓解学习压力、完成作品时的成就感,对应第二段要点;3. 结尾部分:分享DIY经历,以上个月制作相框为例,说明具体步骤(裁剪硬纸板、用彩纸贴纸装饰)和完成后的感受,对应第三段要点;4. 最后表达加入俱乐部的期待,完成申请信。
【答案】Dear Chairperson,
I'm Li Xing in Grade 8. I'm really excited to apply for the DIY Club in our school.
I love DIY a lot. It's really fun! When I do DIY projects, I can make things with my own hands. It helps me relax after a long day at school. Also, it makes me feel really good when I finish making something new.
Last month, I made a photo frame. First, I found some cardboard and cut it into the right shape. Then I used coloured paper and stickers to decorate it. It took me a whole afternoon to finish it. But when I put my favourite photo in it and saw how nice it looked, I felt so happy and proud. I think I can have even more fun and learn a lot in the DIY Club.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Xing
【知识点】英语申请信写作、一般现在时与一般过去时的运用、DIY主题表达
【点评】本文符合申请信格式,完整覆盖所有要求要点,语句通顺,逻辑清晰,通过具体的DIY事例展现了对DIY的热爱,情感表达自然,符合初中英语写作的要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 开头部分:补全自我介绍,说明申请加入学校DIY俱乐部,对应第一段要点;2. 中间部分:阐述喜欢DIY的理由,如能亲手制作物品、帮助缓解学习压力、完成作品时的成就感,对应第二段要点;3. 结尾部分:分享DIY经历,以上个月制作相框为例,说明具体步骤(裁剪硬纸板、用彩纸贴纸装饰)和完成后的感受,对应第三段要点;4. 最后表达加入俱乐部的期待,完成申请信。
【答案】Dear Chairperson,
I'm Li Xing in Grade 8. I'm really excited to apply for the DIY Club in our school.
I love DIY a lot. It's really fun! When I do DIY projects, I can make things with my own hands. It helps me relax after a long day at school. Also, it makes me feel really good when I finish making something new.
Last month, I made a photo frame. First, I found some cardboard and cut it into the right shape. Then I used coloured paper and stickers to decorate it. It took me a whole afternoon to finish it. But when I put my favourite photo in it and saw how nice it looked, I felt so happy and proud. I think I can have even more fun and learn a lot in the DIY Club.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Xing
【知识点】英语申请信写作、一般现在时与一般过去时的运用、DIY主题表达
【点评】本文符合申请信格式,完整覆盖所有要求要点,语句通顺,逻辑清晰,通过具体的DIY事例展现了对DIY的热爱,情感表达自然,符合初中英语写作的要求。
【难度系数】0.6
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