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(2025·江苏淮安淮阴区一模)不惧碾作尘，无意苦争春。张桂梅的精神值得我们学习，她的行为值得我们敬佩。在你的成长道路上，也一定出现过值得你敬佩的人，这个人可能是你的父母、老师或你的朋友等。你们学校正在组织英语作文比赛，请根据内容提示，以“The person I respect”为题，写一篇短文参赛。
【内容】1. 人物介绍(如职业、性格、外貌等，至少要有两个要点)。
2. 敬佩他/她的原因(讲述他/她具体做了哪些事情)。
3. 他/她对你的影响。
【内容】1. 人物介绍(如职业、性格、外貌等，至少要有两个要点)。
2. 敬佩他/她的原因(讲述他/她具体做了哪些事情)。
3. 他/她对你的影响。
答案
The person I respect
My mother is the person I respect most. She is a community doctor, and she is a warm and patient woman who always wears a big smile on her face. She treats every person around her with great kindness.
I respect her so much for what she did in the special winter of 2022. At that time, the COVID-19 pandemic was very serious, she volunteered to work at the community health station. For nearly a whole month, she only slept for less than 5 hours every day. Not only did she test for residents and send medicine to sick people in need, but she also took good care of an old grandma who lived alone. Even when she herself had a high fever, she still stuck to her post and never thought about leaving.
My mother's actions have taught me the true meaning of responsibility and kindness. Now I always try my best to give others a helping hand when they meet trouble. I hope I can be a person like her in the future, who can bring warmth to more people.
My mother is the person I respect most. She is a community doctor, and she is a warm and patient woman who always wears a big smile on her face. She treats every person around her with great kindness.
I respect her so much for what she did in the special winter of 2022. At that time, the COVID-19 pandemic was very serious, she volunteered to work at the community health station. For nearly a whole month, she only slept for less than 5 hours every day. Not only did she test for residents and send medicine to sick people in need, but she also took good care of an old grandma who lived alone. Even when she herself had a high fever, she still stuck to her post and never thought about leaving.
My mother's actions have taught me the true meaning of responsibility and kindness. Now I always try my best to give others a helping hand when they meet trouble. I hope I can be a person like her in the future, who can bring warmth to more people.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“The person I respect”为题写英语短文，需紧扣三个核心内容要点：一是人物介绍（至少包含职业、性格等两个要点）；二是敬佩该人物的具体原因（需讲述具体事例）；三是该人物对自己的影响。写作时应先确定敬佩的人物（如母亲、老师等），围绕人物特征展开介绍，选取典型具体的事例体现敬佩的缘由，最后点明人物对自身的积极影响，确保结构清晰、内容充实、语言通顺。
【解析】
首先确定写作对象为母亲，介绍其职业（社区医生）和性格（热情、耐心）；接着选取2022年疫情期间她坚守岗位、无私奉献的具体事例（如每日工作时长、照顾独居老人、带病坚持工作）；最后阐述她教会自己责任与善良，影响自己主动帮助他人。按照“人物介绍-敬佩原因-自身影响”的结构组织语言，运用合适的句式（如Not only...but also...）丰富表达，符合英语作文比赛的要求。
【答案】
The person I respect
My mother is the person I respect most. She is a community doctor, and she is a warm and patient woman who always wears a big smile on her face. She treats every person around her with great kindness.
I respect her so much for what she did in the special winter of 2022. At that time, the COVID-19 pandemic was very serious, she volunteered to work at the community health station. For nearly a whole month, she only slept for less than 5 hours every day. Not only did she test for residents and send medicine to sick people in need, but she also took good care of an old grandma who lived alone. Even when she herself had a high fever, she still stuck to her post and never thought about leaving.
My mother's actions have taught me the true meaning of responsibility and kindness. Now I always try my best to give others a helping hand when they meet trouble. I hope I can be a person like her in the future, who can bring warmth to more people.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，人物介绍类作文
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，层次分明，通过具体典型的事例展现人物的优秀品质，情感真挚，语言流畅，符合英语作文比赛的写作规范。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以“The person I respect”为题写英语短文，需紧扣三个核心内容要点：一是人物介绍（至少包含职业、性格等两个要点）；二是敬佩该人物的具体原因（需讲述具体事例）；三是该人物对自己的影响。写作时应先确定敬佩的人物（如母亲、老师等），围绕人物特征展开介绍，选取典型具体的事例体现敬佩的缘由，最后点明人物对自身的积极影响，确保结构清晰、内容充实、语言通顺。
【解析】
首先确定写作对象为母亲，介绍其职业（社区医生）和性格（热情、耐心）；接着选取2022年疫情期间她坚守岗位、无私奉献的具体事例（如每日工作时长、照顾独居老人、带病坚持工作）；最后阐述她教会自己责任与善良，影响自己主动帮助他人。按照“人物介绍-敬佩原因-自身影响”的结构组织语言，运用合适的句式（如Not only...but also...）丰富表达，符合英语作文比赛的要求。
【答案】
The person I respect
My mother is the person I respect most. She is a community doctor, and she is a warm and patient woman who always wears a big smile on her face. She treats every person around her with great kindness.
I respect her so much for what she did in the special winter of 2022. At that time, the COVID-19 pandemic was very serious, she volunteered to work at the community health station. For nearly a whole month, she only slept for less than 5 hours every day. Not only did she test for residents and send medicine to sick people in need, but she also took good care of an old grandma who lived alone. Even when she herself had a high fever, she still stuck to her post and never thought about leaving.
My mother's actions have taught me the true meaning of responsibility and kindness. Now I always try my best to give others a helping hand when they meet trouble. I hope I can be a person like her in the future, who can bring warmth to more people.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，人物介绍类作文
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，层次分明，通过具体典型的事例展现人物的优秀品质，情感真挚，语言流畅，符合英语作文比赛的写作规范。
【难度系数】
0.6
【要求】1. 不得在作文中出现真实的学校名称和学生姓名等。
2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。
The person I respect
写作指导
1. 用第三人称来写。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 围绕着主题，需正确使用语法和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，完成写作任务。
写作模板
遣词造句
1. 她仍然花时间帮助学生学习。(spend...doing sth)
2. 我想像她一样，长大后帮助别人。(grow up)
3. 她的行为对我有着很大的影响。(have a big influence)
高分范文
2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。
The person I respect
写作指导
1. 用第三人称来写。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 围绕着主题，需正确使用语法和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，完成写作任务。
写作模板
遣词造句
1. 她仍然花时间帮助学生学习。(spend...doing sth)
She still spends time helping students with their studies.
2. 我想像她一样，长大后帮助别人。(grow up)
I want to be like her and help others when I grow up.
3. 她的行为对我有着很大的影响。(have a big influence)
Her actions have a big influence on me.
高分范文
答案
1. She still spends time helping students with their studies.
2. I want to be like her and help others when I grow up.
3. Her actions have a big influence on me.
2. I want to be like her and help others when I grow up.
3. Her actions have a big influence on me.
解析
【分析】
本题要求结合给定的中文提示，运用指定短语（spend...doing sth、grow up、have a big influence），以第三人称、一般现在时造句。解题时，先确定每个句子的主语和时态，再对应短语结构翻译：第一句主语为“她”（she），用spend的第三人称单数形式spends；第二句用when引导的时间状语从句搭配grow up；第三句用have a big influence on的固定搭配，确保语法正确、符合要求。
【解析】
1. 对应中文“她仍然花时间帮助学生学习”，使用spend...doing sth结构，主语she为第三人称单数，一般现在时，译为：She still spends time helping students with their studies。
2. 对应中文“我想像她一样，长大后帮助别人”，使用grow up搭配when引导的时间状语从句，一般现在时，译为：I want to be like her and help others when I grow up。
3. 对应中文“她的行为对我有着很大的影响”，使用have a big influence on的固定搭配，主语her actions为复数，一般现在时，译为：Her actions have a big influence on me。
【答案】
1. She still spends time helping students with their studies.
2. I want to be like her and help others when I grow up.
3. Her actions have a big influence on me.
【知识点】
英语固定短语运用、一般现在时、介词搭配
【点评】
本题为基础遣词造句练习，紧扣指定短语和语法要求，难度较低，主要考查学生对核心短语和基础时态的掌握，适合巩固英语基础表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求结合给定的中文提示，运用指定短语（spend...doing sth、grow up、have a big influence），以第三人称、一般现在时造句。解题时，先确定每个句子的主语和时态，再对应短语结构翻译：第一句主语为“她”（she），用spend的第三人称单数形式spends；第二句用when引导的时间状语从句搭配grow up；第三句用have a big influence on的固定搭配，确保语法正确、符合要求。
【解析】
1. 对应中文“她仍然花时间帮助学生学习”，使用spend...doing sth结构，主语she为第三人称单数，一般现在时，译为：She still spends time helping students with their studies。
2. 对应中文“我想像她一样，长大后帮助别人”，使用grow up搭配when引导的时间状语从句，一般现在时，译为：I want to be like her and help others when I grow up。
3. 对应中文“她的行为对我有着很大的影响”，使用have a big influence on的固定搭配，主语her actions为复数，一般现在时，译为：Her actions have a big influence on me。
【答案】
1. She still spends time helping students with their studies.
2. I want to be like her and help others when I grow up.
3. Her actions have a big influence on me.
【知识点】
英语固定短语运用、一般现在时、介词搭配
【点评】
本题为基础遣词造句练习，紧扣指定短语和语法要求，难度较低，主要考查学生对核心短语和基础时态的掌握，适合巩固英语基础表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
