五、书面表达
你校英文网站正在开展“守护我们的地球”主题征文活动,邀请同学们分享自己最关注的环境问题,并提出解决方案。请写一篇英文短文,发布在学校网站上。
要求:(1)语句通顺,可适当补充细节;
(2)80—100词,短文开头已给出,不计入
总词数。
【写作思路指导】

【实战演练】
Dear readers,
The environmental problem I worry about most is
你校英文网站正在开展“守护我们的地球”主题征文活动,邀请同学们分享自己最关注的环境问题,并提出解决方案。请写一篇英文短文,发布在学校网站上。
要求:(1)语句通顺,可适当补充细节;
(2)80—100词,短文开头已给出,不计入
总词数。
【写作思路指导】
【实战演练】
Dear readers,
The environmental problem I worry about most is
beach pollution. Every summer, people visit the beach and leave behind plastic bags, bottles, and food waste. Some factories also pour untreated waste into the sea. As a result, sea animals often get hurt by plastic, and the water becomes dirty. The once beautiful beach is no longer a nice place to relax. To fix this, we should pick up our litter before leaving the beach and use reusable bags instead of plastic ones. Small actions can make a big difference. Let's work together to keep our beaches clean and safe for everyone
.答案
One possible version:
Dear readers,
The environmental problem I worry about most is beach pollution. Every summer, people visit the beach and leave behind plastic bags, bottles, and food waste. Some factories also pour untreated waste into the sea.
As a result, sea animals often get hurt by plastic, and the water becomes dirty. The once beautiful beach is no longer a nice place to relax.
To fix this, we should pick up our litter before leaving the beach and use reusable bags instead of plastic ones. Small actions can make a big difference. Let's work together to keep our beaches clean and safe for everyone!
(93 words)
Dear readers,
The environmental problem I worry about most is beach pollution. Every summer, people visit the beach and leave behind plastic bags, bottles, and food waste. Some factories also pour untreated waste into the sea.
As a result, sea animals often get hurt by plastic, and the water becomes dirty. The once beautiful beach is no longer a nice place to relax.
To fix this, we should pick up our litter before leaving the beach and use reusable bags instead of plastic ones. Small actions can make a big difference. Let's work together to keep our beaches clean and safe for everyone!
(93 words)
解析
【分析】
首先需围绕“守护我们的地球”主题,选择一个关注的环境问题(如海滩污染),再按照表格中“原因、影响、建议”的结构展开写作,补充细节让内容充实,同时控制词数在80-100之间,语句通顺自然。具体步骤:1. 确定核心环境问题;2. 列举2个合理原因;3. 说明2个对应的影响;4. 提出2个可行的解决方案;5. 衔接开头完成短文。
【解析】
先确定环境问题为海滩污染,接着阐述原因:夏季游客前往海滩时遗留塑料袋、瓶子等垃圾,部分工厂向海洋排放未处理的废弃物;然后说明影响:海洋动物常被塑料伤害,海水变脏,海滩不再适合休闲;最后提出解决方案:离开海滩前清理自己的垃圾,使用可重复使用的袋子代替塑料袋,最后呼吁大家共同行动,确保语句通顺,符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear readers,
The environmental problem I worry about most is beach pollution. Every summer, people visit the beach and leave behind plastic bags, bottles, and food waste. Some factories also pour untreated waste into the sea.
As a result, sea animals often get hurt by plastic, and the water becomes dirty. The once beautiful beach is no longer a nice place to relax.
To fix this, we should pick up our litter before leaving the beach and use reusable bags instead of plastic ones. Small actions can make a big difference. Let's work together to keep our beaches clean and safe for everyone!
(93 words)
【知识点】
英语书面表达、环境话题词汇、句子连贯
【点评】
本题结合环保主题考查英语书面表达,要求学生清晰梳理环境问题的相关要素,既考查语言运用能力,又培养环保意识,结构清晰,易于学生上手。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先需围绕“守护我们的地球”主题,选择一个关注的环境问题(如海滩污染),再按照表格中“原因、影响、建议”的结构展开写作,补充细节让内容充实,同时控制词数在80-100之间,语句通顺自然。具体步骤:1. 确定核心环境问题;2. 列举2个合理原因;3. 说明2个对应的影响;4. 提出2个可行的解决方案;5. 衔接开头完成短文。
【解析】
先确定环境问题为海滩污染,接着阐述原因:夏季游客前往海滩时遗留塑料袋、瓶子等垃圾,部分工厂向海洋排放未处理的废弃物;然后说明影响:海洋动物常被塑料伤害,海水变脏,海滩不再适合休闲;最后提出解决方案:离开海滩前清理自己的垃圾,使用可重复使用的袋子代替塑料袋,最后呼吁大家共同行动,确保语句通顺,符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear readers,
The environmental problem I worry about most is beach pollution. Every summer, people visit the beach and leave behind plastic bags, bottles, and food waste. Some factories also pour untreated waste into the sea.
As a result, sea animals often get hurt by plastic, and the water becomes dirty. The once beautiful beach is no longer a nice place to relax.
To fix this, we should pick up our litter before leaving the beach and use reusable bags instead of plastic ones. Small actions can make a big difference. Let's work together to keep our beaches clean and safe for everyone!
(93 words)
【知识点】
英语书面表达、环境话题词汇、句子连贯
【点评】
本题结合环保主题考查英语书面表达,要求学生清晰梳理环境问题的相关要素,既考查语言运用能力,又培养环保意识,结构清晰,易于学生上手。
【难度系数】
0.5
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