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假设你是某校学生李华，近日你校开展了一系列以“科技改变生活”为主题的活动。请你结合以下提示，用英语给笔友汤姆写一封电子邮件，分享活动内容及感受。
写作提示：
Activities
visit science and technology museum
share personal creative inventions
hold a speech competition about how science and technology have changed our lives
Feelings
be proud of, make it convenient for us to, be careful and wise...
假设你是某校学生李华，近日你校开展了一系列以“科技改变生活”为主题的活动。请你结合以下提示，用英语给笔友汤姆写一封电子邮件，分享活动内容及感受。
写作提示：
Activities
visit science and technology museum
share personal creative inventions
hold a speech competition about how science and technology have changed our lives
Feelings
be proud of, make it convenient for us to, be careful and wise...
答案
Dear Tom,
How is everything going? I'm writing to share with you the exciting activities in our school recently. The theme is "Technology Changes Life".
First, we visited the science and technology museum, which was an eye-opening experience. Then we had a show to share our own creative inventions. It was amazing to see so many creative ideas. Finally, we held a speech competition about how science and technology have changed our lives.
I feel really proud of our great achievements in science. Technology has made it much more convenient for us to live and learn. But we should also be careful and wise when using it.
What do you think of these activities? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
How is everything going? I'm writing to share with you the exciting activities in our school recently. The theme is "Technology Changes Life".
First, we visited the science and technology museum, which was an eye-opening experience. Then we had a show to share our own creative inventions. It was amazing to see so many creative ideas. Finally, we held a speech competition about how science and technology have changed our lives.
I feel really proud of our great achievements in science. Technology has made it much more convenient for us to live and learn. But we should also be careful and wise when using it.
What do you think of these activities? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给笔友汤姆写电子邮件，分享学校“科技改变生活”主题活动。解题思路：1. 遵循英文电子邮件格式，开头问候并点明写信目的；2. 按提示依次介绍三个活动：参观科技馆、分享个人创意发明、举办关于科技改变生活的演讲比赛；3. 结合给定的感受词汇（be proud of、make it convenient for us to、be careful and wise等）表达自身感受；4. 结尾询问对方看法并期待回复，确保内容完整、语言通顺，符合学生身份。
【解析】
首先确定邮件格式：开头用称呼Dear Tom，问候How is everything going?，点明写信目的是分享学校的主题活动。接着按顺序描述活动：先写参观科技馆的感受（eye-opening），再写分享创意发明的亮点（many creative ideas），最后写演讲比赛的主题。然后结合感受词汇表达：为科技成就自豪，科技让生活学习更方便，使用科技时要谨慎明智。最后结尾询问对方想法，期待回复，署名Li Hua，确保所有提示点都被覆盖，语言符合英语书信的表达习惯。
【答案】
Dear Tom,
How is everything going? I'm writing to share with you the exciting activities in our school recently. The theme is "Technology Changes Life".
First, we visited the science and technology museum, which was an eye-opening experience. Then we had a show to share our own creative inventions. It was amazing to see so many creative ideas. Finally, we held a speech competition about how science and technology have changed our lives.
I feel really proud of our great achievements in science. Technology has made it much more convenient for us to live and learn. But we should also be careful and wise when using it.
What do you think of these activities? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、主题作文、词汇运用
【点评】
本题是英语书面表达题，考查学生整合信息、运用英语进行交际写作的能力，提示明确，学生只需按要点组织语言即可，是常见的书信类写作题型，能有效检验学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以李华的身份给笔友汤姆写电子邮件，分享学校“科技改变生活”主题活动。解题思路：1. 遵循英文电子邮件格式，开头问候并点明写信目的；2. 按提示依次介绍三个活动：参观科技馆、分享个人创意发明、举办关于科技改变生活的演讲比赛；3. 结合给定的感受词汇（be proud of、make it convenient for us to、be careful and wise等）表达自身感受；4. 结尾询问对方看法并期待回复，确保内容完整、语言通顺，符合学生身份。
【解析】
首先确定邮件格式：开头用称呼Dear Tom，问候How is everything going?，点明写信目的是分享学校的主题活动。接着按顺序描述活动：先写参观科技馆的感受（eye-opening），再写分享创意发明的亮点（many creative ideas），最后写演讲比赛的主题。然后结合感受词汇表达：为科技成就自豪，科技让生活学习更方便，使用科技时要谨慎明智。最后结尾询问对方想法，期待回复，署名Li Hua，确保所有提示点都被覆盖，语言符合英语书信的表达习惯。
【答案】
Dear Tom,
How is everything going? I'm writing to share with you the exciting activities in our school recently. The theme is "Technology Changes Life".
First, we visited the science and technology museum, which was an eye-opening experience. Then we had a show to share our own creative inventions. It was amazing to see so many creative ideas. Finally, we held a speech competition about how science and technology have changed our lives.
I feel really proud of our great achievements in science. Technology has made it much more convenient for us to live and learn. But we should also be careful and wise when using it.
What do you think of these activities? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、主题作文、词汇运用
【点评】
本题是英语书面表达题，考查学生整合信息、运用英语进行交际写作的能力，提示明确，学生只需按要点组织语言即可，是常见的书信类写作题型，能有效检验学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
