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中国航天事业不断创造辉煌，每一次成功的背后，都有无数默默奉献的幕后英雄，如科学家、工程师、地面测控人员、技术工人等。他们不求名利，坚守岗位，为祖国航天事业贡献力量。学校英语社正在开展以“The Heroes Behind China’s Space Program”为主题的征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文进行投稿。
内容提示：
1. Who do you think are the heroes behind China’s space program?
2. What do they do for our country?
3. What can we learn from them?
4. What’s your wish for China’s space industry?
注意：
1. 短文须包括以上信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现学生真实的姓名和校名；
3. 词数80个左右。
The Heroes Behind China’s Space Program
中国航天事业不断创造辉煌，每一次成功的背后，都有无数默默奉献的幕后英雄，如科学家、工程师、地面测控人员、技术工人等。他们不求名利，坚守岗位，为祖国航天事业贡献力量。学校英语社正在开展以“The Heroes Behind China’s Space Program”为主题的征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文进行投稿。
内容提示：
1. Who do you think are the heroes behind China’s space program?
2. What do they do for our country?
3. What can we learn from them?
4. What’s your wish for China’s space industry?
注意：
1. 短文须包括以上信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现学生真实的姓名和校名；
3. 词数80个左右。
The Heroes Behind China’s Space Program
China’s space industry has developed very fast these years. Behind all the great successes, there are many heroes. They are scientists, engineers, workers and control team members. They work day and night to study new technologies, test spaceships, and make sure every task is safe and successful. They never ask for much but keep working hard in silent places.
From them, we learn the spirit of hard work, love for our country and never giving up. As students, we should study harder to make our country stronger. I hope China’s space program will have a brighter future and more young people will join this great career.
答案
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The Heroes Behind China’s Space Program
China’s space industry has developed very fast these years. Behind all the great successes, there are many heroes. They are scientists, engineers, workers and control team members. They work day and night to study new technologies, test spaceships, and make sure every task is safe and successful. They never ask for much but keep working hard in silent places.
From them, we learn the spirit of hard work, love for our country and never giving up. As students, we should study harder to make our country stronger. I hope China’s space program will have a brighter future and more young people will join this great career.
The Heroes Behind China’s Space Program
China’s space industry has developed very fast these years. Behind all the great successes, there are many heroes. They are scientists, engineers, workers and control team members. They work day and night to study new technologies, test spaceships, and make sure every task is safe and successful. They never ask for much but keep working hard in silent places.
From them, we learn the spirit of hard work, love for our country and never giving up. As students, we should study harder to make our country stronger. I hope China’s space program will have a brighter future and more young people will join this great career.
解析
【分析】本题为英语主题书面表达，需围绕“The Heroes Behind China’s Space Program”主题，依次完成四个内容要求：1.明确中国航天幕后英雄的身份（科学家、工程师、测控人员、技术工人等）；2.阐述他们的具体工作（钻研技术、测试飞船、保障任务安全等）；3.提炼可学习的精神（敬业、爱国、坚持不懈等）；4.表达对中国航天事业的美好愿望。写作时需控制词数在80左右，避免真实姓名和校名，语言简洁贴合主题。
【解析】写作时先点明中国航天事业的发展现状，引出幕后英雄群体；接着说明英雄们的工作内容与奉献；再阐述从他们身上学到的精神及自身做法；最后表达对中国航天的美好期许，确保覆盖所有要点，符合词数要求。
【答案】The Heroes Behind China’s Space Program
China’s space industry has developed very fast these years. Behind all the great successes, there are many heroes. They are scientists, engineers, workers and control team members. They work day and night to study new technologies, test spaceships, and make sure every task is safe and successful. They never ask for much but keep working hard in silent places.
From them, we learn the spirit of hard work, love for our country and never giving up. As students, we should study harder to make our country stronger. I hope China’s space program will have a brighter future and more young people will join this great career.
【知识点】英语书面表达、主题写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有内容提示要点，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，传递了积极的价值观，符合征文要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作时先点明中国航天事业的发展现状，引出幕后英雄群体；接着说明英雄们的工作内容与奉献；再阐述从他们身上学到的精神及自身做法；最后表达对中国航天的美好期许，确保覆盖所有要点，符合词数要求。
【答案】The Heroes Behind China’s Space Program
China’s space industry has developed very fast these years. Behind all the great successes, there are many heroes. They are scientists, engineers, workers and control team members. They work day and night to study new technologies, test spaceships, and make sure every task is safe and successful. They never ask for much but keep working hard in silent places.
From them, we learn the spirit of hard work, love for our country and never giving up. As students, we should study harder to make our country stronger. I hope China’s space program will have a brighter future and more young people will join this great career.
【知识点】英语书面表达、主题写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有内容提示要点，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，传递了积极的价值观，符合征文要求。
【难度系数】0.6
