经典例题
理性的人类应当深怀敬畏，敬畏自然，敬畏生命，实现人与自然和谐共生。作为观鸟俱乐部的一员，你将作为学生代表谈谈入会以来的所见、所闻、所感。请你根据要点提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
【要点】1. What kind of bird do you like best?
2. How do people get along with birds?
3. What problem are the birds facing?
4. What do you call people to do?
【注意】1. 词数90左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 包含要点内的所有内容，语言连贯，书写清晰。
3. 文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。
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My favourite bird is the red-crowned crane, with soft white feathers and a long thin neck. Most people are getting on well with birds now: they build birdhouses for them and work to protect their living areas. But some people still hunt birds for money, and more wetlands are turned into farmland or buildings. Birds are losing their homes and don't have enough food. I call on everyone to stop harming birds, and try our best to protect the environment to get along with nature well.

【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以观鸟俱乐部学生代表的身份写演讲稿，需覆盖四个要点：最喜欢的鸟、人与鸟的相处现状、鸟类面临的问题、发出呼吁。解题思路为：先选定常见的保护类鸟类（如丹顶鹤）并简单描述外形；再阐述当下人们对鸟类的保护行为；接着说明鸟类面临的生存危机（偷猎、栖息地减少）；最后发出保护鸟类、与自然和谐共处的呼吁，确保语言连贯、词数达标，不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 确定最喜欢的鸟类：选择丹顶鹤，描述其外形特征（soft white feathers, long thin neck）；
2. 阐述人与鸟的相处现状：说明人们的保护举措（build birdhouses, protect living areas）；
3. 说明鸟类面临的问题：指出偷猎（hunt for money）、栖息地被破坏（wetlands turned into farmland/buildings），导致失去家园和食物；
4. 发出呼吁：号召停止伤害鸟类，保护环境，与自然和谐共处；
5. 调整语句，确保连贯，控制词数在90左右，符合演讲稿语气。
【答案】
My favourite bird is the red-crowned crane, with soft white feathers and a long thin neck. Most people are getting on well with birds now: they build birdhouses for them and work to protect their living areas. But some people still hunt birds for money, and more wetlands are turned into farmland or buildings. Birds are losing their homes and don't have enough food. I call on everyone to stop harming birds, and try our best to protect the environment to get along with nature well.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点式英语写作、环境保护主题表达
【点评】
本题结合观鸟与环保主题，考查学生的英语应用文写作能力，要求紧扣给定要点，语言连贯得体，同时渗透环保意识，符合英语学科核心素养的培养要求，是常见的初中英语写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.5